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20090227NA A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time

Between a job with more vacation time and a high salary job with less vacation time, I will definitely choose the high payment job.

First, money can help our many dreams come truth not just limited on vacation. Besides vacation time, it is obvious that people have a lot of demands such as a big house, a beautiful car and so on. All of these need money to buy them back. A good payment job not only makes these dreams come true easier, but also reduces the time we need to reach our goals. High salary job provides more money than the job with more vacation. When we get the high salary job we don’t need to plan as long time as the normal job with high payment to get the thing we want.

In addition, high salary job can improve the quality in our vacation time, even though that job just gives limited vacation time. Compare with the normal job with more vacation time, if we get a high salary in the job, we’ll spend more money on our vacation time. It will make our vacation time supply us more relax and interest. For example, we can spend money to traveling agency to help us plan our vacation and give us best service. By the way, it will may our limited vacation more efficient.

Of course, more vacation time job will give us more chance to stay with our family and hang out with our friends. However, sometimes the wives or the children not just need our company with them. They also want we can buy the thing they need to them. So, when you don’t have enough money to satisfy their requirement, they also want you to spend spare time on work.

In conclusion, money is so important that we have to choose the high salary job with less vacation time.

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