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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To make children do well at school, parents should limit the time children spend on watching tv and movies.

Now, more and more parents force on their children`s study, not only they compel children to learn all kinds of knowledge, including music, dance, art, sports, etc; but also they will limit the time children spend on amusing. Therefore, modern children have too much pressure to no place to relive, even they enjoy TV and movies, by which are controlled their parents. In my opinion, parents should give their children more time to develop their interesting, not parents` dreams. I will explain my view in next words.

First, parents limit the time children dominate by themselves that children have no time to relive, as result children will keep much too pressure to have good scores in study. In order to children having time to treat lives, please give them authority to use their time, in addition to helping them grow healthily. Children will collect much useful information in amusing time, meanwhile they should have good rest. Only have good spirit, just have success.

Second, parents limit the time children spend on watching TV and movies, for it makes children`s interesting be confined in a narrow range to loss their creativity. In the period of children, people have the strongest creativity, because there is no limit to their ideas. They will learn much knowledge when they watch TV and movies, these information will change their cognition about different things, extending their think of ways to discover new things. Once a child having a new idea, he will have a full of hope to find that secret behind its back, so human society will be proceeding all the time.

Third, if parents inspire children to comprehend the world, while blindly limit their time and interesting, children would achieve more confidence to face more difficulties. According to education experts, the best way that increases children growing is that parents show children their nice appraisement. If you have interest to trace a successful adult person`s child age, that must be full of inspiring and appraising.

In conclusion, I think parents must not limit children time spend on watching TV and movies or other these things. Give children some different choices, it`s best way to be useful their growing.

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点击下载修改的

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2# PsMaggie
非常感谢啊，可是我没看到你的文章呢？

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To make children do well at school, parents should limit the time children spend on watching tv and movies.8 {# R9 S& ~/ z5 _+ P- G

Now, more and more parents force on their children`s study, not only they compel children to learn all kinds of knowledge, including music, dance, art, sports, etc; but also they will limit the time children spend on amusing（建议改成amusement）. Therefore, modern children have too much pressure to no place to relive, even they enjoy TV and movies, by which are controlled their parents. In my opinion, parents should give their children more time to develop their interesting, not parents` dreams. I will explain my view in next words." H, F0 p% |9 T* A$ v

First, parents limit the time （加上that）children （加上should）dominate by themselves that children have no time to relive, as result children will keep much too pressure to have good scores in study. In order to children having time to treat lives, please give them（用please显得口语化了些哦） authority to use their time, in addition to helping them grow healthily. Children will collect much useful information in amusing time, meanwhile they should have good rest. Only have good spirit, just have success.

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Second, parents limit the time children spend on watching TV and movies, for it makes children`s interesting be confined in a narrow range to loss their creativity.（good！） In the period of children（改为childhood）, people have the strongest creativity, because there is no limit to their ideas. They will learn much knowledge when they watch TV and movies, these information will change their cognition about different things, extending their think of ways（改为ways of thinking) to discover new things. Once a child having a new idea, he will have a(改为be）full of hope to find that secret behind its back, so human society will be proceeding all the time.

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Third, if parents inspire children to comprehend the world, while（改为rather than） blindly limit their time and interesting（改为interests）, children would achieve more confidence to face more difficulties. According to education experts, the best way that increases children growing is that parents show children their nice appraisement. If you have interest to trace a successful adult person`s child age, that must be full of inspiring and appraising. ! j: H) @* a$ n* X; \" v( S1 v

In conclusion, I think parents must not limit children time spend（改为spent） on watching TV and movies or other these things. Give children some different choices, it`s best way to be useful（改为which is useful to）their growing.

文章的前两个论点挺好的，第三个论点似乎显得牵强（限制看电视和电影的时间就一定等于是批评了孩子，否定了孩子，没有给予他们赞同么。要是有的孩子不喜欢看电视呢？建议再加上一些论述，显得更严密些）
再就是语法错误还蛮多的，要注意下哦。（有什么改的不对的，多多交流哈~
一起加油！

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4# sun3may
非常感谢，实在抱歉，因为晚上有点事，没法及时给你修改作文，我马上给您修改，再次感谢！！

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2.23的独立写作，估计传的有些晚，由于最近比较忙，因为好多作文都错过了，实在抱歉，对不起大家了
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced from their teacher rather than their friends.

With our education keeping development, more and more students achieve a long time education from primary school to university. Thus, teacher and classmates act very important characters in their lives. Teacher, as a knowledge conductor, influences their idea, act, and speaking. On the other hand, students` friends act another role in lives that keep a company with them to increase a variety of amusement. Many people agree with the opining that students are most influenced from teacher, however, I will show some points to prove friends have more influence to them.

First, teacher always instructs knowledge to students being an authority, so students maybe feel a distance between them. In contrast, friends will give them more influence, since students and their friends have a more equal relationship, to make them have a fluent information exchange each other. Many teachers, in order to achieve students` aspect, play them to be district to command students to obey, which pushes them to remove from students, so if students have problems, they are easy to discuss with their friends, not teachers.

Besides, friends have more time than teachers with students together. Students always listen to teacher in class, but there is little time keeping a connecting with teachers when the class is over. In opposite that, students can learn knowledge in class with their friends together, but also could talk about some other things except studying, like their common interest, for example, which team will get the champion in NBA? Therefore, students will be influenced by friends in many areas, even habits, communicate manners and so on.

In addition, because of having the same age, students will face many same problems in studying or lives, even though there are some tiny differences, the solutions are contributed to the same way. They can distribute themselves` methods to others, and then find the best way and pass it to other friends, in this process, influence being constructed unconsciously.

In conclusion, friends` influence is more than teachers in students` lives. So, it is so important among them to build a coordinate relationship that will help them grow in healthy.
另外请哪位大神能讲解下如何上传附件呗？实在不想总这么往上粘贴，太麻烦了~~谢谢各位了

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2.28 独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lose of old friends?: H# r5 Z' Z, c

With economics developing, people`s job changing become so frequently, that they are more difficult to stay a city for a long time. This is a great influence to people`s lives, for example they couldn`t keep company with their friends. Then, some people say moving to a new city is not a good thing because of losing their friends. But, in my point of view, it`s not a bad thing, since they won`t lose their friends just because of they leaving. I will show three points to approve this purpose, next.

In my opining, the first point is, though people leave from a city to another, they can connect to their friends by many modern tools. Information Technologic developing which is to cut down the distance between people has a great of contribution, so wherever people walk, they can talk to their friends by a mobil phone, transfer important files by Internet, and achieve a precious wish by Email. IT can help persons relate their friends no confined by time and place, just depending on your desire.

Next, transport condition is keeping quickly developing, which abbreviates the time to travel between two cities. If people want to go to another city, it takes a long time and is a really uncomfortable process, however now, better transport condition brings shorter time and more comfortable experience. Once you will join a party with your friend in another city, it just waste you a nap, you will present beside your friend.

Besides those, when people move to a new environment, they have a chance to get to know new friends. Those old friends are one step to another, finely being familiar from new friends. This does not help person fast join a new surrounding, but also it expands the range of persons` communication. At last, people don`t lose their old friends, as well as get new friends and new lives.

In conclusion, it is not a terrible condition to move a new city, for people won`t miss their old friends, while they will meet some new faces.