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5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.



Every scheme possesses its advantages and disadvantages, not except found a large factory. Building a factory in everywhere is always a big issue. Generally, the pros and cons basically with regard to three major aspects- economy, environment, and society. The inferences on these three elements are the biggest concern for us to support or oppose to build a factory in our community.


On the economy’s side, having a new factory definitely is a benefit. Firstly, a large factory provides a great quantity of job opportunities to the citizens who live on that region. Secondly, it could activate the consumption level over that place. More people having job and gaining their salary so they get more money to spend. No doubt, build a large factory actually is a great stimulation to economic growth.


On the society’s side, build a large factory also improve the living standard of the inhabitants. Thanks to the huge number of job vacancy from the factory, people gain more money to improve their living standard such as buy a new car, and maintain their own house. Based on those supporting reasons, obviously build a large factory is not only benefit to economic but also society.


On environment’s side, previously, seldom can a factory be founded without contamination for its surrounding. However, it is a different story today. Nowadays, the environmental-friendly technology is improving every time. Honesty it seems impossible to establish a factory without any pollution, but it is possible to control the pollution in a low degree. Therefore, building a factory possesses a bad effect to the environment, but pleasingly we can deflate it as much as possible.


Indeed, the advantages of founding a large factory are more that the disadvantages. A large factory provides job opportunities, stimulates the economic growth, and advances the living standard. Because of these advantages, I strongly approve that to build a large factory near my community.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

Visiting museum is undoubtedly instrumental to learn about a country. You can learn about its history through there. On my view, I think visiting museum is a best way to learn about the history of a country, but not a best way to learn a entire country.

Even though museum provides a treasury of history and culture, it lacks of a numerous elements of a country. For instance, obviously a museum can’t offer the newest information. How can we fully understand a country without the recent information? Nowadays, our world is changing every moment. The up-to-date information is always the most significant thing for us to learn about a country and it is what a museum is unable to offer.

A museum not only lacks of recent information, but also the politics. If we want to learn about a country, politics is a indispensable thing. The stability of politics shows us the country the country is safe or not. If a country’s politics is unstable, this means it is not a suitable time to go there because there is disorderly and unsafe.

Furthermore, there is no information of law and policy in a museum. Policy and law of a country reflect the security of a country. For example, if a country lack of a faultless law, it will be full of danger to be there because there is no law protection.

Also, the museum can only slow the positive of a country. The negative side is never show in the museum. However, the negative side is the one that slow the reality of a country. Such as the poverty line, it slows us the true living standard of the residents. A museum can’t show the reality so I disagree that visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

To summary, we can’t learn the politics, policy, law, and any recent information through visiting museum. Furthermore museum can’t even slow the reality. Because of those supporting examples, I truly disagree that visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

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