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Since the advent of movie, it has been a major stream for us to experience or appreciating(是否需要统一下形式) a totally different world on the screen. And it already has an enormous effect on our real life which broaden people's insight into (总觉得跟broaden 不搭)the world.  Nevertheless, I think it is too arbitrary to say that movies are the only way for us to learn for the real life, which obviously omits so many other ways that play a commensurate important roles as movies.
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. P% f' V; P* l. E% |4 GIndeed some movies which has affects theirs coevals continue their effect on the youth and kids, such as Forrest Gump or Wind. I think we both can never forget when mother told Forrest Gump that" Life was like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get." It always reminds me to accept the life with a generous heart and confront it no matter how hard it is for me. That is my incentive whenever I feel tired or want to give up what I am striving for. Thanks to the movie, I have gain a lot of strength to face some difficulties in my life, and it will always be my beacon whenever I am lost. . @8 Y6 K& M" @, `; S( z2 j8 Y3 z

0 b* a6 i9 N7 _, c+ |However, I doubt people treat movie as the only way to teach us about real life, because except that, we still can get real life (指导现实生活的东西)from books, TV shows, talking with the old and so on. Most of them are equal equallyimportant for us to get the knowledge of the changing world. When I first saw the movie Forrest Gump,  I am was so fancied by the whole plot that invokes me to dig into more background and references in the movie which it can not explicit clearly in such only two hours time or so. For the first time Vietnam War came into my mind which is bloody and catastraphic for both sides. The more I delve into the movie, the more I need to rely on the history books to give me a panoramic idea about what I am looking for. Then I get the idea of 3k, Elvis Presley, Little Rock, John Kennedy and so forth. All the history events and people can be attained if I didn't look up into specific history books. So they both give me a help (in) acknowledging history and life. So TV does the same things. We adjust ourselves through the tv also. When we saw some political shows, we gradually get to know what we want and how we want to do it. So TV shows also help us in another way. + ~5 p0 G# h& r! b. {- S6 L

# }# v, n8 y/ l8 [6 V% h( cApart from what we talked above, let us focus on movie itself. We all know moive is a kind form of art, which mean it comes from real life and beyond it. For example, moive can elicit a whole life in two hours, it inevitably will need some artificial revision and redesign. We can not expect the movie is the exactly same as the real life, which to some extents, real life is much more complicated and sophisticated and less dramatic, comparing with (the) life in movie. We can not expect a real Forrest Gump in reality, however, we can see some persons are just kind of parts of shadows of Forrest Gump.$ e- W) F- R' Z; S3 e3 U

" |/ C1 T' r9 |4 K) ?! M, M4 S3 z* ~So I would rather say movie is like a window that enable us to see a total new world which intrigues us to look for what we want from the books, TV, our predecessors. Moive is a reflection and compression of our life or part of, it enlightens us to pursue what it really matters to us in reality.

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Since the advent of movie, it has been a major stream for us to experience or appreciating（ appreciate） a totally different world on the screen. And it already has an enormous effect on our real life which broaden people's insight（ken) into the world.  Nevertheless, I think it is too arbitrary to say that movies are the only way for us to learn for the real life, which obviously omits so many other ways that play a commensurate important roles as movies.

Indeed some movies which has(ve) affectsed theirs coevals continue their effect on the youth and kids, such as Forrest Gump or Wind. I think we both can(will) never forget when mother told Forrest Gump that" Life was like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get." It always reminds me to accept the life with a generous heart and confront it no matter how hard it is for me. That is my incentive whenever I feel tired or want to give up what I am striving for.

However, I doubt people treat movie as the only way to teach us about real life, because except(besides) that, we still can get real life from books, TV shows, talking with the old and so on. Most of them are equal important for us to get the knowledge of the changing world. When I first saw the movie Forrest Gump,  I am so fancied by the whole plot that invokes me to dig into more background and references in(to) the movie which it can not explicit clearly in such only two hours time or so.(a short time)  For the first time Vietnam War came into my mind which is bloody and catastraphic（catastrophic) for both sides. The more I delve into the movie, the more I need to rely on the history books to give me a panoramic idea about what I am looking for. Then I get the idea of 3k, Elvis Presley, Little Rock, John Kennedy and so forth. All the history events and people can not be attained if I didn't look up into specific history books. So they both give me a help to acknowledging history and life. So TV does the same things(does the TV shows). We adjust ourselves through(learn from) the tv also. When we saw some political shows, we gradually get to去掉 know what we want and how we want to do(deal with) it. So TV shows also help us in another way.

Apart from what we talked above, let us focus on movie itself. We all know moive is a kind去掉 form of art, which mean it comes from real life and beyond it. For example, moive can elicit a whole life in two hours, it inevitably will need some artificial revision and redesign. We can not expect the movie is the exactly same as the real life, which去掉 to some extents, real life is much more complicated， and sophisticated and less dramatic, comparing with life in movie. We can not expect a real Forrest Gump in reality, however, we can see some persons are just kind of parts of shadows of Forrest Gump‘s.

Thanks to the movie, I have gain a lot of strength to face some difficulties in my life, and it will always be my beacon whenever I am lost. So I would rather say movie is like a window that enable us to see a total new world which intrigues us to look for what we want from the books, TV, our predecessors. Moive is a reflection and compression of our life or part of, it enlightens us to pursue what it really matters to us in reality.

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9月12日 20091031NA It is often not a good thing to move to a new  city or a new country because of the lose of old friends?

People often complain that it is difficult for them to move to a new place because of their connections with people in the old place. And they need to rebuild their social life again and it takes a long time to find some people in common. Is that true or not? Frankly, it is inevitable for everyone to face the problem when time comes. However, I am curious that can be the main reason for people stop moving or leaving their place. Besides, we even are not sure if we will really lose the friends who will be far from us?

Contrast to the reason author suggested, I think the idea that people don't think moving is a good thing is that they need to move away from a familiar environment and live in a new community that are new to them, which obviously contravenes our human inclination to live in a familiar or secure environment that feels more comfortable. That is the essence, not losing friends. We all are afraid to accept the challenge of adapting to a new place with different culture, people, languages, life styles. Since children begin their education from preliminary school, they already express resistant to go to a strange kindergarten by crying or faking ill. Later, youngsters know to get into a small group to protect themselves from being deserted in a strange situation. As grown up, we know we can use many excuses to avoid to be in a unfamiliar environment such as far from family or friends. So comparing with losing friend, the most intimate enemy is our own fear. This also elaborated the suggestion some professors gave that students who want to study abroad should not only be prepared in academy but also in mentality.

Meanwhile, moving to a new place really means we will lose our friends? I doubt it. We can still get along with some new friends whenever we are, and it also doesn't mean the later friendship will be much less tighter than the former one. Mostly as people meet with more and more strangers, they gradually knows what kind of person they are looking for to keep up with and like to spend time with. When we are youth in junior or high school, we thought friends actually only came from our classmates, and we tried our best to get acquaintance with campus influential man, even in the college, we still believed so. However, once you step into our real world, you found out the ones you tried to catch in your school is not the one you really want to keep up with. You broadened your range of social circle, known more people and finally grasp that a friend inneed is a friend indeed. The relationship doesn't grow weak as the distance between extends.

So I would rather go to a new place than stand still to hold a fantasy that how much I care about my friends or so. Because you also have so many ways to keep up with them, after all, nowadays we live in a global village that enables us to meet or contact with each other so easily. Abandon the bondage of your foot, strive for what you should do.

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谢谢你给我的修改，过来找你9月10日integrated writing修改的，不过没找到？

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tequilawine，9.12 的独立，改好了。
今天不知怎的，作文训练小组没有分组呢。
你也帮我看看我的独立吧，谢谢了，多多交流哈
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9月14日 20100924NA College or University should offer more preparation before they start working

People tends to rush for their new fascinating ideas, so does our school or universities. However, the difference between them is that how many people they will affected or influence? No wonder we suggested our college and university should offer more preparation before they starting working on some new rules or practise.

First, considering the special situation of school or university, we need to be more careful about establishing some new rules before preparation. School and university are much more than just some public facilities, they are the real cornerstone of our future society or human being. What they done will affect hundreds of students there. We can get the lesson from so many stories in history. We known that once in the late 1960s, some headstrong universities wanna get involved into our economic development and therefore allow their faculties to participate in commercial operation. No sooner more and more teachers became concern about their own business, whereas the quanlity of the education in that school droped drastically.

Furthermore, we still need to consider about the adaptiveness of our students and our faculties. People need time to adjust themselves to new rules and disciplines. It's the same like our own habits. So trying not to change so abruptly is just to make people more acceptable to the new ones. We also every member in Ivy League has win its famous reputation around the world through their restless renovation. However, they never tryied to do it in one day, because they know Rome can not be built in one day. Harvard takes so many years to embrace its first woman in history. It is remarkable and also remindful.

Everytime whenever we think about new ideas, i think it would be much better to let people know it and prepare for it. Then things will go smoothly as we hope.