二战备考日记。本帖加入写作框架，欢迎大家参与讨论分享。

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charlottely 发表于 2012-10-19 20:47
倒数15天。

今天木有做题，木有听听力，木有看阅读。

pat

注意身体

沧海小鱼UID: 3284646

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wrath 发表于 2012-10-19 23:45
pat

注意身体

嗯~嘿嘿 会滴~这两天喝热水喝的感觉我都快成水桶了...

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沧海小鱼 发表于 2012-10-20 16:56
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charlottelyUID: 3284238

倒数14天+13天。

这两天的作文只是单纯的练练，背背范文，木有神马新的创意~
昨天做了一套题，今天做了两套题（有一套是这次复习第一次做的），于是那篇听力做了个全对。
阅读也是读了几篇文章而已。
今天准备开始写小作文，很木有感觉，感觉很不好。
明天开始好好准备小作文。

今天木有看PS，因为想把前天的阅读给做完。
英文成绩单上面那几个科目一直确定不下来，很纠结。

但是总体来说今天复习状态不错，一直都坐得下去。
除了晚上开的那个破会，唉。

明天继续加油。
崭新的一天，崭新的我。
加油加油。

沧海小鱼UID: 3284646

楼主怎么木有日记了啊

happymiaomiaoUID: 3357790

请教楼主如何提高阅读。。我碰到难的文章就几乎一点也看不懂了。。
是分题型击破 还是背单词呢。。求指导。。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

沧海小鱼 发表于 2012-10-23 09:09
楼主怎么木有日记了啊

这两天晚上忙得有点晚，所以差不多是两天记一下。
下回调整一下时间，争取还是一天记一回~
谢谢提醒~
嘿嘿

charlottelyUID: 3284238

happymiaomiao 发表于 2012-10-23 13:55
请教楼主如何提高阅读。。我碰到难的文章就几乎一点也看不懂了。。
是分题型击破 还是背单词呢。。求指导。 ...

唉 亲 你真是问到点子上了
我现在在做5 真是纠结啊
上次做5也不记得有这么纠结
都看不懂 而且不在状态
之前我背过单词 但是都没有背完过
只是一部分
现在我准备把文章里出现的不会的词都摘出来然后背那些

charlottelyUID: 3284238

倒数11+12天。

昨天做了一套听力，木有写阅读。错的还算少。
今天做了一套题，感觉很不在状态，听力卡时间做的，阅读就不是了。
结果听力错了11个，阅读错的还稍微少那么一点点点。
很崩溃。

昨晚熬夜把CV写了个框架，细节内容有待商榷。
PS决定考完雅思再动笔了，不然感觉时间真心不够用。
看阅读的时候词都不认识了。好久木有复习生词了。
结果查词的时候总是感觉这个词绝对背过，再次崩溃。

今晚演讲比赛初赛，稿子是上午上课写的，是课间的时候随便背了背的。
进复赛应该没压力，只是担心后面的，特别是决赛。
刚得知今年选去美国的孩子们也参加了，压力山大。

晚上回来把那天和bqiana老师沟通过后的作文都打出来了。
明天老师说要给我讲讲英文版...忐忑...
作文分析做的不到家，只有那几篇背过的分析了分析。
具体的东西还木有落实，惭愧。

昨天请bqiana老师看了几篇打出来的框架，老师给出了几点意见。
下面贴出来一篇框架和英文翻译，大家可以一起挑挑毛病。
框架中红色标出来的是老师给的意见，一起学习一下咯~

0825 文化 advantage&disadvantage类

题目：Some museums charge visitors for admission while others are free.
What is your opinion? Disadvantages outweigh advantages?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of charging people for admission to museum?

起：
1.        现如今博物馆都倾向于收取更便宜的门票或者免费来吸引游客，普及历史科学知识。
2.        但也有一些人认为博物馆作为收藏珍贵文物的重地，应该向游客收取一定的门票费。

承：
1.        对于那些地处国际旅游城市或地区的博物馆来说，比如美国国家自然历史博物馆，中国故宫博物院等，每天都会有大量的外籍游客来参观。（太长了）
2.        他们保存的文物更容易遭到破坏，所以他们收取进馆费用可以增加文物保护并增强游客的保护意识。
3.        然后，收取进馆费用对很多当地游客及文物爱好者有不好的地方。
4.        他们经常会参观博物馆来丰富巩固自己的知识并进行传播，所以一直对他们收费也有弊处。
5.        我认为，对游客的每次访问都收费或永久免费并不是最好的保护文物及普及知识的方法。（去掉）

转：
1.        收费有利有弊。
2.        博物馆中的文物需要用一定资金来保养，而这笔资金有一大部分来自于游客每天的进馆费用。
3.        这样才能保证博物馆向大家展示保存地更好的文物。
4.        可是维持文物保护仅仅依靠这笔费用是不够的，还需要加上国家的拨款，而国家的拨款正是来源于税收。
5.        所以这些维护费用仍然是来自于公民，也就是说，如果继续对游客尽管收费对人们来说进馆费用过多。
6.        甚至会与博物馆普及历史科学知识的目的相违背。

合：（缺少中心句，概括所有观点的中心句，尽量用简单句）
1.        其实，有很多方法可以解决这个争论。
2.        对游客实行身份辨识，只在他们第一次进馆时收费，之后免费也是一个不错的方法。
3.        由于收取或不收取都各有利弊，所以寻求更好的解决方法才是目前的当务之急。

下面是翻译，也就是我写出来的成品了。这个是根据未经修改的框架写出来的。

Today museums are tend to charge less for admission or even be free of charge to attract visitors and spread historical and scientific knowledge. However, some people hold that museums need to charge a certain amount of money for visitors as vital places preserving precious cultural relics. My view is that charging or not both have advantages and disadvantages.

There are throngs of foreign visitors entering in popular museums being located especially in international tourist cities, like National Museum of Natural History in New York and the Palace Museum in Beijing. It is more possible for cultural relics placed in these museums be damaged or hurt. So charging for admission can help them fund for preservation and raising protection awareness of visitors. Yet keeping collecting admission fee is not good for those who frequently visitor for research and study to enrich themselves and spread the knowledge they gained. Overall, charging visitors for their every entry or permanently free is not the best choice to preserve priceless materials and encouraging people to learn.

Advantages and disadvantages are both obvious for charging. Museums need funds for protecting historic relics and the admission fee accounts for a major part of that fund. So that materials can be exhibited in a better way. But it is insufficient to accomplish the preservation by merely depending on the admission fee. The financial support from government is needed and that comes from tax being collected. Therefore, the money for preservation indirectly come from citizen. If museums continue to charge, that would be too much burden for people to get in those places.

In fact, plenty of methods can be thought of to settle this controversy. Getting ID information of every visitor and charge them only at their first entrance is a good way. Since there are both advantages and disadvantages for charging, so finding the best solution is the priority for museums.

charlottelyUID: 3284238

看来提前贴是正确的，到现在了还是感觉好多事情木有做。
T T。
刚才写了一篇小作文，还木有对答案。
不知道写的烂成神马了。

崭新的一天，崭新的我。
崭新的思想，神马都不多想。
暗示暗示，加油加油。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

倒数第10天。

今天都奉献给老师了。
本身准备晚上7点开始做一套题呢，结果6点50收到老师短信说想让我帮忙写两篇作文就赶回寝室了。
让我雅思作文5.5的人给她写作文...
弄完就9点了，好不容易抽到时间做了一套听力。
因为单复数错了一个，没看清题错了一个，但是这两个都是第一次做的时候没有错的部分。
注意细节。

比昨天的情况好很多，听写了C5T2的section4，是因为瓶颈期还是因为真的好难. T T
昨天的阅读看了一篇多一点，准备整理生词，再不复习单词我估计就毁在这上面了。
作文写了一篇大作文，小作文昨天写的那篇和答案一对比完全不是一回事啊。
今天重新看了结构，但是看到图就头疼。
这再拖就没底了，不行不行，明天好好开始练。
口语今天木有练，感觉都生疏了。
时间还是木有把握好。老感觉不够用。
还是分心。提高效率。

今天还是要贴出来一篇作文滴。
仍然是红字改出来的部分是bqiana老师给出的建议。

0804 传媒 both views and opinion类

题目：
In some countries, TV programmes are transmitted throughout the day and night. Some people think that 24-hour TV transmission is a positive development, while others believe it is negative.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

起：
1．        在某些国家，电视播放时间是有一定限制的，但在另外一些国家，电视是可以24小时播放的。
2．        有些人认为24小时播放是电视产业发展的主要趋势，而另外一些人却认为这样的播放在一定程度上对社会造成了负面影响。

承：
1.        彻夜播放电视节目有好的方面。
2.        这代表着电视产业的更好发展，对相关科技长远发展有促进作用。
3.        可以鼓励电视生产商升级生产方式。
4.        很显然，这样也有利于直播国际赛事，像伦敦奥运会，而且人们也可以使用更好的设备更好的享受赛事。
5.        另外，昼夜播放电视节目也给人们提供了更多的选择。
6.        他们可以根据自己的时间表来随时打开电视放松。

转：
1.        同时，昼夜不停播放也带来了一些社会问题。
2.        那些长期观看电视的人们，尤其是喜欢在晚上看电视的人们，一般生活不规律，而这样对他们的身体很不好。
3.        并且他们晚上开着很大的音量看电视会打扰到邻居。
4.        长期开着电视也很容易造成机械故障，甚至引发火灾。
5.        然而，很少偶人有足够的时间和精力每天熬夜看电视，所以彻夜发射电视信号也是一种资源浪费。

合：(3句比较好)
1.        总之，所有的电视台24小时播放是有负面影响的。
2.        但是如果限定所有的电台不能昼夜播放的话既不利于电视产业的发展也不能达到随时娱乐用户的目的。
3.        所以可以选定一些夜间收视率最高的电视台实行24小时播放，其他电视台适当限定时间。
4.        这样对电视产业和居民们都有好处。

There are time limits for TV transmission in some countries, yet others allow TV programs to transmit day and night, even when there are only few people watching TV, and this usually occurs at night. Some people find that 24-hour TV transmission is a major trend for the TV industry, however, others hold that it brings about more negative effects than positive ones.

Permanent transmission is good to some extent. This represents the rapid development of the TV industry and can promote further improvement in related technology. It can also encourage TV manufacturers to upgrade their way of television making. Obviously, it is more convenient to broadcast major shows on air, such as the Olympics, and for people to enjoy fantastic shows with better facilities. Besides, transmitting day and night can provide more choices for users. They can turn on the TV at any time according to their timetables and their preferences.

Meanwhile, 24-hour TV transmission also generates many social problems. People who watch TV shows for a long time, especially at night, turn out to have irregular life which is pretty harmful to their health and their watching TV with high volume annoys their neighbors a lot. Keeping turning on the facilities can easily cause mechanical failures and even fire. However, there are few people who have enough time and energy to stay up late every night for shows, so transmitting signals all night can be considered as a waste of resources.

Overall, having all TV programs transmitting all the time causes passive effects. Yet it is negative for the development of the TV industry and too restricted for entertaining users if all programs are restrained by certain transmitting hours. Therefore, several top popular programs can be allowed to transmit 24 hours and others be closed at certain hours. This would benefit for both the TV industry and citizens.

最后一段还木有改成3句。文中黑体加下划线的部分是我感觉需要注意的词汇以及连接词。
文章的语法还是不要深究啦，嘿嘿嘿。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

倒数第9天。

啊，已经单数记了啊。
今天差不多一天的课，终于把剑5阅读的生词全部解决完了。
但是回头一看全部忘了。泪奔。

下午写了一篇作文。
晚上开始写题，听力和阅读前两篇还算比较顺利。
木有怎么被打扰。
结果做到最后一篇的时候老师和另外一个童鞋进来了。
然后开始比较大声的交流啊亲，结果最后一篇文章错惨了惨了惨了惨了啊。

结果回来之后时间也不多了，只能把昨天和今天写的作文框架已经翻译誊到电脑上，就到现在了。
看了看版里，今天的帖子好多~小激动~
明天满天课，想想都头疼。
要抓紧时间睡觉，好好休息。

但是作文还是要贴的，这两天一天贴两篇吧，不然贴不完了。
前一周都木有贴，嘿嘿。
只是还木有找老师提更改意见，大家凑合着看看吧，有意见一起讨论啊~

0901 体育 agree&disagree类

题目：
Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

起：
1.        伦敦奥运会在今年夏天举办，吸引了众多媒体的关注与报道。
2.        正是他们的报到是人们知晓，国家用于培养和训练运动员的资金总数惊人。
3.        于是，有人提议说，国家更应该将这笔资金投入对孩子参与体育活动的兴趣培养上，这样才能更好地体现奥林匹克的全民运动精神。

承：
1.        国家培养运动员使他们在参与国际运动比赛时取得好成绩，有一个重要目的，就是为了在一定程度上提高国际知名度。
2.        因而可以吸引外资用于逐渐促进国内经济发展。
3.        同时，国家其他领域与之呼应，可以增强国家实力提高国际地位。

转：
1.        然而，提高国际地位不能只依赖于通过大比赛争得的外资。
2.        很显然，这是远远不够的。
3.        但如果能将这笔巨额资金投入到运动设施的建设以及对孩子体育兴趣的培养上，它将会发挥更大的作用。
4.        孩子是十几二十年之后祖国的中坚力量，如果他们能拥有更健康的身体与精神条件，那么他们将会有更好的成就。
5.        如果孩子们从小就被鼓励去参加体育活动，那么那些有运动天赋的孩子们经过一定训练后也能够在大型运动比赛上创造辉煌的成绩。
6.        然而，顶级运动员们的运动设施也需要与国际标准持平，所以他们的训练费用并不能全部被用来支持孩子们的运动。
7.        总之，争取平衡分配目前投资于训练顶级运动员的巨额资金是很有必要的。

合：
1.        总之，国民身体素质不能通过若干运动员的赛场表现来衡量。
2.        国家应将目光放的长远，综合各方面考量。
3.        只有将所有公民的利益放在第一位，国家才能更加繁荣发展。

The 2012 London Olympics was hold this summer attracting numerous media to report. A fact was shown to people throughout the world from their coverage that many countries invest in a huge amount of money on top athletes for supporting them to compete in worldwide sports events, especially the Olympics. Therefore, some people propose that governments need to spend this money on encouraging children to play sports, and only in this way, can the true spirit of the Olympics be reached.

One major reason for governments pour lots of money on fostering top athletes is to raise the nations’ international fame to some extent. So they can attract foreign investments and help to develop domestic economy little by little. Meanwhile, the other major fields of the countries are also improving, so that their comprehensive strengths would be enhanced.

However, improving a nation’s international status cannot be achieved by simply depending on the foreign investments they attracted via worldwide sports events. Obviously, that is far from enough. Yet if this amount of money can be used for establishing sports devices and nurturing sports interests of kids, it would be more useful. Children are the significant group some ten to twenty years later and the can get more and better achievements if they have healthier physical and mental conditions. If kids can be well encouraged in sports since they were young, the ones who have sports talents would have the ability of getting great prizes in sports events as well. Nevertheless, the training condition should keep pace with international sports event so the fund investing to their training cannot be totally dispensed on encouraging children. Overall, trying to balance the needs for both top athletes and children is very necessary.

In conclusion, the comprehensive physical quality of all citizens cannot be weighed by the performance of top athletes. Governments need to be long-sighted and consider long-term profits. Countries would be more prosperous only if they put citizen’s benefits at the very first place.




0809 科技 报告类

题目：
Mobile (cell) phones and the Internet play an important role in the way in which people relate to one another socially.
Is this a positive or negative development?
What is your opinion?

起：
1.        随着科技的快速发展，人们越来越经常使用手机来进行沟通与交流。
2.        只有少部分人仍在使用信件或登门拜访。
3.        有些人认为这些高科技联络方式拉近了人与人之间的距离，而另一些人认为正是这些科技使社会越来越冷漠。

承：
1.        使用高科技来联络有很多好处。
2.        可以使人们及时联系到对方，这样就省去了不必要的交通费用并且提高了办事效率。
3.        而且，人们不必要通过见面才能联络感情，一个电话，一封邮件，一条短信或视频通话都可以达到此目的。
4.        现今科技为人们提供了更多的选择，例如人们可以打电话听到声音，甚至可以用手机进行视频通话，比信件沟通更立体，给人以真切感。

转：
1.        但同时他们也有不好的影响，不论是对个人还是对社会。
2.        人们越来越沉溺于把上网聊天作为消遣而忽视了工作与学习。
3.        虽然视频聊天可以使人听到声音并同时看到对方的图像，但永远比不上难过时可以及时给予的拥抱的温暖。
4.        年轻人利用网络创造了网络词汇等，对传统文字是一种潜在的威胁。
5.        人们倾向于在网络世界中生活，忽视了现实生活中关系的建立。
6.        邻居之间互相不认识，社区关系冷淡等大部分都由这个原因引起。

合：
1.        总之，我的观点是，虚拟代替不了现实。
2.        虽然大家可以适当利用手机与网络进行联系，但还是要分清虚拟与现实。

Mobile phones and the Internet has become a major mediate for people and groups to contact and communicate with each other with the rapid development of technology. On the contrary, the number of people who still using letters or visiting others personally is countable. Some people think connecting each other with phones and computers shortens the distance among friends while others hold that the relationship is much colder because of this.

Using phones and computers for communication shows plenty of advantages. People don’t need to ask for information by seeing each other and that can save them a long period of time and some transportation bills which improves the work efficiency. The Internet and mobile phones are also widely used among people to build loving personal relationships. A phone call, an e-mail, a text message, or a video call can make seeing each other face to face unnecessary. High technology provides people many choices. Posting cost being saved by online chatting, voice being heard by calling, images being seen by video call and they all make the communication more real.

However, high-tech communication exhibits disadvantages as well. It is easy for people to addicted to online chatting and pay less attention to their work and study. Moreover, they ignore the establish of personal relationships in real life which contribute to cool atmosphere in communities and many people even do not know who their neighbors are. In addition, although chatting through video displays images and voice to people, it can never replace the warm hug given by friends who sit beside you. And the frequent use of messages and emails among creative youngsters generated plenty of “internet terms” which is becoming a great threaten to traditional words and culture.

Overall, my view is that virtual world can never get the place of the real one. Although it is great for people to use high technical methods to maintain personal relationship, they need to distinguish reality out of virtual things.

第二篇的连接词貌似少了，仍然是英文里黑体加下划线的部分是连接词以及我认为可以用到作文里的词汇。
不知道对这些词的判断对不对，大家可以一起来讨论呀~~~

不早了，快睡觉。
崭新的一天，崭新的我。
大家一起来加油~~~

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倒数第8天。

考试前最后一个上课的周五。
下周周五的课已经安排好调换了，就等着周四晚上回家了。
今天只写了一篇作文，木有做题。
晚上想放松一下。
明天调整好状态好好复习。

两篇作文~

0728 艺术 agree&disagree类

题目：
Some people believe that arts, such as painting and singing, do not directly improve the quality of people’s lives that therefore government's money should be spent on other things.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

起：
1.        很多国家为了提高社会综合素质，建立了很多艺术馆，歌剧院等，方便人们闲暇时陶冶情操。
2.        艺术馆中收藏了大量的名家作品，歌剧院也挑选了很多精彩剧目，参观者很多。
3.        但有人认为，这些艺术并不能直接提高人们的生活质量，所以建议政府将投入到这些建设上的钱用来发展其他更加实用的领域。

承：
1.        他们认为，现今阶段，科技发展并未成熟，GDP并不算高，人们的物质生活水平尚有待提高。
2.        所以，国家应全力发展科研，努力设计出更便利人们生活的交通系统，创造出更先进的交通工具，寻找出增加粮食产量的方法等来提高人们生活水平。
3.        解决这些实际的问题都比精神方面虚无的东西要紧急很多。
4.        而现在投入到科研领域的资金对于完成这些任务来说还远远不够。
5.        所以政府应把投入到艺术上的钱用于其他领域，尤其是与人民生活有关的科研。

转：
1.        精神文明对人类发展有很重要的作用，其包含在生活中的方方面面。
2.        语言发展过程中，对其赋予音律形成的小曲是现代歌曲的前身。
3.        它们承载着一定的文化，并将古代的文化流传至今。
4.        这里不仅包含着当时的文化生活状况，更包含当时的科技水平，有利于人们了解人类各方面的发展历程。
5.        一些人们不能用文字记录的东西被用图画等方式记录了下来，而这些艺术品对人类文明发展有着很好的记载和体现。
6.        所以国家投入一定量资金研究艺术及支持艺术发展，像建立艺术馆，歌剧院等，都是必不可少的。

合：
1.        个人来说，我认为，人们生活只有物质是很悲哀的，人的思维与思想是其区别于其他动物的核心。
2.        所以国家要继续坚持对艺术的投入，并确保其能与其他科技共同发展。
3.        这才是物质和精神文明的发展趋势。

Many countries have built plenty of art galleries where priceless paintings in both ancient and modern times are shown and opera houses which top classical shows are played in for their citizens to visit in their spare time. So people can not only relax but improve their inner qualities. However, some people think their lives cannot be immediately improved by visiting these venues so it is necessary for governments to transfer the money they are going to invest to other practical researches.

They hold that life qualities of people, low GDP and technology are all to be improved. Therefore, nations need to pay all their attention to these fields, like trying to design new transportation system, inventing advanced vehicles and figuring out better ways of increasing crop yields. Obviously, these practical problems are more urgent to be settled than virtual ones. However, the fund for sophisticated technology is insufficient now so governments should withdraw the money to be used for arts and invest in technological fields.

Nevertheless, cultural progress plays a vital role in human being’s development and is contained in various aspects of people’s lives. The original songs were generated by the progress of language. They were added with traditional culture and lasted to now. The culture, being consisted in those songs, not only related to cultural progress, but technology as well. This helps us get to know the progress of culture and science. People recorded things in other ways, such as paintings, if language is invalid to describe, and these records are perfect reflection of people’s lives then. Progress can be made only if research scientists know about the history. So getting money on supporting arts development is significant.

As far as I am concerned, the ability to think is the core where people distinguish themselves from other animals and it is miserable if we have tangible materials only. So nations need to consist in investing in arts and guarantee that they can develop together with other essential fields. This is the main trend for both material and cultural progress.

貌似这篇连接词还是比较少。


第二篇~
0721 交通 报告类

题目：
In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic become a problem.
What is the causes of that and what actions could be taken to solve the problem?

起：
1.        汽车的方便和快捷使其成为了现在最流行的交通工具之一。
2.        这也代表着城镇与城市经济水平的上升。
3.        然而随之而来的问题，像道路噪音，也给人们带来了困扰。

承：
1.        道路噪音是有多方面原因造成的。
2.        汽车从被发明到被广泛使用的时间相对较短，对于中国来说，城镇道路建设速度虽说不慢，可与私家车数量增长率相比，还有一定距离。
3.        因此，不合理的道路规划使居民区与车流量大的地区相邻，鸣笛吵闹声不绝于耳。
4.        除此之外，在高速公路上也同样存在问题。
5.        车子高速行驶以及高速路两旁没有隔音装置导致高速路噪音也成了一大问题。
6.        而这些问题都是随着汽车的广泛使用而出现的。

转：
1.        有很多方式可以解决这个问题。
2.        对于城区内部的问题来说，可以规定市区内车辆不准鸣笛。
3.        现在有很多城市，包括北京和郑州，都实行了此规定，且效果比较显著。
4.        而对于高速路上的噪音来说，可以从两方面来采取措施。
5.        一方面鼓励车主更换噪音小的轮胎。
6.        另一方面，由政府投资建设隔音带，减少噪声污染。

合：
1.        科技的飞速发展难免会带来很多问题，这会影响到生活的方方面面。
2.        可是对居民及政府来说，面对问题我们应努力去解决。
3.        这样才能充分利用科技创造出更好的生活。

The high speed and convenience of cars has made them one of the most popular vehicles around the world. This reflects the stronger economy power in cities as well as in towns. However, despite the advantages they bring about, some problems appear too, and the high volume of road traffic is the most urgent one to solve.

High road traffic volume is caused by several factors. Although governments are trying to keep pace with private cars’ increasing rate, apparently, they need to work harder. Therefore, community members get annoyed because of their proximity to roads which experience huge traffic flow mainly attributing to inappropriate city lay-out. Besides, this problem is obvious on expressways. High speed of cars heightening the voice made by tyres pushing the road and the absence of insulation devices both contribute to the high expressway traffic volume.

Plenty of actions can be taken to address this problem. Policies can be put forward to forbid blowing horns inside the city to reduce the noise pollution downtown. This method has been put into effect in some cities including Beijing and Zhengzhou and it works great. For that problem on expressways, efforts can be made from both drivers and governments. Drivers should be encouraged to use tyres which can decrease the volume and governments need to invest in the contribution of insulation belts so that the noise pollution can be reduced.

Unavoidably, there would be many disadvantages of new technology that can be used in our daily life. What people need to do when they are faced with those problems would be to find the best solution. Only in this way, can people and groups make full use of the new technology and create a better life.

这篇第二段的连接次貌似还挺多。
就是后面又不行了。

各位晚安。

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倒数第7天。

剩下完整的一周啦，不知道今天考试的同学们命运如何。
下一次就该我上考场了。

今天做了一套题，剑6第一套。
做完发现！！听力和上次做错的一样的数，好多题都是二次错。
阅读竟然还比上次多错了两道！也是好多二次错！
唉，这次练习的时候总是感觉思维很局限，上下文结合方面有点不太好。
所以填空经常少填词，单复数问题又木有解决。
阅读的AB重现做的不够好，总是联想不到。
嗯，剩下的这几天着重看这几个方面吧。

今天木有听写section4，听写了section3因为错了很多。
但是section4也错了不少，只是木有听。
口语又木有练！！！无语了。我封嘴。

这两天写作文好折磨啊，有时候拿到题都不知道该怎么想，
小作文也是不知道该如何下手。

10月13号考试的那个同学分数出来了。
上次考了7，这次她考了6.5，写作上次6这次6.5，但是口语上次6这次5.5...
更无语的是阅读上次9这次竟然是6.5...
挺无语的。我也怕到时候做什么都木有状态。

算了不想了，尽量做好自己。

今天还是贴两篇作文。

0712 教育 agree/disagree类

题目：
It is better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

起：
1.        现今越来越多的大学生选择到离家近的大学求学。
2.        甚至有很多学生可以选择走读回家并不是和室友住在学校寝室。
3.        有些人认为这是一种不好的现象，另一些人表示赞同，而另一部分人表示无所谓。

承：
1.        大学生住在家里有很多好处。
2.        回家很方便，而且环境很熟悉，不用适应新环境。
3.        还可以和家人度过更多的时间，有事即使和家人分享不用他们担心。
4.        除此之外，自己原先的朋友们经常可以见面联络感情。
5.        在以前的朋友圈子上扩大关系网，为以后在本地的工作做好准备。

转：
1.        选择离家远的大学显然有更多好处。
2.        自己到另外一个陌生的地方，没有了父母百般照顾，所有的事情都要自己学着去处理，很锻炼办事能力。
3.        与室友共处一间屋子，互相理解互相包容，这样能提高人际交往能力。
4.        许多城镇的学生选择大城市的名校深造，获取了很多的工作机会。
5.        并且他们在这些大学建立起的关系网在走向社会后会很有价值。

合：
1.        大学是社会的缩影
2.        学生们在大学里不仅要学习，还要学会独立以及提高自己各方面的能力，为走入社会做准备。
3.        这些能力只有在完全独立的环境中才能提高更多。

Today, a great amount of students choose universities which are close to their homes. Actually, plenty of them end up living with parents at home instead of with roommates in halls of residence. Some people think this is no good while others think it is beneficial for students, yet others hold neutral opinion.

Living with family is good in some aspects. Students can stay in a familiar environment and gain certain safety without forcing themselves to adapt to unfamiliar bed and room. Spending more time together with parents encourages them to share news at once which can reduce parents’ worry about their daughters and sons. In addition to this, youngsters can frequently contact with and meet their old friends to keep warm their personal relationships. If they want to work in their hometown, it would be great for students to build their personal relationship net in universities located near their homes.

On the other hand, picking universities away from home and living in dorms hold, obviously, more advantages. It is necessary for college students to learn how to handle all of their personal affairs totally by themselves. Trying to know and understand their roommates can also teach students how to make better personal relationships. Besides, students from town who wanted to stay in metropolis for work can get to know the atmosphere in cities and plenty of intern opportunities. And the social network they built in college would be of great value after their graduation.

University is mini-society. Obtaining knowledge is not the only thing students need to do in colleges and they also need to improve their comprehensive abilities to prepare themselves for stepping into society. All these significant abilities can be improved faster if students stayed in universities independently.

0707 广告 agree/disagree类 （广告类好多...）

题目：
Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

起：
1.        随着视频制作行业的飞快发展，3D电影推出的同时也导致了3D广告的出现。
2.        越来越好的广告也暗示着它优秀的宣传及促销效果，同时也带来了更多的广告。
3.        有些人指出，广告在促销方面的作用远远大于促进公司提高产品质量的作用。

承：
1.        广告确实可以促进公司销售。
2.        色彩鲜明的广告页，生动诱人的视频广告以及立体的3D广告使人们很动心。
3.        因此人们在购物时会偏向于选择这些产品。
4.        除此之外，能做得起广告的公司一般都有雄厚的经济实力。
5.        所以，人们认为公司会投入很多钱用于购买产品原料，提高产品生产技术等。
6.        因此在购买这些产品时会更有安全感。
7.        并且，广告，尤其是对刚起步的生产优秀产品的公司来说，是很有用的，因为很多人将通过广告熟悉品牌并尝试使用，这将为公司带来很多潜力客户。

转：
1.        然而，广告的泛滥也会导致很多的负面作用，特别是产品的质量问题。
2.        同样有影响力的公司为了进一步提高销量，采取了降价的措施。
3.        由于对利润的追求，这些公司生产的产品质量有了极小程度的下降。
4.        而这些微小的改变是不容易被用户发现的，但这侵害了用户的权益。
5.        同时，有很多公司开始效仿，最终会导致质量上的严重下降。
合：
1.        广告对个人，对公司都有很大的影响。
2.        长远来看，公司需要清楚地知道广告的影响，并且不断提高产品质量。
3.        只有这样，才能对消费者和公司都得好。

There are an increasing number of three-dimensional advertisements for promotion with the immense video making technology development. This reflects the great promotion ability of commercials and encourages more companies to make their production well-known in this way. While a group of people point out that this phenomenon can cause companies to invest in a lot on publicity instead of quality improvement.

Undeniably, advertisement have great effects on promoting products. Leaflets with colorful pictures, video ads with vivid images and even three-dimensional clips causing lifelike feelings can precisely sway consumers a lot. Therefore, people prefer to choose the advertised products. In addition to this, companies which have the ability to make advertisements are thought to have great economy power and pour enough money to buy better raw materials for products making and upgrade the technology of goods manufacture. As a result of it, consumers are tend to believe in these companies and can gain the sense of safety when purchasing their good. Moreover, making commercials is beneficial for newly started companies producing high quality goods since its brand would be knew by more people and that would attract many potential customers.

However, the overflow of advertisements generates negative effects as well. Companies producing goods with qualities about the same put new methods into effect, such as cutting the price down to some extent, to improve their competitive abilities. Naturally, they would use worse raw material to manufacture with the aim of pursuing great amount of profits. This little decrease in quality is difficult to be found by consumers but it is actually harming people’s rights. At the same time, much more companies would imitate this method and finally, that results in a remarkable drop in the quality of goods.

In conclusion, the development of the advertising industry have great influence on both individuals and companies. To be long-sighted, companies need to have a clear perspective of the effects of advertisement and keep improving their goods’ quality. Only in this way, can both consumers and productions manufacturers be benefited.

不知道这几篇写的到底怎么样。
都木有让老师们看。

今天到这啦，各位早点睡，晚安啦。