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7月18日独立 Do you agree with the following statement? In a team, those who do not accept others' criticism cannot
succeed.


Almost everyone is fond of being praised, while few would like to be criticized. However, as we all know " the critics are our best friends, for the reason that they point out our mistakes". Thus, I have to admit that accepting other's criticism is vitally important in order to obtain one's goal in a team.

As the saying goes "the brightest of all things, the sun, has its spot." That is to say, we always make mistakes now and then for the reason that we can not take everything into account. While others may point out our mistakes or deficiencies. Once we decline the criticism of the others, it is possible that we may suffer a lot, such as money, more chances, even the whole market.Consider for example,when we are in a team, every decision we make is intimately related to the benefits of the whole team. Chairman Mao declined the proposal that we, chinese should pay attention to limit the population, which is suggested by Ma Yinchu. As a result, the population of China is one of the greatest in the world which slows down the space of development.  In contrast, if we accept it, we can correct the mistake or compensate for the deficiency, which will help us get rid of the plight, or at least help us reduce the losses to the lowest.

However, it does not simply mean that those who refuse to accept other's criticism are doomed to lose. As far as I am concerned, whether people can succeed or not rest on various factors, for example, favorable situation, the ability of those people, the fortune and so forth. It is possible that we can succeed even though it is much more difficult than accepting other's criticism. Marcel Duchamp, refuse to accept the criticism of other artist in his time, but he becomes one of the most important founder of Modern art. Thus, we can not say that those who do not accept other's criticism can not succeed merely by our subjectively suppostition.

All in all then, we should learn to make decisions in the light of various situation. It is true that accepting other's criticism would lay foundation to obtaining the success. However, we should take all the other factors that contribute to the success.

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综合 7月18


The lecturer talks about that whether wood companies in the United States will try to meet high ecological standards or not. He argues that wood companies in the United States will make an effort to be ecocertificately which is greatly different from what have been said in the reading passage.

First of all, American consumer becomes increasingly value the ecocertification label. That is to say American consumers realize the importance of the sustainable forestry, which as result will lead them to be interested in wood products with ecocertification. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

In addition, there is no accurate evidence to prove that American consumer will not by the ecocertified wood because of its high price. Study shows that consumers will choose the cheaper one without hesitation only when one price is much higher or lower that the other. However, the balance between ecocertified wood and uncertified wood is less than 20 percent, which means that consumers may choose ecocertifed wood in spite of its higher price. This is another part that contradicts with the reading passage.

What is more, ecocertification would value a lot when there is foreign competition instead of foreign companies. If American companies do not catch those opportunities in time, foreign companies would crowd and occupy the leading position in the United States. It is a great different from the passage.

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综合 7月18


The lecturer talks about that whether wood companies in the United States will try to meet high ecological standards or not. He argues that wood companies in the United States will mak ...
幕阳素素 发表于 2011-7-18 21:11

The lecturer talks about that whether wood companies in the United States will try to meet high ecological standards or not. He argues that wood companies in the United States will make an effort to be ecocertificately which is greatly different from what have been said in the reading passage.

First of all,  ecocertification are becoming more and more valued by American consumers. That is to say the importance of the sustainable forestry are being realized, which will result in an increasing interest in wood products with ecocertification by American consumers. This diametrically
contradicts what the passage indicates.
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In addition, there is no accurate evidence to prove that American consumer will not buy the ecocertified wood because of its high price. A study shows that consumers will choose the cheaper one without hesitation only when one price is much higher or lower than the other. However, the difference between prices of ecocertified wood and uncertified wood is less than 20 percent, which means that consumers may choose ecocertifed wood in spite of its higher price. This is another part that contradicts the passage.(去掉with和reading)
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What's(习惯上倾向于这样写) more, ecocertification would be highly valued when there is international competition with foreign companies. If American companies do not catch those opportunities in time, foreign companies would occupy the leading position in the United States.

可以总结一下

水平有限，改得不好，请见谅哈

theflyfishUID: 2101420

改好了。例子用的很有特点，学习了。

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1# 幕阳素素 改好了

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7月21 独立加综合

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7月21日综合

没什么问题。加油

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7月23独立加综合

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Do you agree with the following statement? If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, using e-mail/text messaging is better than using telephone/voice-messaging.

We may feel bored with something now and then, we may be bothered by some complex problems, we may be disturbed by certain circumstance. So we need to discuss with our friends, our tutors and so forth. However, whether we should us e-mail, text massage or telephone, voice-messaging? In my opinion, e-mail, text message is much better than talking about it orally.

Firstly of all, if I am in a puzzle, I would have difficult to express what I really want to say clearly. For example, last summer, I was surprised that my average GPA was too low, which beyond my imagination. I attempted to check my paper, but I failed since I can not put my thought in to plain language. Then I wrote an e-mail to my professor to show my situation. As a result, my paper was checked, it is the professor that made a mistake. All I want say is that when I am confronted with a dodge problem, the best way to discuss with others is using e-mail or text message instead of using telephone or voice-messaging.

In addition, as we all know, everyone is engaged in his own affairs. Thus, we may add them a sea of trouble if we call them in inappropriate time. For example, it is possible that your friends are right in a conference when you call them to help you deal with something puzzling. Definitely, their hard image may be destroyed by you or even degraded. However, if you send them a message, such unpleasant possibilities would be avoided. They could discuss the problem with you whenever they are free. That is to say using e-mail or text-messaging is more flexible, and we need not worry too much about whether we would bother others.

However, it does simply mean that using telephone or voice-messaging is not as important as e-mail or text message. For some people they are much more convenience and practice for the reason that it does not need to much time to talk with others orally. What’s more, you don’t have to organize words which is required if you choose to express by e-mail or text-messaging. But for my using e-mail is much better.

All in all then, I believe using e-mail is a better choice than using telephone with respect to me.

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done。。O(∩_∩)O
我的在这。。
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chair020928UID: 2956418

We may feel bored with something now and then, we may be bothered by some complex problems, we may be disturbed by certain circumstance. So we need to discuss with our friends, our tutors and so forth. However, whether we should（should we 疑问句吧？） use-mail, text massage or telephone, voice-messaging? （which one should we fall back on,using…or using …?这样会不会好点）In my opinion, e-mail, text message is much better than talking about it orally..
/ b7 }) b6 L, d: |) h9 u- ?0 kFirstly of all（first of all）, if I am in a puzzle, I would have difficult(difficulty) to express what I really want to say clearly（应该去掉clearly吧？挺重复的）. For example, last summer, I was surprised that my average GPA was too low（用 too low to beyond my imagination）, which beyond my imagination. I attempted to check my paper, but I(前面主语一样，可以省略) failed since I can not put my thought in to plain language. Then I wrote an e-mail to my professor to show my situation. As a result, my paper was checked, it is the professor that made a mistake. All I want to say is that when I am confronted with a dodge problem, the best way to discuss with others is using e-mail or text message instead of using telephone or voice-messaging. % p" I  U3 y Z
In addition, as we all know, everyone is engaged in his own affairs. Thus, we may add them a sea of trouble if we call them in inappropriate time. For example, it is possible that your friends are right in a conference when you call them to help you deal with something puzzling. Definitely, their hard image may be destroyed by you or even degraded. However, if you send them a message, such unpleasant possibilities would be avoided. They could discuss the problem with you whenever they are free. That is to say using e-mail or text-messaging is more flexible, and we need not worry too much about whether we would bother others.! J5 W6 o7 j6 {) l7 d8 Q0 Q- ~$ M
However, it does simply mean that using telephone or voice-messaging is not as important as e-mail or text message. For some people they are much more convenience （是不是应该用adj，？convenient）and practical for the reason that it does not need to much time to talk with others orally. What’s more, you don’t have to organize words which is required if you choose to express by e-mail or text-messaging. But for(me) my using e-mail is much better.
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/ F' R3 F5 G& ~+ mAll in all then, I believe using e-mail is a better choice than using telephone with respect to me(是不是有点重复).

10# jackchen823

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