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发表于 2011-3-13 18:04:39 |显示全部楼层

attending class:required or optional?

It is widely acknowledged that college students should be required to attend every class because it is the only way for them to achieve high score in studying. In fact, however, it is highly possible that if students are given the right to choose their own curriculum, they can study more effectively and pursue their studies to the best of their abilities

Firstly, different students have different interests or motivations in studying. For example, some students prefer to learn literature, if school forces them to select math, they will not only feel bored in math class, but also cannot concentrate on literature and think about some problems in art thoroughly. Some students want to develop their social skills to find good jobs after graduation, so they need to spend more time in students union, which in turn leaves them less time to study. Generally speaking, if students can decide whether to attend classes or not, they can organize their time better.

Additionally, some students find it difficult to concentrate in large lecture classes and find reading quietly a more effective way of studying. If a student can achieve more by reading in the library or meeting with a professor in office hours than attend every class, he should not be prevented from studying in the most effective way for him.

Last but not the least, the most important measure of a college students academic progress is test. In the weeks before exam, students need to arrange their own schedule becomes critical. For instance, a boy who is good at math but poor at English, has to take both tests at a time .If he is required to take every class in math, he may not have enough time to prepare for the English test, besides what the teacher teaches in math class is so easy for him that he do not need to spend that much time studying math. As a result, he may fail the English test. However, if he is free to skip the math class, he can have more time to study English and perform excellently at both tests.


In nutshell, although universities are responsible for making a curriculum to meet every students need, but every students requirement is different, it is impossible for universities to apply one single curriculum to all. In my view, the best way to solve this problem is to trust the students can make choices to their best interests, and to use test as the final criteria of academic excellence.

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发表于 2011-3-14 22:58:10 |显示全部楼层
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Nowadays, our consumer markets are filled with a great variety of products, ranging from goods made in china to imported commodities. People can pick up more kinds of products now than before. Some people like to buy goods imported from other countries, while some people prefer to purchase these commodities made in their own country, no matter how high prices are. As far as I am concerned, my choice depends on whether the expensive products made in my own country have higher quality than the same things made in foreign countries.

If the product's quality is higher in my country, I will buy the product without any hesitation. For one thing, high quality products can be used in a long time, buying high quality good can save my trouble to change the old for a new one. For another thing, buying expensive but high quality products produced in my own country is a way to support the development of the industries who manufacture these kinds of products. In this way, these manufacturers can enlarge the production of these commodities to cut down the costs. Finally, we can consume products made in my own country which are not only cheaper but also enjoy higher quality.

If the products made in my own country are of poor quality, I had better not buy these products. For example, once I bought a computer whose brand is lenovo, the computer is very expensive but its quality is so poor that it often breaks down. Although I have paid more for a computer which is made in my own country, I always have trouble in using my computer and I have to spend extra money mending my computer. One of my friends bought an imported computer which is cheaper and of higher quality than mine, she can use her computer more easily and save a lot of trouble to fix it.

All in all, If the products made in my own country are higher in price and of better quality, I think it is worth to buy these products and at the same time I can make a contribution to the development of industries in my own country. If the products are in poor quality, I will not buy these products, only in this way these manufacturers can improve their quality to meet the customers' requirement and increase their sell volume.

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发表于 2011-3-17 22:04:48 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-3-19 23:24:03 |显示全部楼层
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What contributes to success is a controversial issue that different people have different opinions. Some people hold the view that someone who is similar to others is more likely to become success. However, I strongly oppose this argument. In my perspective, someone who is distinctive is prone to become success someday.

In the first place, the distinctive persons are creative, which means they can do something that other people can not imagine. For example, Mark Zuckerberg, the youngest millionaire, set up facebook when he was in Harvard University. At that time, people only use computer to work or study and regard computer as a tool. They have no idea what else the computer or the network can do, but Mark Zuckerberg has planned to build a social platform for college students to make friends or even find girlfriends or boyfriends through the Internet. Although he encountered much trouble and even dropped school, he succeeded to set up the most influential social network which has changed my way of communicating with friends.

Additionally, people who are different from others dare to do something that other people may be afraid of. Challenging the impossible task is a way for people to success. In order to success, these people have to work hard to achieve their goals which seem too hard to reach. However, when they strive to reach their goals, they have leaned more things to help them become success.

At last, someone who owns distinctive characters can stand out from others, which can make him/her easier to success. Yao Cheng, who is a famous Chinese actress, is not as attractive as other actresses, but she wins a wide acceptance from audience .In my view, the most important reason for her to success is that she has a big mouth which makes her look different from others and she is good at showing her special character when she plays a role.

In conclusion, if someone wants to success, he/she needs to prove his/her specialty. Only in this way can one make contribution to the development of our society. What's more, people with special characters leave deep impression on others, which I think can assist him/her to succeed in the long term.

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发表于 2011-3-20 08:34:03 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-3-20 15:17:00 |显示全部楼层
写的很好,加油! 独立_0319latte.doc (30.5 KB, 下载次数: 7)
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发表于 2011-3-21 09:22:05 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-3-21 22:16:38 |显示全部楼层
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As the development of our society, people suddenly find out that their life becomes more complex. In order to make all the daily activities run smoothly, people should learn to organize their life. As far as I am concerned, this idea is especially suitable for young people for the following reasons.


Firstly, I am a college student; I need to make a daily schedule to organize my school time properly. Ten years ago, university students in china only have to focus on their own majors. But now our life is more complicated .Take my self for example, besides learning the subjects of my major, I have to learn foreign language, which help me to become a talent with international horizon. What's more, I have to learn some computer skills, which assists me in finding a good job as well as keeping pace with the development of technology. During all my school life, I have to consider all the above things, so I think it is critical for me to organize my daily life.


Secondly, for all the white collars in our society, they have to handle many fairs associated with their daily life. For example, they have to work hard to get promotion opportunities. Furthermore, they have to communicate with their colleagues and their boss. So it is important for them to develop a high communicational skill. All of the things I listed cost these young white collars much time. Thus, they have to cultivate organizational skills.


Last but not the least, our society are becoming increasing competitive, the best way for them to stand out from others is to make use of time efficiently. Only by cultivating the habitat of planning and the ability of organizing, young people can handle their time properly and thus achieve their goals in an easier way .One of my friend Lana is the top students in my class. However I seldom see her stay up at night to read books, besides she takes an active part in the activities of my class. The reason for her to act excellently in both areas is that she is good at planning and organizing her own time.


In conclusion, no matter whether young people want to study well, work well or become success someday, they should learn the ability of planning. Only in this way can young people live their daily life smoothly and achieve their goals in this competitive world.

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发表于 2011-3-22 23:05:33 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-4-7 12:36:32 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2011-4-7 15:55:42 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-4-7 18:49:18 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-4-10 16:44:28 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-4-10 22:03:46 |显示全部楼层
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