Issue174 没限时，写的很艰难，请各位帮忙看看！：）

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174. Laws should not be stationary and fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.(政治类)

Laws, as the main criterion of people's doing in country, have been designed for about thousands of years from antiquity by many legislators and those people who own the power of community. The society should not be stationary and fixed from antiquity to modern times so that the laws should be adjusted to adapt to the development of society and the various circumstances of country where various of human live in.

First of all, laws, as the people's criterion of behavior, will be adapted to various times in which the laws will serve for the regime of the time. For example, the laws about the treating to the new technology from overseas in Qing dynasty in China are different from the present of China. In the later periods of Qing dynasty, the China monarch's ignorance and powerlessness result in resisting to the new technology from overseas as those technologies should be seen the heterodoxy in laws. Whereas, nowadays, the new technology from overseas will be the good help to promote the social development so that in the present laws the new technologies from overseas are legal and encouraged. Therefore, we can conclude that the time is an important condition to legislate and laws should not be stationary in various time.

Secondly, laws should be adapted to the various circumstances in that various people have various custom and ethic which should be the other factor to legislate the laws. For instance, the laws about defining the death penalty are different in states in USA because the legislators have various custom and ethic criterion in their states. Some state laws will define that someone can afford money penalty although he kill one in an accident but other state will not. If the same condition should occur in China, the one kill other must be in prison for about five to ten years according to Chinese laws. So, as we know, the different custom and moral criterion can lead different laws and distinct penalty.

Certainly, laws which can ensure the stability of community should be stationary and fixed in normal condition and times and can hardly be amended casually or frequently in that the frequent amending will do harm to the validity of laws. Moreover, the law which should be amended should be discussed carefully by legislators and also should consult the opinions of common civilian. In this way, more and more applied law will be added into the laws and the laws will be more consummate. The consummate laws will be the basis of steady development in community and the quality of people in community will be promoted in this consummate laws.

In conclusion, laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places instead of stationary and fixed. Furthermore, in normal condition and times, laws also should not be amended casually or frequently. In other words, laws should be adapted to promote the development of community and should be amended in demand.

感觉自己和政治的确没缘，看着题目愣了好半天才想出怎么下手，但一看时间已经过了10分钟，所以干脆没有限时，但还是感觉写的有些迷糊，请各位“政坛高手”指点一二，谢谢！^_^

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优点：1。结构比较清晰，每个point也能够展开，尽管不是well-developed,
           2。图片很漂亮 打个6分  
            
着重说说缺点吧
1。 语言不很准确，用词单一了点，various 你用N+1次，能换换吗 diversified multifarious。。。还有如
as the people's criterion of behavior 是不是改成 as the criterion of people's  behavior 更好些呢， 不过小问题了

2。例子不够，个人观点不要举中国的例子，如果不是学历史的老美 可能根本不知道什么是QING DYNASTY 很危险的  你怎么不把那个Prohibition 的例子举上来列？

总的说来， 不是很well-developed ,

我的想发是：
position: （玩文字游戏）不stationery and fixed 不表示可以随意改变，可以不依法办事，而表示应该制定更完善的法律。

1。taking into account of various circumstances 不表示可以违背法律，讲人情。
解释为什么要依法办事？

2。true meaning of being not stationey or fixed表示 要经常修订，考虑不同因素，
解释为什么这么做？

3。如果不这么办，回怎么样？

4。over

给你一些离子：
due to the effort of the leader of women suffrage campaign, Susan B.Athony, american government passed an amendment to the Consitution granting women voting rights

玲珑女UID: 142984

你是不是学法律的？说实话我并不喜欢用中国的例子，只是在法律方面对国外的基本属于不了解，所以无奈之下出此下策，真希望考试时别倒霉碰上法律类，呵呵！（不过还是感谢你的建议啦，我想如果考试碰上也会帮上）

你说的例子我感觉没听过（可能我孤陋寡闻了^_^），说实话考试时就是给这个例子我，可能我也很难well－developed，唉，对政治，头疼！：）

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如果你有孙远的 那个写作的书 多看看那个写作工具箱吧，非常有用，但是可能，我认为还是不怎么够， 还是要多看看， 那个dukesilence 总结的东西很不错，我 copy了一份，

还有，我不是学法律的，其实 这段时间多留心记些东西，to certian degree  比写提纲还管用。

：）