单独题目：197

qhywUID: 136716

125“The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other country”.
看了上面一则帖子，发现这篇写的真个思路好像都偏了（没抓住核心）
我重点证明connected.没有太区分具体哪方面的联系
可否帮我看一下，最郁闷的一篇。
另外谁能说说他的提纲和思路，有例子最好了。
谢谢！

qhywUID: 136716

With the further rapid development of many fields especially economy, politics and technology,the whole world is more and more like a big village. Almost all the countries in current society are closly bonded together through commerce, diplomacy , academic intercourse and the like. Therefore we have no reason to against the claim that the material progress and the well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the ones of all other country.

Nowdays the economy of globalization has become impossible for any country to avoid the influence other countries bring to her either good or bad. It is well known that the affair of “911”not only affects the America but also the other countries’s economy directly or potentally. On the one hand, it results in the America the titanic loss coming from the high price of the world trade building ,the stagnant revenue of the transportation and tourism, a large number of insurance compensation and the like.on the other hand, many other countries consequently occurs a big economic depression for the reason is that after the occurrence of “911”,America pauses all the commerical acitvity with other countries and districts. So it is a big frustration for all the countries especially for those who heavily depend on the the American market. Maybe someone will say that independence is a good way to avoid the fluence. But if he takes the beneficial income from other countries into account,he will give up his innocent idea. The Chinese government who always insists on independence have tried for entrying into the World Trade Organization. As a matter of fact,closly connetion has become a trend for the development of the society.

From the perspective of the politics,it is still true that the material progress and well-being of one country are associated with the ones of other countries more or less. Take the iraq warfare as an example. Does this war only have something to do with America or iraq? Of course not. Any country has to face the following series of problems such as the rising price of petroleum,refugee’s homeless,the leakage of the chemical arm and the like. Let’s simply think of the second problem. Because of homeless,a lare number of refugee pour into other countries, this aciton, one the one hand, burdens other countries and to some extent to made those countries unstable. On the other hand, has the possibility to bring about some infectious diseases which can result in a big disaster.

Now let’s reflect the technology field. numerous examples demonstrate that any innovation progress make by researchers of one country benefits not so much that country as the whole humanity. For example,today everyone in any country can enjoy surfing the Internet although it was firstly advanced in America by some military organization for sharing the files within their organizaion. This invention brings not only America but also all other countries an unprecedented technological revolution which completely change every person’s living and working style.

Sum up, the relationship between one country and all the others in the aspect of the material progress and the well-being not only exists but also becomes more and more closely connected for the development of economy,politics and the technology.

happyman2000UID: 136936

Although in the past many countries built their material progress and well being upon invading and depriving other countries, no country in the current world can thrive on this means permanently. Connection and communication between other countries play a more and more important role in promoting material progress and well-being of one countries.
1, different countries can share in some important scientific knowledge and experience that are crucial to economic development and social progress.
2, international trade has deeply linked the welfare of one country with that of all other countries.
3, the internationalization of specialization and labor division urges Multinational Corporations to allocate their economic resources in the worldwide level.

icyrayUID: 139286

Position: All the countries in the world are bonded together closely and they influence each other inevitably in every perspective of society.  
A.        From the facet of economy, the development of economy depends on the progress of technology, which needs the cooperation of scientists and researchers from all over the world. (The decode of human genes is the effort of scientists from many countries, which breed the economical revolution in many fields such as biology, medicine, pharmacy.) to me国际贸易的例子比较难以展开
B.        From the aspect of politics, the development of each country, no matter material or spiritual, need a stabilization of the society, the steady condition and peaceful environment is significant. The terrorism tends to use all abnormal methods to destroy the order of the society and make confusions. Any country cannot dissociate itself from this situation.
C.        From the side of culture, the communication of art and literature is beyond the boundary of the countries; they pervade in, and thereby influence and promote each other. For example, the rock ‘n’ roll music or jazz music have great impact over the whole world.

木耳UID: 123036

这其实是经济与文化全球化的话题
可以联系中国的闭关锁国与对外开放
可以说因特网与信息时代

qhywUID: 136716

前两点与我的论点类似。
第三点是我未提及的。不过很有道理。
我是从经济，政治，科技三方面论证的，总是感觉有些怪，缺乏逻辑性。
欢迎讨论！

qhywUID: 136716

没有紧扣material and well-being而是泛泛的讲联系或依存关系, 算不算离题阿？
大家的提纲好像提这个的也比较少，
这个题目的重点词汇是：material and well-being or connected .. or both?

happyman2000UID: 136936

主要是侧重于物质生活的，政治方面的应该少谈。科技、贸易以及分工全球化其实就是物质利益方面的东西。

icyrayUID: 139286

我不这么认为。
the will-being可以理解为国家的繁荣，那么这必然 和政治的稳定是相联系的
所以，政治也是一个十分重要的因素。

（写完之后发觉好像issue作文的风格的说……）

木耳UID: 123036

我觉得well-being 还是该指精神层面。题目中已明确提到materail progress,应该不会重复。说精神层面就该联想到文化道德什么的，当然，政治的民主也该包括。

icyrayUID: 139286

我觉得wll-being是一个很宽泛的内容，在和material progress 一起提到的时候，精神层面的可以考虑多一点。
其实这种模糊的概念比较好写啊，
只要在文中阐明自己对它的理解就万事OK，哈哈，乐哉

happyman2000UID: 136936

Well-being=welfare，在经济学中这是个非常重要的名词，主要指个人的福利状况或者生活幸福程度。要说它包含个人层面上的精神满足，当然也是可以的，但这个词主要还是指物质方面的享受与满足。
一国的政治状况当然会影响该国人民的福利水平。但就着个题目来讲，它主要谈国际化的问题，政治与经济不同，经济可以全球化，但政治还基本上是个自我封闭的系统。一国的政治气候与他国关系不大。当然，也不是绝对没有关系，但你非要说它很大，我也没办法！
Material progress and the well-being of one country. 前面说物质上的进步，后面说人民福利状况。先有生产，后有享受，这是个递进关系。

木耳UID: 123036

原来是这样！

icyrayUID: 139286

Merriam-Webster's Collegiate Dictionary:
:The state of being happy, healthy or prosperous : WELFARE