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It iscommonly believed that parents are the people who understand their children themost. For the reason that children spend the most time with their parents. However,the fast is that parents do not understand their children in modern days.
To beginwith, with the increasingly drastic competition around the whole world, thestudents , at the same time, are suffering more and more stress when in school.As a result, the span of time that be together with their parents would be obviouslydecreasing. For instance, college students suffer a hard time finding a jobwith decent wage, even it is impossible for a new graduate find a positionwhich can support theirselves. Such phenomenon is so prevalent, although thenation has numerous benefit for the graduates.
Secondly,not only their children, but also the parents bear an incredible stress whichlead the consequence that they even have no one hour a day to communicate withtheir children. For example, the majority of modern day parents who have a welljob will come home very lat at night evne their children have already fall insleep.What more when they have little time at weekend,their children willattend numerous kind of extra classes. Additionally, with the long time increaseof house education expend and commodities but the consistent wage. Theirparents put more attention on their promotion and salary rather than talking totheir children, not to mention understand them.
Suchproblem should draw large attention from the whole society, because the growingproblem of teenagers is such a significant matter of the parents even thesociety. In a word, even though how busy the adults, they should leave a littletime everyday to communicate with their children, to get a better understandingof them.