单独题目：62

雨&彩虹UID: 132532

今天不是很舒服, 贴的晚点,不过总算坚持写完了.

62"The widespread idea that people should make self-improvement a primary goal in their lives is problematic because it assumes that people are intrinsically deficient."

这个题目我想可能哲学的东西多一点,就是说人类到底是不是有缺陷的,自我提高该不该作为人类追求的主要目标. 这是我写的为数不多的坚持一个观点的.那就是人类是有内在缺陷的.

首先:　从生理状况来说，人类是有不足的，在视力，体力，等各个方面，所以为了扩大视野人发明了望远镜，为了逃出地球引力，人们发明了飞机卫星．

其次：从人本质上来说，有很多的哲学家甚至报着悲观的思想，虽然我们不至于此，但是不可否认的是，局限在一定的时间空间中，人的远见性，自私性，贪婪性都是不可逃脱的．

第三：如果想题目作者说的那样, 认为人类没有内在缺陷,那么这种盲目自大, 会危害人和自然的和谐相处, 阻碍社会的进程.

只写这些了,还有没说到的地方,大家补充吧

雨&彩虹UID: 132532

大概写了一点东西,没有力气检查了. 有一些点还没有写到,供参考吧.
In this world, there is no perfect individual exists since people are more or less deficient and thus self-improvement has become a compelling goal in our lives. The speaker denied the concept that people are intrinsically deficient which make self-improvement unnecessary. This claim is dangerous since holding this belief risks to result completed blindness and egoism of human being, which will, surly hinder the progress of society.

Through out the history, endless examples reveal us the effort that human exerts over self-improvement, no matter as individual or as group members. Since the ancient times, our ancestor realize that human power seems trivial in sharp contrast to the unpredicted nature of natural catastrophe and disaster. Any attempt aiming at struggling with the nature with no regard of the natural law is doom to failure. Thus, numerous researcher and inventors or even ordinary people were obsessed by the idea that one day human being would be free from the bondage of their intrinsic deficiency. Realizing that it would be impossible for human being run as vigorously as leopard, they invent bicycle, cars and airplanes as efficient and speedy transportation means, which greatly change people’s life style and perception of the world. If we feel shamed the idea that human beings are intrinsically deficient as the speakers do, we would expect such a scenario in which people racing against leopard and spend their whole life switching from one place to another without too much meaningful things being done and problems being tackled. Realizing that human can not escape that gravity of earth, scientist use air shuttle, satellite to explore the outer space, and thus make it possible to predict whether, utilize space data to better analyze the future of earth, all of which contribute to increasing convenience of human life and security over natural disaster.

Moreover, apart form plumbing into this problem form a pure utilitarian perspective, we may see it from a philosophical point of view. Philosophers argue that human nature are naturally deficient since how able and sublime a person is, this is person is more or less blemished by selfishness, avarice and irrationality. Although it seems too cynical to hold pessimistic view about human nature, a clear and rational understanding will better improve a people’s morality and thus shape a more respectful individual. Returning to our daily life, it is not hard to name examples that those who deny their deficiency become alienated from this society where everybody attach great importance to self-improvement and anyone who blindly boast flawless will ultimately be threw to the backwater of history. Another perilous conception we should be aware of is that the title statement will result in the human’s arrogance over nature since they feel that man-made tools have almost made the conquering of nature an approaching victory not far from now while in my point of view, the wisest way is to co-live with nature harmoniously.

To sum up, I strongly disagree with the speaker’s claim since no matter from practical or ideological point of view, human being are intrinsically deficient. Our effort accumulated over the past centauries to free ourselves from various restraints justify that this deficiency is inescapable and self-improvement not only emancipate we from the chain of nature, but from the limit of dark side of human personality itself.

springyUID: 122511

楼主的逻辑性挺强的，分析真透彻。佩服ing!

springyUID: 122511

还可以说：任何进步都是源于人类认识到自己的不足，如果没有认识到不足，社会何能进步？

redcherry007UID: 123851

very good

雨&彩虹UID: 132532

谢谢了,谢谢THEWORLD给我挑出的毛病,

但是我身体一直不太好, 所以只是在最短时间内写出点东西给大家做思路上的参考.不是范文了.

所以希望大家有鉴别的看了,再次感谢.