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本帖最后由 lawamor 于 2012-3-3 18:56 编辑

嗯 今天开始好好写作文 每天练一遍... 求拍............
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The passage and the lecture both discuss about the genetic modify tree. The article believe the genetic modified tree have many benefits. But the in the lecture, the professor disagree those idea.
To begin with, the reading claim that genetically modified trees can be more resistance to environment. They trend more likely survive than those unmodified. But in listening, professor argues that. Genetically modified tree will lost their genetic diversity. It may let those tree unlikely durable than the nature tree. Without genetic diversity, trees are more easily died out when the environment has big changes.
So the genetically modified tree is not hardier as the passage expect.
Secondly, the passage believes the genetically modified trees promise a number of economic benefits. Faring genetically modified trees seem to save lots of money, which means they are more profitable. However, the professor point out that the hide cost is really high. The cost of genetically modified tree mainly comes from two aspects. One is the cost of seeds, the seed provide by companies is expensive, and company will also ask for pay for a certain harvest.
At last, it is no true that genetically modified trees can let nature tree be well protected, says the professor, the genetically modified trees are more aggressive to the nature tree. The genetically modified tree will use the soil and other kind of nature resources.

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The passage and the lecture both discuss about the genetic modify(modified) tree(s). The article believe the genetic modified tree have many benefits. But the in the lecture, the professor disagree those ideas.9 t0 ~0 j, v9 V* |  S9 P1 i, o3 `: t
To begin with, the reading claims that genetically modified trees can be more resistance to environment. They trend more likely to survive than those unmodified. But in listening(没见过这种表示的 感觉不妥), professor argues that. Genetically modified tree will lost their genetic diversity. It (which)may let those tree unlikely(less) durable than the nature trees. Without genetic diversity, trees are more easily died out when the environment has big changes.
So the genetically modified tree is not hardier as the passage expects.5 e' r/ U- l! a% V1 Y/ I( U% @, l
Secondly, the passage believes the genetically modified trees promise a number of economic benefits. Faring genetically modified trees seems to save lots of money, which means they are more profitable. However, the professor point out that the hide cost is really high. The cost of genetically modified tree mainly comes from two aspects. One is the cost of seeds, the seed provide by companies is expensive, and company will also ask for pay for a certain harvest.(落了一个细节  说每次种植这种树是时候都要再向公司付钱)
At last, it is no true that genetically modified trees can let nature tree be well protected, says the professor, the genetically modified trees are more aggressive to the nature tree. The genetically modified tree will use the soil and other kind of nature resources.再插进一细节 这种树比野生的生长的快
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3# 企鹅要出国

非常感谢!我这次准备最怕就是作文了..

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哈哈 没事 我最怕怕口语 明天就一战了 4# lawamor
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