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rouqiusongUID: 2884849

虽然828考试，但是我刚开始写，坚持每天写一篇吧。。。
这是我写的第一篇，欢迎大家批评指正。
题目：In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
正文：
With the improvement of science and technology and consistent development of economy, most people prefer to get information from many different news sources instead of via a single way. Individually, I my favor goes to the former.
To start with, it is hard for audience or readers to acquire latest news through a single medium. Although many people tend to live under the illusion that traditional technology and methods are still playing an extremely important role in their lives, increasing evidence shows that it is less useful than some people think. For example, most people enjoy reading papers in the morning, while the incident reported inside may not occur exactly on that day. In other words, the messages which are appeared in the newspaper always show us every detail of the events, but may not present some first-hand news. People who watch TV may acknowledge the latest news. So I think, it is necessary for us to combine the messages from various media.
For another, individuals could be directly perceived through the sense if they associate the advantages of many various media. That is to say, folks will have a comprehensive perspective on matters if they do so. For instance, housewives are able to watch a live report from a battleground on news channel on TV; the old people can hear an instantaneous message on the radio at any time; clerks are supposed to search for the material which is of great urgency by watching videos or skimming the blogs on the Internet. Human beings combine these activities providing an access to acknowledge what is life and what is the truth directly, and even telling us how to deal with the problems. So, the examples well support my point that people are able to experience lively if they associate good points of different news resources.

In addition, to get news widely makes us eliminate the false and retain the true. Now most people get their news and information about the things that are happening at home and abroad from television. They believe the things they hear and see on television. Probably most of the information is true, and we can believe it. But shall we always believe the information which television gives us? Do we never suspect that the given information might be slanted, distorted or the truth totally denied? Especially, many paper media often use some radical words to control the guidance of public opinion in order to promote their sales account. In this case, according to a recent survey conducted by a prestigious US research facility, 80% of people from 20 to 50 would like to get more information from different news resource in case of being cheated and they want to do their utmost to tell right from wrong. Hence, the details above strongly uphold my convincing viewpoint that to get news widely makes us eliminate the false and retain the true.
To sum up, a person must get information from many different news sources so as to be well-informed, rather than stick to one way. Only by doing this, can a person be directly perceived through the sense and eliminate the false and retain the true.

honghong_mUID: 2847478

:mad:请教楼主，你写了多长时间，对于一个话题你怎么拓展思路？谢谢

callmecUID: 3150809

羡慕LZ能扩展这么多……

rouqiusongUID: 2884849

2# honghong_m
这篇由于是我的第一篇，所以我想尽可能多地写，就写了三个小时。:dizzy:
当然，这是考试中绝对不允许的。
虽然杯具的我很快要考了，但是我想，如果你备考时间充足的话，
开始阶段每天不限时练习写作，对每一个题材都充分准备，
在后来阶段作限时联系，最终应该会有很好的效果。

我一般就是套模板，想三个比较容易的观点展开论述。
但是上过戴云教主课的同学和我说，就把考官当白痴，
能细则细地论述，可以凑很多字数。;P

rouqiusongUID: 2884849

3# callmec
多吗？呵呵
我就怕逻辑错跑题了～

rouqiusongUID: 2884849

刚写了一篇，麻烦大家帮看有没有逻辑的问题，很是担心～
2009.9.11 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.

A lot of people believe that only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth wathching. Although this view is widely held, there is little evidence that these movies help people a lot. Instead, we find that many new films, which contain different kinds of themes, are shown on the big screen every week and the audiences are in an endless stream. I refuse to admit that only films which could educate us on real life are worth having a shot.
The most important benefit of most individuals going to the cinema is that they would love to amuse and entertain themselves after a whole long week’s work or studying. In other word, real-life educative movies may not their first choice. The viewers’ choice is often affected by the recognition of the actors, the actresses and the director of the films, which is determined by how much money the producers would call together to invest. Young and pretty actors and actresses never lose their wide appeal which makes numbers of adolescrents go to the cinema. Some adult viewers prefer big-brand producting companies and famous directors. All of these comtribute to the amusement, or say the entertainment of one movie. As a result, these movies bocome worth watching. For instance, the Canadian pop singing star, Justin Bieber, performed on the big screen for the first time this year, appealing over millions of dolloars all around the world. All of his fans considered that Bieber’s behavior in the movie was brilliant and the movie was entertaining and deserved to see. However, as was commented, the number just showed that many kids supported their idol and Bieber’s performance did not teach us many things.
For another, the amusement of a movie is associated with the theme. According to a report of official statistics, in 2010, the box office of comedy and action movies have an 80% market share. That is to say, entertaining films are in great demand and people enjoy watching them. The humorous roles and funny stories always impress the audiences, such as Charlie Chaplin’s Dumb Show and Mr. Bean’s Holidays. Staying up to date, many film factories use the advanced technology to display us scientific theme movies. Harry Potter series are quite nice examples. Film-makers provide us a magnificent magic world via 3D-tech. When we are wearing the 3D glasses and sitting in front of the IMAX screen, we can definitely comfort ourselves for 2 hours. On that time, whether the movie is lack of educative seems not important, but I am sure that it is worth watching.
To those films with real life knowledge, they may remind people that what should they do in own growing path, how should they deal with problems correctly, how should they get on well with others and so on. Undoubtfully, they are valuable knowledges, but don’t you find the film is so dull if you concentrate on these too much? Individuals are not able to keep brains running all the time. Therefore, real life educative movies are not the only choice for people.
From what have been discussed above, films which could educate us on real life are worth having a shot, but they are not the only worthy ones for the viewers-they need to relax themselves via watching other entertaining films, too.