<Daily Writing >---海风吹过的作文贴

小小消息UID: 2887537

海风吹过，不好意思，今天有点忙，现在才看，不好意思，耽误你了~~
觉得你的写得很好呢，一起加油哦

liang0603UID: 3182007

Fighting!

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The speaker raises serious counterarguments against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically different evidences regarding dinosaurs may not endotherms.

First, the temperature in Polar Regions when dinosaurs lived were warmer than today. Besides, dinosaurs may migrant when the temperature in Polar Regions was cool down. That is, why dinosaur fossils have been discovered in Polar Regions cannot prove dinosaurs are endotherms.

In addition, there is another explanation for dinosaurs' legs underneath body. This also indicates that dinosaurs' legs are positioned underneath their body cannot explain dinosaurs are endotherms. In other words, dinosaurs may not endotherms. This was another part where experience contradicted theory.（第二个点没听懂，我这么写是有点糊弄的）无法支撑起自己的体积。。，这边我也听错饿了。。j囧。。

Lastly, dinosaurs grow with the temperature changes. The passage says that dinosaurs include Haversian canals which usually are the bones of endotherms. However, the speaker talks about dinosaurs grew quickly when the weather was warm and during the cool days they grew slowly. They grew with the temperature around. This characteristic is an evidence of dinosaurs is(两个谓语动词is诶。。) not endotherms. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

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30# 海风吹过

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最近很有缘，老跟你一组。
海风加油哦！！！

海风吹过UID: 3199801

11.26 独立 大家独立都多少时间写完，我每次都要这久伤不起啊，有什么方法麻烦改掉这个坏毛病给推荐一下啊。。 谢谢批改了！

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11.28 独立 欢迎批改！

liang0603UID: 3182007

加油！欢迎讨论！

海风吹过UID: 3199801

11.29 独立 实在想不出论点了，写了2个点  欢迎批改。

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楼主加油！共勉

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12.1 独立 谢谢批改

liang0603UID: 3182007

加油！共勉！

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12.2 独立 每次都要写好久，30分钟根本写不完啊。。。  大家是怎么训练的啊？？？ 给点意见吧。谢谢了！

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加油！

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12.3 TPO13 综合  欢迎指教！