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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that older people's advices are more valuable than your ages?

At present, young people are undergoing profound and complex changes brought by the development of modern society, presenting opportunities and new challenges on every aspect of our life. In most cases, those difficulties can be easily solved with the assistance of older people, however, in a certain circumstance, suggestions provided by peers seem to be more effective since they are equipped with passion and optimistic spirit. As far as I am concern, it is important to take the specific situation into consideration before making a judgment.

After graduating from high school I have the option to directly enter the work force which willing to offer 3000RMB per month to attract me as I exhibited a special talent on programming, it was really a fat salary at that time, while the average salary in the city was 2000RMB. The majority of my peers suggested me to treasure this opportunity, since it was obviously a decent job provided by a famous company which possesses the ideal workplace everyone was looking for. It was an inspiring chance to realize my personal value, However, at last I decide to attend college to further my academic study, this decision was based on my father's suggestion who indicated that college provide a perfect environment to learn cooperation as well as develop independence, which are deemed as necessary qualities to be a successful person, after all, I could obtain a larger arena to display my ambitious when I am graduated.

After a long day's work and study, I usually tend to adopt a life style full of comfortable. In this case, young people's advice often seems to be more attractive while older people are always alternating between watching TV and playing mahjong. Before mapping out a plan, young people will take full advantages of the Internet, with large quantities of information to think about, it will definitely enrich our choices. What's more, young people always take some elements like health, excitement and fashion into consideration while prepare an entertainment activity, which rightly meet my special need. In addition, by taking advice like this, I have a chance to strengthen the relationship between friends and colleagues as well as enlarge social contact with people have preference in common.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely to draw the conclusion that both older people's and peers' advices are valuable. What matter most is to take proper suggestion under a specific situation.

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