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32. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.  



  Some people perfer to spend their money on a trip or some goods they are longing to have as soon as they earn it,while some others are likely to set them aside in case they may meet some trouble that can't be soleved unless they have enough money.To lead a steady life,i would like to save some money after i earning it.


  From my perspective,saving money is the best way to prevent someone from unpredictable accident.Take a news i have heard as a powerful example,a child was found that he have caught a serious heart disease,which will lead him to death unless he can recive an operation immediatly.But the surgery cost so much money that the child's father couldn't afford.Without any other choice,the father bought a gun and forced the doctor to have an operation for his son.This man was sent into prison after the operating,this kind of situation wouldn't happen if the father have saved some money for immediate using.


  When it comes to is equally important to go travel or buy something can cheer oneself up.Undeniable,travelling can broaden people's horizon and see some fansinate scenery.But setting money aside does not mean that you can't have a chance to have a trip or a vacation anymore.Permit me to make a simple calculation,supposing that having a trip will cost me ten thousand dollars,and i won't set off for the trip until i have got twenty thousand dollars.As a result,i can't go for a vacation without worrying any problem during the trip,since i have rest ten thousand dollars as my insurance if i meet something unexpected during the  trip.


  Because of the above reasons,we could safely draw a conclusion that is better to save money for some case will happen in the future.Is not a bad idea to use money in one's own purpose,but it is even more important to avoid the portential threat.




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