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lyn7981UID：2758158

8.6 独立 Annie的修改稿
追风，也来帮我改改我的作文吧~https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1284659-3-1.html，谢谢

落落婧UID：2761817

Of course, science and social change in the past 50 years has etched a era totally differect from before.  an ear which is totally different from the world before.

help helping哈~others is the key to please people

Therefore, grandparents can teach their grandchildren how to cultivate these three features through sharing their lessons and experiences before for children’s future succeed. 好奇怪~直接改成share ...with their children就可以了~

building his own businesssetting up his own business会不会更好些？

其它没什么啦~我感觉你的展开的比我细很多~很值得学习啊~麻烦改下我的吧~~谢谢啦~
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1293498-1-1.html

bill5865UID：3109557

8月8日

foreverendlessUID：3134774

咦昨天的题目不是家长限制孩子看电视么？写错题目了？
无论如何把你传的看下好了

foreverendlessUID：3134774

2010.4.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The way a person is dressed in is a good indication ( 体现） of his/her character or
personality.
(Work, Education & Leisure)

People should not be judged just based on appearance. All of us have rights to dress what we want while good personality (appearance是否好些) is necessary for all members of society. As person’s dress and personality are not quite related, how person is dressed (可以换一个词，前面有dress，比如how people wear)should not regarded as a good indication of his/ her character or personality.

First and foremost, lots of kind and talented people would just dressing (dress) casually. As Einstein said:”If I am famous, I do not need to dress well. If I am not famous, people would not care if I dressed well”. If people treat others’ appearance as an indication, they may make some jokes. On one of my first class in my undergraduate, I found our professor seems crazy (funny) as he jumps from one side to other side in his class. What is more, he dressed very casual; even without ties and business suits, which are the most basic requirement of school. Some of my classmates do not trust him and even make jokes about him. Later, however, I found he is a very prodigious (尽量不用大词) professor with PHD in MIT. Therefore, treating dress too seriously can make us underestimate some real master.

Moreover, some bad people use their appearance to cheat naïve (这个词贬义) children. In order to gain people’s trust (trust of people好些), cheaters might dress very carefully to confuse others. For my cousin and my nephew as an example, when they were in a train in their trip, my nephew found a thief who just chatted with them were stealing my cousin’s purse when she is (was) sleeping. However, my nephew has (had) not tell his mother untill her mother wake (woke) up. When he found his mother confused (confuse) about why he did not told (tell) her before, he explained :”because he does not look like bad people, I thought he will (would) return it”. Obviously, my nephew has been (时态不对) cheated by the thief’s appearance.

Admittedly, people’s dress sometimes can show their taste and wealth. Especially, in an official conference, people’s dress can show (前面有show，换词，比如indicate) if they treat this meeting seriously. However, as people’s dress can bring so many (much) confusion, the way people dress can not be a good indication of character and personality.

All in all, we should not treat how people dress as their symbol based on the disscussion of good and bad person. If we want to know someone’s character and personality, we should observe what they do instead of what they dress.

bill5865UID：3109557

8月10日独立：

tom_cybamicUID：2475644

题目不对吧

愤怒公爵UID：2929648

题目写错了，但是文章很不错~~

bill5865UID：3109557

8月11日，追风独立。大家尽管往死里拍

愤怒公爵UID：2929648

独立批改好了，楼主加强一下词汇

bill5865UID：3109557

当时的题目写过，所以换了个别的

zuraghUID：3145992

8.12 独立 已修改~

lyn7981UID：2758158

改好了~
Annie的修改稿

bill5865UID：3109557

8月15追风，大家狂踩

zhangbao0607UID：2943226

很悲剧地刚刚发错地方了！发去主版去了。
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