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[作文] 【Daily Writing作文特训小组】Echo的作文贴! [复制链接]

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发表于 2011-8-12 21:55:29 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 ECHOKID 于 2011-12-6 09:59 编辑

大家好 我是新人~ 请多多指教
作文千万别手下留情啊大家 thx
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发表于 2011-8-13 00:10:22 |只看该作者
亲爱的朋友 今天大概是木有时间写咯 明天再发上来吧 辛苦啦
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发表于 2011-8-13 16:42:56 |只看该作者
新兵也可以传附件的亚,在高级回复里面,左下角

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发表于 2011-8-13 23:43:23 |只看该作者
发不到啊
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发表于 2011-9-12 23:14:38 |只看该作者
写得有点慢 见谅
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发表于 2011-12-6 18:40:01 |只看该作者
125100508NA In order to be more financially responsible when we are adults, we should learn how to manage money at young ages




"The habit hardened into the character.The character give births to the destiny." The impact that habits we shaped on our daily life, in general, is undeniable.No doubt it will become even greater as the character decide our fate finally.So as I hold a view that if we learn how to manage money at early age, we will be more financially responsible when we are adults.
  Learning how to manage our money in our childhood is requiring little effort and the earlier we form our habit to arrange the money, the greater effect it does to our life.In a sense, a positive habit will develop into a effective personality. Parents look forward to see our maturing and they are enthusiastic to teach us how to make a monthly financial plan or weekly financial plan.They are glad to help us to build a Sometimes, when children can not help themselves spending money on foods or baubles, parents can take a responsibility to supervise and assist them to form a positive habit w
  In addition,we can attempt a small but real trade to practice our ability of managing money when we are young.Not do we only learn how to use money efficiently , but also how to earn money to increase the number of saving. It is well known that many Americans have sold the lemonade in young ages.Selling is a kind of business to improve our managing skills.Also, this kind of business is worth a try even though we fail.The failure can better teach us how to be more financially responsible next time as a precious experience., the loss of our small business is limited that we can suffer.As the old saying that
  Nevertheless, too early to learn managing our money will certainly bring some negative effects.Children can not stick to their plan and sometimes may fall into temptation.


To sum up ,due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them, we can safely reach the conclusion that learning how to manage money at young ages,we can be more financially responsible when we are adults.
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发表于 2011-12-6 19:57:47 |只看该作者
终于能传附件了
辛苦大家了
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发表于 2011-12-6 21:43:47 |只看该作者
独立改完了!~~
论证得很不错!~
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发表于 2011-12-6 21:44:38 |只看该作者
你没有写12.05的综合?
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发表于 2011-12-7 16:17:48 |只看该作者
9# heyx
没有哦 抱歉 因为实在来不及
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发表于 2011-12-14 12:43:44 |只看该作者
13号的独立呢。。

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发表于 2011-12-16 14:45:30 |只看该作者
11# 嗯、淡定努力
因为13号的独立实在是太晚才写好 不好意思再发上来
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