求拍...求打击 issue 25

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Issue 25
Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction- in other words, to make things as simple as possible.
Outlines 1 经济，可以的发展使得事情越来越复杂，人类面临的问题也更加困难，牵扯到其他领域。 E.g 物理问题需要数学知识作为基础，金融也是。 人类克隆，涉及道德伦理。

2 把事情变得简单需要努力和勇气。 a 科技方面，手机电脑越来越小，功能越来越多 b 政治领域，政府处理应该尽可能把社会问题变小，给社会带来少的负面影响。 c 教育方面，老师把复杂知识用简单方式表达出来，是一种能力。


3 另外，简化是指合理简化，是建立在充分全面认识事情的基础之上。不可为了把事情弄简单，反而把事情本质变了。

The author makes a claim that anyone can make things bigger and more complex, but the opposite direction- making things as simple as possible needs real effort and courage. Obviously, one does not have to go very far to find the truth in this statement. In my observation, I fundamentally agree with the author, and we should simplify things in a proper way and to an appropriate level. To better present my viewpoint, let me illustrate it below.

To begin with, the development of economics and scientific technology indeed make things more complex and controversial, and the societal problems that humans are faced with are becoming increasingly difficult and hard to solve, even some problems are related with some other aspects. In the realm of science, it is well known that mathematics is the basic knowledge of some other subjects, such as physics, finance and etc. Nowadays, addressing a difficult problem of physics usually depends on the progress of mathematics, and the astronomy is a result of development of physics and mathematics. Besides, some issues are becoming increasingly controversial and complex. The example of human clone illustrates this point perfectly. Although some scientists want to study human clone, yet they cannot do it, because such research may cause some other problems in ethics and morality. Hence, we can see that as the society advances, the problems that humans are confronted with are becoming increasingly big and complex, which involes some other realms.

Secondly, it is undeniable that making things simple requires real effort and courage, no matter in which fields. On one hand, in the science fields, the innovations of computer and mobile phone cannot meet the needs of society and individuals, and many companies have been tried to make their electronic products smaller and easier to take for people. For instance, the Apple Company makes their computers small and delicate, which have more functions as well. On the other hand, in the political fields, government have been devoted to making social problems small and simple, in order to prevent them from producing negative influence on the community. Besides, in the education fields, it is an excellent and outstanding ability for teachers to make their complex courses and teaching simple, which helps students accept knowledge more efficient. Therefore, it requires real effort and courage to make things as simple as possible.

In addition, to make things as simple as possible does not mean making things to an endless level of simplicity, in which the nature of things may changes. Before simplifying things, one should have a profound and comprehensive understanding the whole matter, and make sure the innate character and basic key points do not change during the process of simplifying. Hence, people ought to make things simple in a proper way.

To summarize the issue, from the above discussion and analysis, we can see that things of current contemporary are becoming increasingly complex and controversial, and it is well accepted that making things as simple as possible requires real endeavor, determination and courage. Besides, one should simplify things in an appropriate way and assure the nature and key points of them do not change during this process.

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小女子求各位大侠改改