5月1日 作文

美丽小黑你UID: 3057440

第一次写，组里好像也没什么人写作文了，可惜来晚了啊！
自己写，有好心人再互相看看吧！
Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.


In such a challenging society, it seems quite difficult for us to make a decision about what we should do: relax and enjoy the happy life? Or skip into society and fight for our own place? Although a still life is qiute attracting, fighting and working ought to be regarded as a matter of most importance.
   Some people feel satisfied and are determined to live a quiet and happy life, by fishing or playing cards to pass the time. There is no worry about money and further life which disturb everybody a lot. Living such a life can present us a good mood ,and a good mood would do good to our health.
  However, undoubtly, people live in society for a better life.We humans have to work. For the first reason, I think challenge is the basic thing one has to face in this world.No challenge, no progress. Such principle is emphasized a lot more in today's society.Life is not as soft and calm as a light breeze in spring days, and risks are inevitable. Without risks and challenge, we can no longer dig out what a great person we are and what the things at the hell can we do.How can Jet Li beat every challenger and become a suparstar without persistence and somewhat painful training? And how can Chairman Mao make the correct guide to Chinese revolution without consideration day after night? And for the second reason, I think that it is constant working that provides ue enough money, and even more, to keep a happy and wonderful life. Without working, leading a  satisfactory life  seems virtual. In addition to what I have mentioned above, I think that more money is a symbol of one's status, which determines others' view to a certain person, to a certain degree.
   To make a conclusion, more work and more money is the core mission for modern people, as we are living in such a competitive world. Comfortable life also lies in it, so please, no more relax. Challenge is the only thing we have to work against.

bent2088UID: 2964032

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qianhuangUID: 2766587

5月1日 独立 修改

美丽小黑你UID: 3057440

不好意思啊盆友我这几天没来寄托，刚刚才一个激灵秒见你的作文啊！

失敬失敬

马上改好，请不要着急哦！

美丽小黑你UID: 3057440

不知道我这水平改作文到底行不行。。。。
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美丽小黑你UID: 3057440

恩。。。我有个疑问，你的作文时到哪里结束啊？
很多横线划掉的那部分也是吗？

qianhuangUID: 2766587

你要改的是我的这篇作文
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1236487-6-1.html
60楼
我发在你帖子上的是修改你的作文。而且你在你帖子上说话，我怎么知道！！拜托！谢谢。