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When we talk about how take care of our family better ,make them happy ,health, comfortable is first thing we think about . Thus, whether live in rural area or a big city for looking after our parents and children is an issue open to debate.In my opinion,living in cities to taking care of our family  is better than live in rural area.
     The social facilities includes that  high quality of medicare and social security ,it can help people take their parents of better. Because advance in medical technology in cities can make it possible for old people to live longer .In addition, many Elderly care facilities developed by government supporting offer sick care and daylily-life care for old people who can't take themselves of well. Furthermore, well established legal system in cities,such as endowment insurance system and pension insurance fund is more complete than in rural area. if old people's late-life in cities, they do not worry about being sick and cost of medical  too much.
      Easy communication with family members is another advantage in cities. Compare with a rural area without telephone or internet, more convenient method in cities like mobile phone ,online chatting , to communicate with our family when emergency .For another ,public transit also a fast way to visit our relitive or take children to school, because  many different means of transportation such as magnetically-levitated trains,subway, bus, taxi couldn't appear in poor rural areas.Thus,we are more close to our family members in big cities.
     I admit there may be have some advantage of taking care family in rural area.Because nice environment with  fresh air, streams through in font of your house,no noise pollution and traffic jam,it can help people relax and good for our health.Even so, going on a journey or visiting our family still spent a very  long time because of terrible transportation facilities.
     In conclusion, i would agree with people who live in the city can take care of their family better than people live in rural area.

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6.4作文----Colleges or universities should offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they


I entirely agree that colleges or universities should offer more course for students to preparing future before they enter the society and start working by following reasons.

        In first place, it can benefit the student because of with school being the last stop before they enter society, students urgently need help from the school to prepare them better for the job market. For one thing,these course can help student for making career choice due to students hardly know about what they want to do in the future. If  a universitiy offer different kinds of course ,such as Financial , Business , Technology ,wich has more detail contexts of career prospects and not just  the knowledge in textbook,  will help students clearly recognize the condition of working after they graduating .
        
        A second,it also can benefit the society-to help student make better transition from school to workerplace. Thus provide more qualified workers with both need skills and mental readiness-improve the productivity of the society.It is clear that students who abundance of working experience as a result failure in working place even can not find a job is a usual situation in present So,colleges and universities should offer more social practice courses, internship working and contact with big companies for sutdents to gather experience.

        Third, it can benefit the school. If a school's graduates can find ideal jobs,this will boost the school's reputation among its potential applicants,and can thus attract better students. For example: the statistical data shows that colleges and universities which has these course for student to prepare future with applications high than  the normal universities among the colleges that have equal University rankings. Hence, an excellent example that student get job from famous company also can be a symbol on the university's reputation .to attract more better students.
        
In conclution, those course not only can help students but also are beneficial to colleges and society .So l totally agree with this opinion.

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