新人作文，望指点。还有过几天就考试能拿多少分啊。。。

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topic:    should the governments spend as much money as possible exploring outer space?
Some governments around the world are always competing with each other in the outer space fields and prove their power in the cutting-edge technology. But from my perspective, the evident way to prove that the country is developed is that the cizitens’ requirements have all already been achieved not the magnified and visual technology which can not benefit the people.
First of all, in modern society, under such a market economic system, although the fortune we have made is larger and larger, the number of people who live in poverty is also keep a high level. The government should attach greater importance to the guarantee of people basic needs as a result that the humen’s basic idea, humanities are equal, will really come true. the wealth which the high technology have made is almost in charge of the small group of policans, entropreners. For instance, citizens who live in the countries as a common farmer, will they mind that how much money the nation has generated last year? They only put a premium on the level of their basic material requirements, the education their children will recept. The government can not fulfill these needs, who are the people that the cutting-edge science and technology benefit.
Additionally, government can make a long sight decision that put priority to education which can provide the country numerous elites. Then the students who recept high standard of schooling gather around and make a decision of the way where the country will go along. If the government only pay attention on the exploration of outer space, the education will be left behind as a consequense that the technology can not keep and interpret. The exploration of outer space, which is long time process, should slow down and have a sustainable programme and plan. The country only be stronger with a excellent education not just some astronouts who have explored the outer space.
Each coin has two sides, the outer space also have many resources and the country can exploit first with the highest technology. The power of nation will be shown to others with the explorations which they can not even imagine resulting in the recoginization of other countries and more economical exchanges which mean a significant chance of improvement of the country.
Summerizing the points above, the government should exert on the citizens’ basic living, not the time consuming and money wasting outer space exploration. The individuals are in charge of the country, nation should think them first that they must live in a equal and abundant evironment.

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没人回额。。。我只是想问问大牛们能拿多少分额。。就说说意见吧，不求批改，主要心里太没底。

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3分吧或以上，还行

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3分是30的多少啊
3# 我爱english

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求大牛指点。。急

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没人问津额，我再发一篇吧。。。。
A image will always comes into our sight that people are easily divided into several groups and they will choose friends in their own groups. It can be easily understood that people like the similar companions who can understand them better and hold the same dreams. However, from my perspective, the friends who are different with me are more helpful and attractive due to their excellent personalities and skills which I do not have.
First of all, people can see the different personalities from people who are not similar as a result that they can learn and draw on. The phenomenon that people can not find the drawbacks of themselves can be attributed to their friends always have the same ones; therefore, people can only develop themselves from friends have distinctance.,especially from the friends who have the gap with them. Take me as an example, I once had a distinguished friend that who are honest and optimistic. when we was preparing for IBT, I always feel self-consious. He usually talked to me and let me keep happy and motivated. Through him I became more and more self-motivated and delligent so that I gain the courage to this test.
Additionally, the friends who have difference can make up their setbacks each other. As a group, the leader can not choose the same kind of workers because only combining their own advantages will guide the company to success. Individual makesfriends resulting in a team. Team grows into a big company. For instance, the team’s leader must be talent in guide and manage others and they often need not be adept in technology and market. The worker will provide the advices how to improve the productivity and augment the efficiency. How can we imagine a team having only leaders? It is vital that the friends getting together will collaberate with others and help others.
Despite the advantage of different friends, there are also some minor disadvantages. The friends with different qualities can not afford the understanding and always keep the different dreams in a remarkably gap. For example, the similar friends will easily get a harmony and fight with the same targets. The friends who are similar and have the similar experience can provide ecouragement better and deep into heart, but in my opinion, the different friends can stimulate individuals more positively.
In conclusion, the friends who hold distinctions can make up each others’ problems and lead to a long sighted improvement. And the outstanding personalities of others are the most important thing people can learn about.