雅思作文速成技巧 之 词法篇

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单词和语法
是无法分开谈的
选择什么样的词句
完全是个人的选择

问题是
很多烤鸭不知道
哪些才是真正高分的词法
下面是090117的翻译
尽量采用雅思官方常用的
短语和句型
供诸位参考

起
1.如今，科技影响人们的生活和工作。
Nowadays, science and technology are affecting/influencing people’s life and work.
2.因为技术、通讯和交通的提高，人们可以随意选择生活和工作的地点。
Due to the improvement of technology, communication and transportation, people can select
any place for life or job.
3.这种现象有利有弊。
This trend has both…and…

承
1.人们随意选择生活工作的地点有很多好处。
It is beneficial for people to choose anywhere to live or work.
2.因为科技、通讯和交通能节省时间和距离，所以生活方式的改变给人们带来更多的享受。
As technology, communication and transportation may save time and distance/journey, the
change of lifestyle brings people/individuals more enjoyment.
3.比如，上网或用手机订机票，可以随时随地出门旅行。
For instance, they can book tickets online or through cell phone anytime and anywhere for
travelling.
4.而且，年轻人还能通过网络，迅速找到新的工作机会。
Furthermore, youngsters may find new jobs on the Internet in a short time at home or work.
5.对社会来说，频繁的人口流动能刺激需求，所以消费增加有助于发展经济。
For society, frequent mobility of population could boost demand, so increase of consumption
is helpful to economic development.

转
1.然而，科技发展带来的这种自由选择，存在很多危害。
On the other hand, technological breakthrough causing/leading to free choices has many
dangers.
2.事实上，大多数人依赖电脑网络和手机，对身体健康不利。
Actually, a majority of users rely on computer, Internet and mobile phone, which are harmful
to their health.
3.旅游事业也对环境有伤害，因为交通工具产生大量污染，比如噪音。
Tour business/Tourism also does harm to environment because of heavy pollution from
transport, such as noise.
4.频繁的跳槽也不利于年轻人的职业发展，因为他们为了追求高收入，可能忽略研究技术和人际关系。
Changing jobs freely may also have bad influence on young people’s career, as they seek for
higher income and ignore study further into skills and relationship with others.
5.对社会和经济而言，频繁的人口流动意味着资源浪费，以及激烈的竞争。
For society and economy, population movement means waste of resources and fierce competition
in job market.

合
1.总之，我的看法是，虽然科技发展给人们生活和工作带来更多的选择，但是对环境和社会的危害是不容
忽视的。
In conclusion, my view is that although technology advancement enables people to have more
choices, its dangers to environment and society should not be ignored.
2.当然，科技发展是无法阻挡的历史潮流，而且自由选择是人的基本权力。
Of course, the advancement is an inevitable trend in human history, and free choice is the
basic human rights.
3.因此我建议，政府、科学家和媒体要重视科技对人和环境的破坏，帮助人们找到最佳的生活和工作方式
，比如：大力提倡低碳技术。
So, I suggest that governments together with scientists and media concentrate on the damage
from technology to people and environment, and find out the best solution, such as promotion
of low-carbon technology.

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赞一个！为何无人回应，正在看作文，和pat的讲解非常紧扣
jingyanlh 发表于 2012-3-3 03:33

who is pat?

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