还有2天就考了……求拍一篇综合写作TPO-13，大家来瞄一眼

mildwaterUID: 2606507

我觉得你写的挺棒的哎~结构挺清晰的。就是有的句子貌似有点别扭，比如Besides, the professor also considers it unlikely to happen the idea in the passage that scientists will lose access to some of the most important fossils and thereby missing out potentially significant discoveries

I can understand what you convey. However, it is a little weird, especially the bold words I marked... 6# yjyhell6147

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8# mildwater

恩，的确是有点怪……我记得consider貌似有这样一个用法，但是我可能表达错了。算了还是保险点，不要用这个词了吧……