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People attend college or university for many different reasons.
Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I think people attend college for many reasons, they choose to broaden horizon and obtain more knowledge in this way, and some people come to learn about working methods at the same time. People have various reasons to attend college, and the most important thing is to improve oneself by learning in an advanced university.
University learning has a significant meaning to a person’s knowledge and life experience. A university provides enough chance to practice capacities in self-learning, as well as in working with other people. Most of the students choose to learn more knowledge about their major and their interest, for they can learn what they like to learn in college, not in high school, and they can learn deeper in their own career, in order to make a good plan for their future job. In college, students have the chance to listen to different teachers’ class, and some of the teachers are probably quite famous, or are well-cultivated in the career. It can be very helpful for students to gain the correct and advanced learning method from these teachers’ classes. Not only can they get to know the specific learning methods, but also get inspired by their teachers’ hard working for the major.
However, some people choose to establish their own career by taking advantage of the guiding employment mechanisms in college, by which students can get the opportunity to become self-employed, or get some advice about business management. By attending employment training, and competing in employment contests, they would gain more information about the current working market, and get a rough devisal of working scopes.
Meanwhile, attending college club activities helps us meet more new friends and get work experience, which can fulfill our spare time and make us relax. In college, jobs of assistance for teachers are available. By getting closer touch with teachers, we can gain a more general understanding of the school.
Whether or not, it is necessary for one person to enter college for improvement, psychologically and virtually.

美丽小黑你UID: 3057440

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