关于我口语得分，求大家指教一下（求分析我的回答有什么问题）

decoczarUID: 2838099

我一月十四的一战，成绩不理想啊，91分口语只有17分。我的一二题只有limited的评分，但是我当时的感觉并没有那么差。
我当时一题为：最喜欢和谁spend time together，why  
我回答：personally speaking, I'd like to spend time with children. I'm holding the opinion for the following two reasons. First of all, I think children is  always cute and innocent. It's a lot of fun to play with chirdren because they're creative and they always laugh. the second reason is that children is the future of our country. I see a lot of potential in them. It's our responsibility to give them a better environment.

二题：学生是不是应该在quiet的环境下学习
我回答: As far as i concerned, I agree with the statement that student should study in a quiet environment. I'm holding the opinion for the following two reasons. First of all, I don't think it's a efficient way to study in a noicy environment because it will distract your attention, so you can't focus on your work. The second reason is that i regard the thinking of an individual as unique. I think people really should leave some time to do some serious thinking. maybe they will come up with some creative ideas.


红色部分是我估计我当时犯的错误，我平时单复数和人称和助动词是很容易搞错的。不知道怎么有效的改掉。。。。
我当时很紧张，说话声音很大很急，但是我感觉内容大概是没有问题的，我的发音没有大问题，不知道是不是我的两道题用词重复还是内容不好，人家给我一个limited，很伤心啊。。。。
希望大家给点意见哈

hycqyUID: 2819662

1# decoczar 表达上的小错误并不会影响太多  但是你说的比较空洞 缺乏例子是真的

decoczarUID: 2838099

2# hycqy
按你说也是啊，谢谢提醒，我平时并不习惯写这些列子，应该找一些来背背？