总结了一下自己的issue开头

demeUID: 142580

其实自己的作文写的还很烂，但是通过这几天在GTER上学习和写提纲总结出了一小点经验，希望和大家一起讨论，指正。

首先是开头段，个人认为，开头段要用隐性的模版。所谓隐性，即是指思维上的一种定式，但并不是在语言上有固定的形式。固定的模版是不可取的，因为老毛子不是傻子，会看出来，所以对于模版的准备我认为更多的应该是煅练一种思维，即要知道每一句应该写什么，而不是背下固定的句子。前两天问了一个在新东方的美国朋友，他说判卷人会很容易看出模版，然后就不再往下看了，这样是很不利的。所以个人认为，模版是必要的，但形式是应该有所改变的。另外关于开头段的长度，其实我一直写的很长，大概100多字吧，现在看来，90-100字，差不多5-6句话应该比较合适，太长了显得罗嗦，太短了又会使后面在字数上压力太大。

不行，太困写不下去了
明天来了继续补充吧

feier521UID: 109747

期待ing

imongUID: 140258

要是这么说来，像我这种基本上没有开头的反而避免了劣势？

paisleyUID: 64183

开头看出摸班就不往下看了？不会这么不负责任吧？

00foxUID: 112731

我的开头虽然没有用什么模版，但是总是显得有点长，但是我认为应该在第一段就把你想说的尽量囊括（不光是观点，而且包括你的论述方向）好让读者一看就知道你后面想说什么。以避免阅卷者失读或是自己表述不清引起的评分人对文章意思的曲解。

木耳UID: 123036

不是只有argument有模板吗？
我觉得开头再简单不过，用不着那么多话，什么最近有一个争论啦，人们分成两派如何如何，而我认为怎样怎样。。。要么就是最近有一个什么什么问题，别人怎么怎么样，我又如何。。。
如果我是判卷老师，我就谁觉得你在东拉西扯凑字数。
如果你要写一般的八股文，开头就要做两件事：1 摆明总观点；2 大概说一下分论点，让人明白你的论证结构 。简单明了。
当然，如果你突然灵感迸发，能写出一个很个性的开头，那也很好。

sakura2003UID: 131408

批改是人机结合么，如果是的话，是不是可能先由抓雷同软件，抓出雷同，然后评分人再改呢，这样很有可能抓到一批模板啊例子雷同什么的拉。

GcanadaUID: 118286

那ARGUMENT用摸板又会怎么样呢?
也期待你来多写点东西啊!
我明天要考T了,
等等我就去睡觉了,
考完T,我就马上来GAW,因为我28又要考这个了,是八月的28.FT~~~~

demeUID: 142580

其实argument还一篇都没练过

demeUID: 142580

这是我以前用的模版
Lately there is a controversy over the issue that whether (争议). On the one hand, some people consider that (我同意的观点), while on the other hand, others advocate that (我反对的观点). As the case stands, the issue of whether (争议) is perplexing and contestable one. Different individuals support different standpoints because of their diverse life experiences. Therefore, there is not a unique answer to this issue, and whether one selection has advantages over the other may quite depend on the specific conditions. The choice, nevertheless, is not a simple decision to make. In fact, a case-by-case analysis is required to make the final opinion. In the following discussion, I would like to provide evidence to support the former one and disprove the latter one.

数了数,142个字,这个模版拿到考试去必死,还好我早发现了,还要谢谢paisley
下面是我重新想出的一个开头段结构
首句点一下题,像什么the speaker claims/ the arguer suggests that....一类的,说白了就是题目换个说法再说一遍.
接下来用一两句介绍一下背影,有关这一块我还没太想明白
最后一句说出自己的论点,也可以说同意或不同意.
如果觉得字数不够的话,可以把自己的分论点也大概介绍一下,介绍背影那一块也可以省了,如果字数又太多了.
总之开头的最重点就是点明自己的态度,如果要是后面不是特别有话说,第一段就尽量写长点,凑凑字吧

下面举个例子~~

demeUID: 142580

这是孙远的第6题
Topic: It is primarily through formal education that a culture tries to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears.
我用模版写的开头段:
Lately there is a controversy over the issue that whether formal education excludes the points opposite and conserves the agreeable ideas everlasting. On the one hand, some people consider that welcomed point of view should be praised and saved forever. While on the other hand, others advocate that both appreciative and adverse points should be kept. As the case stands, the issue is perplexing and contestable one. Different individuals support different standpoints because of their diverse life experiences. Therefore, there is not unique answer to this issue, and whether one selection has advantages over the other may quite depend on the specific conditions. The choice, nevertheless, is not a simple decision to make. In fact, a case-by-case analysis is required to make the final opinion. In the following discussion, I would like to provide evidence to support the former one and disprove the latter one.
共145个字,长的吓人吧

这是我重新写的开头
The speaker of the issue claims that a culture treats ideas in different standpoints dissimilarly by formal education. As different individuals have different thinking, there can not be a unique inclination. So the culture, which appeared to be a referee, judges the ideas to be welcomed or dispelled. In my point of view, I advocate the arguer's suggestion, and I would like to provide reasoning and evidence to support my view.
数了一下,71个字,好像又有点短
唉,大家来批评批评吧

果酱面包UID: 142490

反正我觉得是够了

angeikimUID: 4857

开头很重要是要花工夫来做的。。

果酱面包UID: 142490

对于开头到底怎么写我真的不知道，有谁能发表一下意见吗

yuwenUID: 142788

我写开头习惯先写问题的背景，然后针对题目提出自己的观点。