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发表于 2011-8-15 19:16:19 |只看该作者
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发表于 2011-8-16 23:42:06 |只看该作者
8.15 carol 独立 放飞的小鸟修改.doc (27 KB, 下载次数: 5) 改好了,迟到了,因为晚上的急事,抱歉

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发表于 2011-8-17 08:47:23 |只看该作者
我帮你改好了。

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发表于 2011-8-18 09:24:39 |只看该作者
8月17日独立:同不同意外国的报纸和杂志是了解外国的最好途径

Many people like to know foreign countries in order to expand their outlooks or for other purposes. There's no doubt that you can know foreign country through many ways, like traveling or doing researches on these countries. However, I suppport the opinion that by reading newspaper or magazines from that country is the best way and effective way to know that foreign country. I have three reasons to support my view.

Firstly, newspaper and magazines are country even world in miniature. By reading various kinds of edition in newspaper from foreign countries, people can know what happen today in those countries. What's more, as for the person who is going to study aboard, he or she will read both the newspaper and magazines in order to preview the accustom, race, policy, business in these countries. In that way, he or she can learn more about the foreign country without spending lots money on visiting that country.

Secondly, newspaper and magazines are more convenient for people no matter the youth or the old to learn foreign countries. Sometimes old people tend to feel outdated when they face the young. Some old people cannot use state-of-the-art machines like the computers and mobile phone. In that case, newspaper and magazines become the best way for them to obtain the latest news from foreign countries. Newspaper and magazines, arguably, are the old vehicles to deliver information . However, they help the old a lot to get the equal chance to acquire information from foreign countries like the youth.

Admittedly, sometimes there are some information on newspaper and magazines may mislead us. However, most of the time, newspaper and magazines can provide the information directly and objectively. When coal mine explosion happened in Shangxi province of China,newspaper and magazines provided the latest news like the number of the death and the rescuing process every day. Not only people in China could get to know the situation  but also the people in foreign countries could realize the big event happen in China.

To sum up, learning foreign countries by reading newspaper and magazines from that countries is the best way to get the know foreign country. Those are the best mirror for people  to see the reflection around the world.
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发表于 2011-8-18 22:04:06 |只看该作者
20# zhangbao0607
如果等级够的话,尽量用附件上传作文吧!省的被查重~
               

8月17日独立 revised by season08.doc

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发表于 2011-8-24 17:23:10 |只看该作者
8月24日独立。好久没写作文,好吃力啊,我错了~~~

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发表于 2011-8-25 12:47:40 |只看该作者
8.24 Annie's 修改稿

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Annie要当PhD!

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发表于 2011-8-25 19:12:16 |只看该作者
>< 你跟我不是同一组的……

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发表于 2011-8-26 17:24:09 |只看该作者
8月26日独立~~

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发表于 2011-8-27 16:47:05 |只看该作者
25# zhangbao0607 改好啦

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发表于 2011-8-30 09:07:06 |只看该作者
8月30日独立写作,求拍砖!

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发表于 2011-8-31 08:48:49 |只看该作者
8月31日独立。

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发表于 2011-8-31 13:50:28 |只看该作者
加油哈

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发表于 2011-8-31 16:25:28 |只看该作者
改好了,发给你,呵呵

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