1011 Lina

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The lecture casts several doubts on thestatement in the reading that the ban of smoking produces negative impact onpersonal rights, business. The professor argues by several points.
First, the professor argues that smokingis, obviously, harmful for non-smokers, thus ignores their personal rights,while the reading only places emphasis on that smoking bans influence smokers’personal rights. The smokers are allowed to smoke, as long as they do notaffect others.
Second, the professor points out that smokingbans indeed help smokers quit smoking, which smokers are only addicted to.
Third, contrast to the view in the readingthat smoking bans only exert negative impact on business, the lecture states,in another aspect, that the bars and restaurants seem to trend to attract morenon-smokers, who otherwise will stay at home to avoid the secondhand smoke.
Finally, the professor emphasizes thedangers of smoking on health, which is simply regarded as nothing in thereading. The professor argues that smoking leads to not only cancer, but alsoheart attacks. Actually, smokers have 40percents more of the risks to haveheart attacks.
Therefore, compared with the content inreading that smoking bans is unreasonable, the lecture is in favor of the bans.


Live in a small town or a big city?

Recently, there is a strange phenomenonthat a growing number of people in big city trend to move to small town, whilethe rural people enjoy moving to big city. No one may deny that a small townenjoys a peaceful, quiet environment, and the people there are so pure thatthey help each other not only for benefits. However, I am firmly convinced thata big city is better than a small town, due to the convenient access totremendous information, transportation, and more opportunities in job markets.
First, under no circumstance can we ignorethe importance of convenient, effective and fast access to information in a bigcity. Along with the development of economy, human beings have entered into theinformationization society, in which people can obtain useful information frominternet, television, cell phone, just name a few. For example, I went to asmall town last August, as a volunteer to teach children. The signals were tooweak there that I was not able to call my friends when I was on a mountainalone, which made me fell extremely scared. And when we gave speech in theschool, the lack of screen player led to the speech without video and PPT,which influenced the teaching quality. Therefore, people who have a betteraccess to gaining information enjoy advantages in education, daily life, andeven safety.
Second, the advanced transportation, like privatecars, subways, maglev, enables people to live more comfortably in a big city,while the overwhelming number of people in a small town seem to trend to goeverywhere by a dirty, small public bus. For example, now I live in Shanghai, I spend onehour to school by subway, otherwise it will take two and half hours by bus. Andlast week, my family went to Hangzhouby maglev, by which it only took twenty minutes. For sake of a fast,comfortable, modern transportation way, a big city is a perfect choice.
Finally, a big city offers a morecompetitive, energetic economical environment, which promotes people to learnmore and enjoy a better position in the job markets.
Thus, as what has been discussed above, wemay now safely draw the conclusion that compared with the conditions in a smalltown, a big city enjoys advantages in convenience in gaining information,transportation, and in providing with better job vocations. However, peoplestill should avoid some disadvantages, like profits motivated behaviors ordishonest.

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Recently, there is a strange phenomenonthat a growing number of people in big city trend(tend) to move to small town, whilethe rural people enjoy moving to big city. No one may deny that a small townenjoys a peaceful, quiet environment, and the people there are so pure thatthey help each other not only for benefits. However, I am firmly convinced thata big city is better than a small town, due to the convenient access totremendous information, transportation, and more opportunities in job markets.
- w+ w/ A  p1 s4 T6 |First, under no circumstance can we ignorethe importance of convenient, effective and fast access to information in a bigcity. Along with the development of economy, human beings have entered into theinformationization society, in which people can obtain useful information frominternet, television, cell phone, just name a few. For example, I went to asmall town last August, as a volunteer to teach children. The signals were tooweak there that I was not able to call my friends when I was on a mountainalone, which made me fell extremely scared. And when we gave speech in theschool, the lack of screen player led to the speech without video and PPT,which influenced the teaching quality. Therefore, people who have a betteraccess to gaining information enjoy advantages in education, daily life, andeven safety.
1 O  H" @3 h3 h* @  d9 B8 n1 USecond, the advanced transportation, like privatecars, subways, maglev, enables people to live more comfortably in a big city,while the overwhelming number of people in a small town seem to trend to goeverywhere by a dirty, small public bus. For example, now I live in Shanghai, I spend onehour to school by subway, otherwise it will take two and half hours by bus. Andlast week, my family went to Hangzhouby maglev, by which it only took twenty minutes. For sake of a fast,comfortable, modern transportation way, a big city is a perfect choice.
( l+ }; [2 ]* y6 H, G' A* V9 H% ZFinally, a big city offers a morecompetitive, energetic economical environment, which promotes people to learnmore and enjoy a better position in the job markets.
7 ?0 ~& o3 Q( s3 xThus, as what has been discussed above, wemay now safely draw the conclusion that compared with the conditions in a smalltown, a big city enjoys advantages in convenience in gaining information,transportation, and in providing with better job vocations. However, peoplestill should avoid some disadvantages, like profits motivated behaviors ordishonest.

文章句式用的不错，不过要注意单词和单词之间的空格，你好多都连上了没有分开......
另外，对于内容可以挖的更深一些~~~

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你的综合呢?

linaxu0123UID: 2925353

综合在独立的上面呀。。。。。

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1012 综合
In the lecture, the professor casts doubt on the benefits of globalization, which is said to bring about considerable advantages to the whole world in the reading. The professor argues by several view points. First, the professor states that the globalization benefits too much on advanced countries and the rich that the gag trends to be bigger and bigger, without doubts, not only between developed countries and developing countries, but also between the rich and the poor. As contrast, however, the reading argues that globalization enjoys tremendous advantages to promote the economies and job markets, which leads to a thriving development for poor countries. Second, from another aspect towards the reading, who insists that the globalization encourages the exchange of hi-technology, the professor point out that it also brings about the culture attack, which produces negative influence on a nation's native culture. For example, As the Chinese culture goes to France, the whole culture of the East Asia will be extremely changed, which is not wanted. Therefore, from these two points of view, the professor confidently draw the conclusion that globalization is not as perfect as people think.

自己感觉字数太少了，只有190个字。。。。。话说， 这个具体要多少字才算合适呢？~

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在 独立 的前面。。。。

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1012 独立： eat at home or out?

Recently, eating outside seems to become a symbol of fashion and high grade, while others are unfavorable of eating outside, which leads to wasting money and time. As far as I am concerned, I am firmly convinced that eating at home enjoys tremendous advantages, due to the lower costs, less time wasting and the happiness from cooking together with family members.
At the first place, under no circumstance should we ignore the low costs of eating at home. For example, I am a citizen in Shanghai, the average price of one dinner in a ordinary restaurant for one person is around fifteen yuan, contrasted with the average price for one person eating at home is merely six yuan, half of the price outside. Therefore, eating at home is really an obviously economical and wise idea.
At the second place, a growing number of people realize that eating at home, actually, prevent people from wasting time, though people just simply think the opposite way. Eating outside usually does not end with eating, but wandering, or going to the cinema, which takes more time, especially for the young people who enjoy fresh dishes directly by their mothers. For example, my sister, as an office lady in a company, used to eat at home and was able to finish the work in time. Unfortunately, she now eats outside everyday to improve the food quality. However, it turns out that she waste more time on searching for the places, the way to the restaurants and the activities after the meals. So, never could we deny that eating at home really save considerable time than people think.
Finally, the time cooking with family members or friends is always pleased with people. So busy are parents that they always complain about not having enough time accompanying with their children. Fortunately, cooking at home provides them with perfect opportunities to work together, and improve their relationship. A growing number of education experts are encouraging parents to take advantage of many festivals to make dumplings or make sandwiches for picnic.
From what has been discussed above, we can now safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of eating at home far overweigh the disadvantages, thanks to saving money, time and improving relationship among family members and friends. However, for some essential occasions like festivals or coming of distinguished gusts, eating outside shows the respect and content as well. Therefore, the combination of two ways is like the ice on the cake.

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1011修改 by ttuuttuu

Live in a small town or a big city?! L' \: Z9 ]/ `3 \/ Y) P8 [) M& V
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Recently, there is a strange phenomenonthat a growing number of people in big city trend to move to small town, whilethe rural people enjoy moving to big city. No one may deny that a small townenjoys a peaceful, quiet environment, and the people there are so pure thatthey help each other not only for benefits. However, I am firmly convinced thata big city is better than a small town, due to the convenient access totremendous information, transportation, and more opportunities in job markets.



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First, under no circumstance can we ignorethe importance of convenient, effective and fast access to information in a bigcity. Along with the development of economy, human beings have entered into theinformationization society, in which people can obtain useful information frominternet, television, cell phone, just name a few. For example, I went to asmall town last August, as a volunteer to teach children. The signals were tooweak there that I was not able to call my friends when I was on a mountainalone, which made me fell extremely scared. And when we gave speech in theschool, the lack of screen player led to the speech without video and PPT,which influenced the teaching quality. Therefore, people who have a betteraccess to gaining information enjoy advantages in education, daily life, andeven safety.
Second, the advanced transportation, like privatecars, subways, maglev, enables people to live more comfortably in a big city,while the overwhelming number of people in a small town seem to trend to goeverywhere by a dirty, small public bus. For example, now I live in Shanghai, I spend onehour to school by subway, otherwise it will take two and half hours by bus. Andlast week, my family went to Hangzhouby maglev, by which it only took twenty minutes. For sake of a fast,comfortable, modern transportation way, a big city is a perfect choice.


Finally, a big city offers a morecompetitive, energetic economical environment, which promotes people to learnmore and enjoy a better position in the job markets.  B6 J+ s0 W; p5 u4 ^$ c  p

Thus, as what has been discussed above, wemay now safely draw the conclusion that compared with the conditions in a smalltown, a big city enjoys advantages in convenience in gaining information,transportation, and in providing with better job vocations. However, peoplestill should avoid some disadvantages, like profits motivated behaviors ordishonest.


錯字太多了
寫的不錯~但第三點寫太少了~