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In general, discussing problems with telephone or voice-messaging gained from humans has a wide range than use email or text messaging.We now live in a word that communication ways is no longer exorbitant, and that printed talk available.On upsetting or controversial problems,e mail could perform nearly everything only if the person have acuquired basic skills like writing.Unlike the though of an individual that is limited by the action of voice of that individial.E-mails seem to have almost no limitation.


In general, challenge dream gained more attention from humans has a wide range than real dream.We now live in a world society is no longer fall behind , and that printed that the strengthen of dreams plays an important role in our life and work .In reality, people who has challenge dream could make dream come ture only if he have acquired the strengthen which is bought by challenge.Unlike the thought of an reality individual that is limited by the range of that individual.The person who has challenge dream have almost no limitation.

In general, practical scientific researsh gained attention from government has a wider range than scientific research which is no pratical use.We now live in a world that science and technology is no longer fall behind ,and that printed scientific plays an important role in our life and work.In fact,practical scientific research will not be success only if it has a basement of fundation scientific research.Unlike the use of practical scientific research that is limited by the range of that research purpose .Fundation scientific research seem to have almost no reality sense.


In general, the high school education gained attention from society has a wider range than others.We now live in a world that financial condition is no longer fall behind,and that printed economy plays an important role in our life and work and develops problems.In reality, high school student will not to understand  what happened only if they have acquired basic economics course.Unlike the thought of an worker that is limited by the range of that worker .High school students seem to have more comprehending and feelings.


People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.
In general,a group gained attention from success has a wider range than individual.We now live in a world that society is no longer closed,and that printed communication availiable.In teams,members could talk about nearly everything only if the have made a common view.Unlike the thought of an indivial that is limited by the range of that individual.Tearmwork seem to have more limitation.


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