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When people want to take trips, the problem is删 whether finding a travel agency and joining a group or travelling individually is a controversial one添加. I would like to choose traveling in a group with a tour guide for the reason that individual may get a trip more safety, and help to save a lot both money and time. Firstly建议改成first，比firstly 更规范。, tour guide may make a trip more safety than travelling individually, to some extent. A travel agency is responsible to offer their tour guide a normal train and a qualification certificate to prevent the visitors away from the controllable danger situation. What is more, a tour guide is familiar with the routine and book the qualified restaurant, which is further protecting the visitors. For this reason, travelling in a group can protect visitors from some complex circumstance and make visitors 主语要一致 enjoy the process of a trip with a wonder mood. Secondly, traveling in a group can help us save a lot of time. If people choose to visit some place by themselves, it may cost abundant time to plan the tour routes and book the tickets. Even though, sometimes it cannot be avoided the time consumed to find a place. The only way to make it out is to 这种错误一定要注意！plan it better, which is even cost 跟上一句同样的错误much more time. However, if taking a part in a group, such a problem can be solved in a better way, as a result of the knowledgeable and the professional of the tour guides . Some of the museums or historic buildings have access to the group especially further more and the waiting time can be shortened to great degree. Therefore, there is no doubt that choosing traveling with a group is time saving. Thirdly, it is less costly when travel in a group. Take my sister, May, for instance, May went to Beijing individually last month and she spent 2000yuan at her air tickets. However, it takes merely a half when booking ticket in a travel agency with a group. Not to mention the highly expense of accommodation fee. Through booking in a group, some proportion of the money can be saved, which could be used to buy more local food or on a far more good service, and eventually make the trip more enjoyable than travel alone. In a word, traveling with a tour guide is such a comfortable trip that you do not need to worry about the security problem and saving not only in time and but also in money. 点子是写到了的，句子也蛮通顺的。但是要注意语法问题，和对单词的反复斟酌，不要老是使用同一个单词，注意变化句式。
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