【独立写作】张君临作业贴

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TPO24
In our contemporary society,the value of teenagers' part-time job is much concerned to a point where a deep contemplation has been aroused.A conventional acceptance maintains that it is parents' responsibility to inspire their children to take on the job.Maybe it is a matter of people having his or her own comprehension,taking various factors into consideration,however,I cast doubt on this claim and reckon that it assumes a distorted and narrow view.

First and foremost.Only with sufficient afterschool time,can we have a glimpse of the part-time jobs.As students,studying must be put on the priority.It's a truth universally acknowledged that we are facing more and more academy pressure.News came that,In gesture to get the ticket to the top university , approximately 91 percents students in China spend more than 10hours a day in school.

Furthermore,Knowledge is the key to handle those complex issues,with which human society can evolve progressively.On the contrary,some of the part-time jobs like washing dashes,being waiters, are so ordinary that didn't need any specific skills.We are born with rights and tasks to manifest that the glory of the God is within us.After conquering the thorns and temptations on the way to success ,we would ultimately make it.Yet what we spare no efforts to is not small part-time jobs,but great American dreams.

Finally,Parents are always worrying about us and hope us to get the right course.While the best way to help us make well preparations for the adult life is not taking jobs,but giving us more space to make our own decisions,so that we can be capable of learning the value of responsibility.

In a nutshell, If there is anyone out there who still doubts that the part-time job is kind of impossible mission to the heavy pressure youngster . who still wonders  the significance of acquiring knowledge  in the competitive society .who still questions the urgent demand for teenagers gain access to decide independently.

this essay is my answer.

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:victory: 空一层

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菜鸟一只，第一次发帖，不是很懂规则

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谁能告诉我怎么添加附件word文档啊，太小白了， 我是粘贴了几次，都没有反应:L

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期待修改

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已改 毒舌勿怪

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yayayyya 发表于 2012-8-31 23:26
已改 毒舌勿怪

毒舌么，好期待~

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yayayyya 发表于 2012-8-31 23:26
已改 毒舌勿怪

你说的很对，O(∩_∩)O谢谢。明天就托福一战了，所以9月2号晚上再共勉了

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水平有限，找不出啥改的地方啊

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heverywhere 发表于 2012-9-4 16:21
水平有限，找不出啥改的地方啊

其实是因为我写的太乱了，囧~

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嗨LZ，你写过TPO24的综合吗？   我写了一下，求批改~~多谢啦~~

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heverywhere 发表于 2012-9-5 15:27
嗨LZ，你写过TPO24的综合吗？   我写了一下，求批改~~多谢啦~~

孩子~
你确定不用多练练口语么
我写了TPO24 的独立但是，综合我也帮你看看吧