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10.12 独立

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to us that either working or family is essential to our daily life. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning that working is more important to a person. However, there is still a group of individuals hold the opinion that family is more necessary. I, given that chance, believe the answer is yes and no.

Most of us would get an education over 10 years. What we want to do in the career is using the knowledge to make money or do some good for the society. Without working or doing some other subjects, the knowledge we learned would be useless. This is what we do not want to see in the future. Even many people have an ambition on setting up their own companies. This time, especially during young ages, working stands a more important point. It is a familiar situation that in China many young adults go to big cities such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, where has a high salary to make living. These individuals leave far away their hometown and families in order to have a better career. This kind of persons consider that working is more important than family.

However, there is no evidence who what to make a better career do not value their families. There is a data points out there are 3,700 RMB were sent to rural places per person during 2009 from cities on China Daily Newspaper, which stands an important income in rural places. Family is an important part of an individual’s life. Form birth, most of a person’s life is together with his parents, sisters, brothers, even children. When we are in trouble, even in dangerous, they help us, company with us and support us. No one could ignore this relationship. Even more, a person would die without his family. Therefore, family is more important than working.

To make a balance, no one would be happy without working or being with the family, both of the two factors consist of our life. So we could not say which is more important. Only consider and balance them, we could live a more meaning life.

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写的时候多留心细节，词汇句子变换些就更好了
个人认为第二个例子不太准确，光寄钱不能说明问题啊。