【daily writing 作业】Flyingfie2012作文贴

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41# 秋雨荆州

多谢秋雨帅锅儿了。。

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试下能不能发言，很奇怪，我的帖子好像被删了，不知有没有被禁言。。。。

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45# FlyingFie 个人浅见，仅供参考。

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46# FlyingFie

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4。2日

新鲜出炉。。人手一块板儿砖，请用力向此文砸来。。

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49# 秋雨荆州

呵呵，原来当夜猫子的不只我一个哈，帅锅儿你这个点钟帮偶改作文，感动得我眼泪哗哗滴阿！！！

IgoonUID: 3186152

汗。。。。居然发错了。。

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45# FlyingFie 已改，4月了，继续加油！

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50# FlyingFie 已改，膜拜起那么早的

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哈哈，现在每天都要改你们的作文才睡得着觉~加油加油！ 51# FlyingFie

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3月31日110422 which kinds of university do you prefer universities whose graduates can find good jobs or universities where there are famous professors?


Nowadays many students pursue their further education at university level. 中式化了吧Some choose to enroll in the colleges that ensure them a bright future for their career; others rather select the education institutes, where most well known professors in their own field teaching. As for me, I prefer to study in an university, where enables me to get a good job afterwards.

The universities, which guarantee a good job is more practical than a school provides many famous professors.给力的段首句 Because students, who concern about their future, would probably already have their future plan even before getting started at university, in other words, their goal. 还是建议慎用长句….As they have a clear direction on what they will be in about three or five years, they will by all means working hard to reach their overall target. Thus, they are likely to be succeeded in the future. Since the sense of honor and self-recognition is very crucial for a person, it is better to enter in an university, which gives a better chance for a dream job.
这段可以说说大学到底如何培养学生成功就业的

On the other hand, the excellency of a student has nothing to do with a professors' expertise, but the hard work they themselves accomplished at school. 不错!!! Even if there are many world class professor teaching there, an individual student who does not pay much attention on his study, would result in failure. Take my friend Mike as an example. Instead of choosing a college with strong brand in sociology, where he may get an internship in an international company after graduation, he picked up another one by keep emphasizing on the best professor within this field teaching there. But after one and half years with burning out passion for sociology, he began to enjoy his life living in campus, than working hard. Eventually, he had too many courses failed, that he was dropped out of the school. This determined that even the best professor may not be able to make a student's fate, if he himself is not well focused on study.

In conclusion, comparing with famous professors and unpredicted future, I prefer to choose the university, which give a bright career future.

我觉得这篇文章主旨很清晰,加油!!!!

(355 words)

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4。3 独立。。

啦啦啦，勤劳的小蜜蜂又来日更了<- - 这小盆友，肿么了，这么有自虐情结？

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DT，居然发到我自己的帖子去了。。。不好意思啊！好好加油。

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50# FlyingFie 已改，寫作是我弱項，提的建議可能不成熟，但也是經過認真思考的，歡迎多交流，爭取共同進步！謝謝！