[主题活动]【daily writing 作业】佐左927作文贴

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3.9作文，请帮忙批改一下，谢谢

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因为已经写过3.9日独立作文的这个题目了。所以我写的是3月3日的。
辛苦小狮子了。

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3.10独立

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3.12 第一次综合，写的想哭！

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According to the passage,the writer says that American companies would not attract customers by offering ecocerficated wood. However,
the speaker in the lecture disagree with what have been said in the passage.
Firstly, the writer tells us that there are to much advertisement that customer might not have time to notice the ecocertificated label. Whereas,
speaker in the lecture mentioned that customer in the American does not deem all the advertisements as same.
They distinguish them between one made by company and one made by international organization with the ecocertified label given by independent consumer agency.
Secondly,
the writer declared that wood which dose not have ecocertified will be cheaper than the wood with ecocertified
label.
But the speaker said that although all the customers in the American are care about price, it only happened when one product is much lower or higher than another one. （这里的转折关系有点奇怪）（改成：But the speaker said that all the customers in the American are care about price just in the situation that one product is much lower or higher than another one. 个人建议）And people in the United States are more concern about environment.
They will probably choose the one with ecocertified label.
Moreover,the writer indicated that American companies would not pay attention on the international market.But speaker in the lecture argued that companies in the United States do care about international market, it is because the foreign competition not foreign customers.（没有谓语）
If they don't （打漏了？）foreign companies will soon cover the most of customers with ecocertified wood.

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3.13综合作文

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3.16 综合作文
TPO11

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3.16 独立写作

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3.19 independent writing

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