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本帖最后由 MDallas 于 2011-5-20 22:07 编辑

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


In the current society, well-known athletes live a more affluent life than people who work in other important fields. This can be rather debatable and people’s opinions vary dramatically from each other.

Some people hold the recognition that famous athletes deserve the numerous income. Because it is through the way in which diligent and hard-working sports players earn their share on their own. Meanwhile the public often aware the huge amount of money that athletes get but rarely concern that the considerably amount of salaries is based on sacrificing the time which is intended to spend with their families. What’s more, famous athletes, in many cases, not only play a key role in sports, but they have significant implications to our society as well. It can be rather beneficial to nurturing the adolescents when the athletes set excellent examples for them, which is regarded as another reason that athletes deserve their huge income.

Conversely, others argue that athletes being that affluent is definitely unfair. As is known to all that our contemporary society needs various professions. While sport is, as these people might think, only a game in terms of its essence. In addition, every profession has its unique use to the society whereas not in all professions can people get the profit as much as in the area of sports. This can then in way confuse the public by leading them to think whether it is worth doing their current jobs, which might cause problems of jealousy, crime etc.

By way of conclusion, different people’s ideas differentiate significantly towards this issue. So far as I am concerned, the public should focus on what they should do and their own profession, but not pay much attention to other’s wealth. Especially those who get salaries through their own diligence. In all, it is not the wealth you own but the contributions you can make to the society that really concerns.
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