camping writing by gamy, aim 25

gamyUID: 2748678

29# 冬咚宝


谢谢修改！~

gamyUID: 2748678

30# ifnoword

谢谢你认真的修改！~
majority 的确只是个名词，我那么用错了，谢谢指正！
表达太中国话，是因为总是觉得没什么写……特别想改变，要多记一些东西才可以……努力！

谢谢！希望可以快些进步……

JJohnnyyUID: 2991341

With the ever-accelerated development of science and technology, people`s life become increasingly complex. It is universally acknowledged that several events come together at the same time, all of which are essential and cannot be delayed. When this happens, do you prefer to finish a project completely then to start another one or to do several projects at a time? Some people insist that “Life likes a bow, sometimes tight and sometimes lose, or the brow will break” and believe problems should be conquered one by one, while others hold a definitely different attitude. From my point of view, on no account should we concentrate on single event at a time, especially the young people who are eagerly preparing themselves as a better future.

Initially, so great is our passion to success in this competitive society that we have to improve our capability to keep path（pace） with the development of economy. If we just focus on one project in an independent period, there is no denying that we will at the risk of losing considerable opportunities to be more successful. A small instance 加个which can throw some light on this point is about my cousin Catherine, a girl who is always careful on every tiny thing and does not confident enough to carry out several events at the same time. Once there was an excellent opportunity for her to host an international conference in her company, which was considerable cherish for young employees, however, Catherine refuted驳斥？ it just because she was working on a commercial project at that time. It was Tom who entered the company with Catherine in the same year took the responsibility and after the conference Tom was selected as the team leader while Catherine remained as a common employee.

Furthermore, when several projects were supervised by a person at the same time,（ they可以换成it吧）
cannot always lead to negative influence on others; actually they（it） can promote each other in majority（major） situations. Take myself for example, in my junior year, I was elected as the head of the student union, obviously, numerous of activities and various daily work needed to be handled, and as the leader of the National Undergraduate Innovation Experiment team, our research project was carried out at the same time. It was really challenging experience to harmonize these projects, however, after my serious cogitate（cogitation） I found the relative importance between them, the experimental skill competition held by the student union gave rise to significantly positive influence on my research and the interpersonal skills acquired from the student activities in turn improve my communication ability in the oral defense of the innovation experiment.


Admittedly, concentrating on single event, to some extend, can improve people`s efficiency and grantee the project to be more accurate？. However, carrying out several projects together can benefit us both time-saving and capability improvement. Weighting the pros and cons, to do several works at a time will never fail to be a safer and wiser choice.

In conclusion, for an ambitious people, it is essential to improve his or her capability and efficiency under this extreme competition, as a consequence, I definitely vote for the statement to do several projects at the same time.



还是写的好多呀。句子变化也很多。。。
就是个别有些不够准确，还有就是有的句子和词汇不够简洁。。。比如relative importance 是说相关的重要性？
总体还是很不错啦。。