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A company has announced that it wishes to bulid a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages of this new
influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory .explain your position.

A new factory is going to be built in my community. Some people argue that it will benefit us on our local economy, while others are disapprove of the plan because the companying environment pollution. In my opinion, I disagree the plan.

In some cases, a new factory do bring some advantages
on the development of local economy, It is obvious that the increase output of the factory increase the profit of the company ,and then advance the revenue of our government ,thus , the government could distribute more money for education, welfare, and health care.

Furthermore, a big factory can assist local people by offer more job opportunities, declining the unemployment rate. It help more people afford their living expenses and allows their children to get a better education.

However, it doesn’t follow that the factory should be built despite the heavy environment issues it comes along with. As a resident in this community ,you won’t want to worry about if your drinking water contains heavy metals or radioactive substances; you may not enjoy taking a walk in the air abounded with carbon dioxide ,particles and other harmful chemicals; and you can never tolerate the loud noise the factory produce around all day.

Beside, the new factory also damage the original design of the community, and deprived of some existing utilities . Maybe there is a basketball court which is the favorite place for local boys; maybe there is a old tree loved by people because they grew up with the tree and spent a lot of pleasant time under the tree. Now they have to lose their part of life which is especially meaningful to them, do you think they will support that plan?
In addition to, the company can choice to build the factory in industrial area away from residents, thus the impact will not do harm on the human.

Therefore, I strongly recommend that the factory shouldn’t be built in our community.