【写作特训---BY LYNX】

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作文很烂，语法也是菜鸟，基础薄弱，希望大家多给意见撒。每天都会认真写作文地>_,感谢重新振兴写作特训！

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5.29作业上交



Our own experience has revealed that old people can give the right guidance because they have more experience by get through the long days .we can ask to elderly people mentor young people,and encorage them to write their stories and advices for the next generation.However, the elderly people's experiences are very valued which direct young people in many ways,but sometimes they are out of date,and can't follow the trend of society.

Many young people always go into raptures at the merely mention of buying fashion clothes.They enjoy wearing  in for cosmetics and fancy dresses,and always like go to shopping with their friend as they have the same taste in cloths.Therefor,hey would love to hear their friends thoughts when they choose the fashion clothe or the other new things.In contrast,young people don't like take the advice by elderly people gave ,because elderly people are conservative in outlook,and  having old-fashioned opinion in cloth.They always blame  the young‘s  dresses are  too flashy, too provocative, too casual, too tight or too revealing.

Furhermore，old people is stubborn in accepting new things.they  don't know how to  use mobile phone and doesn’t have an internet connection.Even so ,they are not willing to learn .Thus， young people glade to  accept the views of  high-technology and anything new by their peers rather than the old.

On the other hand,old people all have one thing in common: they consider problems only in the light of their personal experience.For example:many parents  often interfere with their chldren's love life by implanting some ingrained thoughts like money problems, and also the best tall, cool, even it is necessary to rich, and would o find a stand that can be controlled by their own men.

Another reason for the young are happy to accept advices from people in their age is  elderly people often put on a display of  blame-storming when they give some adives for young people，obviously, they don't realized  it is  important that they be gentle and kind in their suggestions.But  this  condition merely appear among the young people，they   give advice or make suggestions sincerely .

In conclusion,i don't think that all the advices given by older people  more valuable than from people our age,because of the experience of age, in things that fall within the compass of it , directs them; but in new things, abuses them.

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Our own experience has revealed that old people can give the right guidance because they have more experience by get through the long days .we can ask to elderly people mentor young people,and encorage them to write their stories and advices for the next generation.However, the elderly people's experiences are very valued which direct young people in many ways,but sometimes they are out of date,and can't follow the trend of society.

Many young people always go into raptures at the merely mention of buying fashion clothes.They enjoy wearing  in for cosmetics and fancy dresses,and always like go to shopping with their friend as they have the same taste in cloths.Therefor,hey would love to hear their friends thoughts when they choose the fashion clothe or the other new things.In contrast,young people don't like take the advice by elderly people gave ,because elderly people are conservative in outlook,and  having old-fashioned opinion in cloth.They always blame  the young‘s  dresses are  too flashy, too provocative, too casual, too tight or too revealing.

Furhermore，old people is stubborn in accepting new things.they  don't know how to  use mobile phone and doesn’t have an internet connection现在很多老人也用手机电脑喔.Even so ,they are not willing to learn .Thus， young people glade to  accept the views of  high-technology and anything new by their peers rather than the old. i6 B& T9 X! ^% X* i6 H
On the other hand,old people all have one thing in common: they consider problems only in the light of their personal experience.For example:many parents  often interfere with their chldren's love life by implanting some ingrained thoughts like money problems, and also the best tall, cool, even it is necessary to rich, and would o find a stand that can be controlled by their own men这段需要的例子更加详细点就好.$ O5 w# r2 m( c- q
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Another reason？？ for the young are happy to accept advices from people in their age is  elderly people often put on a display of  blame-storming when they give some adives for young people，obviously, they don't realized  it is  important that they be gentle and kind in their suggestions.But  this  condition merely appear among the young people，they   give advice or make suggestions sincerely .4 q' h5 V! y) T6 @, K5 E/ ]
In conclusion,i don't think that all the advices given by older people  more valuable than from people our age,because of the experience of age, in things that fall within the compass of it , directs them; but in new things, abuses them

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总结 楼主其实坚持的决心给我了很大的鼓励。 但是作文感觉整体比较混乱。然后感觉好像什么都说了点但是什么都没说清楚的感觉。 这些属个人观点，如有改的不好的地方请多多指教。

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已经改好，多交流啊！

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4# 水果的夏天

谢谢～～我再好好想想

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5.30综合写作 tpo10

   The reading passage explores the issue of the cause of  otter population decline.The professor's lecture deals with the same issue.However,she thinks that the predation hypothesis is the mainly reason ,which contradicts what the reading states.And in the lecture,she uses three specific points to support her idea.

   First,even though the reading passage suggest that pollution, such as oil rigs and other sources of industrial chemical is the mainly reason lead to decrease the otters' population,the professor argues in the lecture that the predation hypothesis is the best explanation.This is because someone could find the dead sea otters'body washing  off  on the beach if it cause by pollution, but the other way round in reality.She thinks that  if sea otters is eaten by a predetar immediately,so it can not wash on the shore.


Second, the reading passage states that enviromenttal pollution affects not only the sea otters death but also  the other species sunch as seals and sea lions were declining.At the same time,the  posibility of occurring predators like orca might be small because they dislike to hanting the small .In contrast, the proffesor said that orcas begin to hunting  otters to change their diet  due to whales decline by human hunting.So it probably is the orcas that are causing the decline of all the smaller sea mammals mentioned in the passage


   Finally,the listening passage asserts that it is not cause by pollution,besause In those locations that orcas can access easily, the number of sea otters has declined greatly. On the other hand, in those locations that orcas can not access such a shallow beach,the number of sea otters remained stable.But the author still said uneven pattern of otter decline due to the pollution hypothesis because of pollutants along the coast.

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5.30独立写作

   Happiness is not based on external status,  not wishing for what we do not have, not just having lots of money in our hand.That's my understanding of the word"happniess".Thus,i think  that even the world has changed fast， ,people  can not say happier than before.


  Psycological studies suggest that  the result of the  social investigation in some economically developed cities shows the lower levels of happiness.At the same time ，according to the statistics，the incidence of depression in nowadays   is ten times than in the past and an decreasing age at onset of depression has been observed attributable to cases.“Why we are getting richer and still unhappy？”This is a question not only in  China ,but also all of the world.  


    Modern society development is rapid, the life rhythm of people is faster and faster, the lifestyle of people also is changing sadly .People are too anxious is the mainly cause of the lower levels of happiness.They worry about housing purchase ,education for their children, the burden of  old-age pension or  much working pressure, even dealing with the problem of getting along with friends and colleagues  be the cause of press.Furthermore,  eagerness not only for money but also for pleasure drags people too much; some can overcome these desires, others can not.In this materialistic society,  the outside world there are too many temptations.You bought  a house then want to a bigger,you got a job then want to a better, you have money then you want to more.But happiness is not just depend on external statusIf desire full of your heart,  happiness  will slip away.

To sum it up, people along with huge pressure and big desire，they are less happy  is certainly clear .Even though living standards have improve，the scientific and technological level  have raise .With the economic development,  people truly get more than past, but it is not replace that  happiness has promote.

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6.2独立写作---------[bDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now are easier to become educated than in the past.]


There are some main reasons for agreeing with the statement that people now access to education easily and it is convenient for people to study than in the past.

In the past,only man has the right to receive education and achieve the success in studies. Fortunately, during the past two decades, the education of women has been booming in practically all countries，which means a level playing field with respect to education has been established.  "For example: since  the founding of the People’s Republic of China in 1949, women have been encouraged into education and careers and instilled with a strong work ethic.What's more,the government has support the programme financially to help people from poor family to become educated.This is a way to broke the traditional concept: only nobility or wealthy family can enjoy the right of receiving education.


On the other hand,the diversification of learning methods is another reason for people to get an education easily.For one thing,if you want to study language,internet has provided a better platform for self-learning online instead of going to the school for studying through tools like academic journals , forums or open courses,internet gives everyone the opportunity to learn or study their foreign speaking skills on an international level.For  example,many public libraries in the country also a good place,which have numbers of book for learning. People can get a wide range of information and materials about any knowledge. Anyway,  educational insititution has developed to enroll many more students than before.


In present time, income and educational achievement are related, which means with economic progressing ,people who are financially rich  can afford more training,and may find higher quality of education more available than in a past poor areas .


For above reasons, we can safely conclude that people in this age can receive education easier than in the earlier age.And i believe that the trend will be more obvious with the development of the society.