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发表于 2011-4-4 14:30:03 |显示全部楼层
我是真杯具帝啊。。。3.30居然只有自己写了综合。。。= =

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发表于 2011-4-4 15:21:25 |显示全部楼层
4.4独立

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发表于 2011-4-5 09:55:22 |显示全部楼层
改好了

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我在生活的风雨里,撑着名叫希望的伞

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发表于 2011-4-5 20:05:48 |显示全部楼层
4.5独立
写得机经。。。这这题目太变态了。。。= =

好心的修改同学给点灵感呗~谢谢啦~~

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发表于 2011-4-5 22:29:26 |显示全部楼层
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不好意思,来晚了,4.4修改见附件

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Trust your talents and interest. No worries.

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发表于 2011-4-6 17:16:38 |显示全部楼层
独立改好了,没给什么有建设性的意见,因为你写的跟我之前写的太像了,跟在改自己的作文似的

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发表于 2011-4-6 18:27:34 |显示全部楼层
改好了~~

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发表于 2011-4-6 23:36:16 |显示全部楼层
4.6独立
写得机经,麻烦修改的同学了~

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发表于 2011-4-7 15:40:27 |显示全部楼层
4.6独立~
改好了~

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发表于 2011-4-8 12:10:42 |显示全部楼层
4.6修改

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发表于 2011-5-12 01:07:39 |显示全部楼层
5.11 独立

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发表于 2011-5-12 01:08:38 |显示全部楼层
5.11 TPO1 综合

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发表于 2011-5-12 13:38:05 |显示全部楼层
5.11独立批改

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发表于 2011-5-12 13:57:03 |显示全部楼层
5.11  独立修改好了!   27# aurora0624

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You are what you do !

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发表于 2011-5-12 16:09:48 |显示全部楼层
In the listening material, the professor is strongly questioned the opinion expressed in the reading material that the company, economy and employees will benefit a lot if the employees can work a four-day week by providing further evidence.

Contrary to the point in the reading that the company's profit would increase if the staffs only work four days a week, because the workers may make fewer mistakes as they are more alert and rested and hiring more staff does not enrolling more cost as only 80% of the salary need to be paid. The speaker states that the company will definitely spend more in doing so, as a result of paying more in training new employees and health benefits, together with offering more office spaces and computers.

According to the lecture, this option will not absolutely causes more employment rate as the company might choose to make its staff to work overtime or expect them to do the same amount of workloads as they do in(when) working five days a week, which refutes the point illustrates in the reading.

In the listening, the speaker says that four-days workweek may finally lead to reduce quality of life.For instance, those employees may firstly lose their jobs when the economy is desperate as a consequence of being decreased in job debilities in working, (不明白这句话)and they may pass over the promotion as the employers prefer the manager who can cover and supervise for the whole week rather than only four days.
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You are what you do !

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