Daily Writing(作文特训小组)——mileschen2008

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2010-12-22  综合一篇（TPO6）:

哎，这次听力听了两遍才写的，晕死了。看样子听力一直是综合的痛啊，努力练好听力。

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2010-12-21  独立一篇：前面两天出去了，不在学校，落了两天。接下来一定要天天坚持。作文见附件，大家拍砖！！
mileschen2008 发表于 2010-12-21 18:46

好了，改好了！并回答了你的问题。

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21号修改独立
Basic science, including mathematics, physics, chemistry, astronomy, geography and biology, describes the most basic objects, forces, relations between them and laws governing them. Many people superficially deem that learn（learning） basic science is （a）waste of time and also is useless since it’s not directly related to the practical applications. However, basic science is the key premise of other fields and also instructive to our daily life.

To begin with, it's not waste of time to learn basic science since it's the key premise to the knowledge of other fields. Therefore, it's impossible to learn other knowledge without learning several sub disciplines of basic science. For instance, for a student of science and engineering, the prerequisite courses are mathematics, physics and chemistry. While for a student of liberal arts, the compulsory course is mathematics at least. {Although, the students are not need to learn completely all the knowledge of basic science, they do have to learn some basic knowledge of it, otherwise, it's no way for them to concentrate on their own field.}这个结论似乎没有实质内容作支撑，显得像车轱辘话来回说。读完后我还是不是很信服为什么要通过去学不相关的基础课来更专注于自己研究的领域？ Therefore, it's superficial for people with the thought that the university students should not take the basic science courses.

Furthermore, in spite of not directly related to the practical applications, basic science indirectly affects them. It can be simply admitted that all the applications somewhat have relation to basic science. For example, car, one of the most important modern life staples（我第一次见这个用法 呵呵 google之 更多的是life’s staple）, has much to do with basic science. We all know that the shape is related to mathematics, the motion is related to physics, the impetus is related to chemistry, the Global Positioning System of it is related to astronomy and the way the seats are designed is related to biology. In addition, the car should take the topography into account, which is related to geography. Hence, all university students should learn the knowledge of fundamental science since all the applications are indirectly related to it.

Besides, basic science, especially geography and biology, is useful to the daily life of individual. For example, we can know which way of life can make us healthy. It's common sense that we should sleep early and get up early. And also for a chubby person who wants to lose weight can make his or her own plan according to his or her own metabolism which is knowledge of biology. On the other hand, geography can guide the travel. For instance, if we want to climb the Himalayas（这个例子很有道理啦，不过我觉得要解释常识的必要，就要用人们经常会干的事情，谁会经常去爬喜马拉山嘛，不如改成要去高原旅游，哈哈我较真了，没大碍的其实）, where is lack of oxygen, it's better for us to take enough oxygen breathing apparatuses, otherwise we cannot imagine how terrible it would be. Thus, since basic science is instructive to our daily life, is there anyone can tell me why we should not learn the basic science courses.

Summarily, the influence of basic science is all around our daily life. Therefore, it's shallowly for someone who thinks it's not need to learn basic science knowledge. Instead, I deem that basic science should be defined as common sense, so I strongly agree that all university students should take basic science courses.

词汇量很丰富！！后两点论证也很充分。
一起努力

mingpjUID: 2716886

改好了

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1222综合 修改好

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2010-12-23  独立一篇：

又一篇关于电影的，思路比上次要开阔些了。但是我仍然需要一个小时才能完成作文，现在感慨需要的时间太多，如何加快写作的时间呢？大家提提建议啊。
本人现在处于初始阶段，准备作文大概10天的样子。

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弱弱地问 要怎样加入小组呢？

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22# 理科男
看下面这个帖子的详细介绍就行：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1140043&extra=&highlight=&page=1

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2010-12-23  独立一篇：

又一篇关于电影的，思路比上次要开阔些了。但是我仍然需要一个小时才能完成作文，现在感慨需要的时间太多，如何加快写作的时间呢？大家提提建议啊。
本人现在处于初始阶段，准备作文大概 ...
mileschen2008 发表于 2010-12-23 17:00

完成修改。12 23独立

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2010-12-24  综合一篇：

今天计划一定要完成的，但刚开始写的时候总是有点不快感，不想写。最后还是坚持了，哈哈，保持状态才是最好的。
还有今天好像不分组，希望写了的还有路过的帮我看看，提提建议，谢谢！
今天晚上T版上有活动，我也先预祝自己成功，no pains no gains, speed up!

mingpjUID: 2716886

我也写了但我没传 因为前天我看已经我一个人写了
不过你写的很好 ，全而且有文采

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2010-12-27   独立一篇：
这次的题目真的不好切题啊，都不知道自己是不是离题了，希望批改的人能够给我指出来。都花了1个小时+10分钟的时间才写完，纠结啊。

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2010-12-27   独立一篇：
这次的题目真的不好切题啊，都不知道自己是不是离题了，希望批改的人能够给我指出来。都花了1个小时+10分钟的时间才写完，纠结啊。






mileschen2008 发表于 2010-12-27 18:21

修改好了，改完你的，我又想了下我的，我真的不知道什么叫不跑题了，⊙﹏⊙b汗

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28# xiongcan818
恩，我觉得大家一起写一个题目，然后相互修改，互相讨论，非常好啊。这样提高很多，呵呵，而且我觉得挺有乐趣的

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2010-12-28  综合一篇：
阅读三分钟之内还做不到阅读完并完全做好笔记。听力总是第一次听得不好，然后要听两次才写。还有就是写的过程总是要将近30分钟。
想和大家讨论下怎么能够提高阅读和做笔记的速度，还有写作的速度。不知道大家有什么技巧没？？