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9/11/2009
Do you agree with the following statement?
It is only worth watching movies that canteach us something about real life?
Movies, presenting everything to you in astraightforward form, play a significant role that can provide us experiences inour social life (social life? 社会生活?还有其他life?), reflect miscellaneous historical senes (拼写), tell afairy tale and give us sufficient fantasy about the future (拼写). (这句话有很严重的问题,role可以provide,reflect, tell and give 吗?注意语言表达的意思。play a role in our live that can…) Thus, we can hardly choose whichmovie we deserve to watch, as they all offer disparate informations(信息没有复数形式)that we need.
偏题了,题目问的是是不是应该只看有对现实生活有教育意义的电影。你的回答是因为电影能给我们各种我们在生活中需要的信息,所以无法选择。没有讲题目叫你区分的东西区分开。
Admittedly, integrant movies relate andreflect reality in our current socity (拼写), reminding us thequalities (characteristics) we should have. (movies, related and reflectedreality in our society, reminds us…) Forrest Gump, a movie which descibes (拼写) a manacted by famous star Tom Hanks only have(has) IQ of 75 and deformed legs whenhe was young, is inspring(拼写) us. Although he suffered from these(this) unfair destiny, hisoptimistic and fortitude spirit colored his life which include being a shiningmember of football team in campus(on campus), being a hero who saved peoplelives in Vietnam War, being an ambassador representing the USA to join in thePingpong competition in China and so on. As all the things he get through, hehas a cathching (拼写)phrase that life is like a bottle of chocalate(拼写), and younever know what you are going to get.
However, some movies are delectable for theeyes and other sensations. At the first glance, you would impress by themagnificant(拼写) scene in three-dimension, four-dimension and IMAX. That’s why youlike the series of Transformers, isn’t it? Hot and Sexy Magan Fox, imposing“blownup” in the battle scenes, and the moment that the autobots tansformdazzle the eyes. We pay our tickets to appreciate these, and it bears watching.
这个角度是可以的,但是应该换一个更好的例子,比如说变形金刚/星球大战里的打斗场面,就不要说Fox了吧。
Moreover, it ls absolutely true that peoplenowadays undergo great pressure that come from various directions, includingwork, school, economy and so forth. Investigation shows that we should releasepressure in appropriate ways, such as watching comedy movies. Kungfu Pandateaches us no more than(应该是more than吧) that the good will always defeat the evil or you can success ifyou really do your best. Whereas, it is fun that Po, the panda do Kungfu, dosome cute movements and say something entertaining. Funny movies provide atemporary escape for the views who may be tired because of either high-pacejobs or heavy study tasks. When it comes to reliving stress, noting is betterthan big langhs(拼写).
In summary, there are multifarious movieswhich bring us experience in real life, visual impact and happiness aredefinitely worth to watch. Only through watching, can we enjoy all the taste ofmovies, not only about teaching us in the real life.
感觉你的语言很多都是通过中文在词典中翻译过来的,用法非常的不地道,有很多搭配不当。很多词语我也一时找不出非常合适的说法,需要平时多注意。建议先改语法错误,结构上的问题先不说了。 |
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