二战备考日记。本帖加入写作框架，欢迎大家参与讨论分享。

okqishiUID: 3245371

原来小可要准备二战啊，加油啦！

沧海小鱼UID: 3284646

楼主 我对你的毅力甚是钦佩啊！

charlottelyUID: 3284238

倒数第6天。

总感觉今天是第5天，唉，不过明天就是了。
今天做了一套题感觉还差不多吧。
听力单复数错一个，拼写错一个，然后错了俩。
阅读错了三个，弥补了一下昨天的差成绩，心里好受多了。

文章并没有精读完，只是发现这遍精读时的不太懂的长句比上次精读要多，
不知道是肿么回事。
写作终于憋出来一部分，但是还是不熟悉。

下面的这篇还是以前写的，今天先贴一篇框架~

0630 旅游+文化 报告类

题目：
Some visitors are interested in other countries' cultures and traditions.
How they learn other cultures and traditions?
Why this is interesting to some visitors but not to others.

起：
1.        在最近五十年中，不仅是民族间的交流，国际间的交流也越来越频繁。
2.        人们只要满足一定的条件就可以到另一个完全不同的文化与传统背景中参观了解。
3.        有些游客只是想去散散心，而有些游客则是想去学习不同的物质与精神文明。

承：
1.        想要学习文化与传统的游客们以很多方式来探索他们感兴趣的东西。
2.        在出发前，他们会通过查找书籍等其他可靠文献资料来提前了解吸引他们的目的地所处位置，当地基本文化等。
3.        到达目的地后，适当延长停留时间是一种好的方法。
4.        因为只有和当地人多交流，多相处才能深入了解当地文化的隐含内容，而且一定要遵守当地习俗。
5.        同时，拜访当地博物馆，艺术馆等了解文化与传统的发展历史。
6.        除此之外，语言也是很重要的因素，因为语言与文化息息相关。

转：
1.        可是这些只是一部分游客的兴趣所在，另一部分游客却对此并不感兴趣，这是有多种因素导致的。
2.        人们从小在不同的家庭环境中长大，有些人喜欢精神方面的元素，而很多人喜欢追求物质实体的享受。
3.        这就导致了有些人出外为了了解文化，而有些人只是为了放松。
4.        喜欢新鲜事物的人们喜欢探索新的东西，而思想较为保守的人们并不太愿意去了解甚至接受不同文化，
5.        而喜爱与否主要取决于人们的生长环境对他们的影响以及不同的价值观。

合：现今世界已经变成了地球村，文化的融合是不可避免的，而不论人们对不同文化喜爱与否，都应对这些文化保持清醒认识。

因为英文版的还木有打出来...嘿嘿。
每天去图书馆，回来都快十点了。
收拾收拾时间确实不太够，剩下的这几天看情况贴英文滴。
嘿嘿，不早啦。

该调整中作息时间了。明天调过课了，要加油。
嘿嘿，崭新的一天，崭新的我。
大家一起加油！

charlottelyUID: 3284238

okqishi 发表于 2012-10-27 23:54
原来小可要准备二战啊，加油啦！

嗯~对啊 二战好紧张啊...
哈哈 谢谢鼓励~会加油滴~

charlottelyUID: 3284238

沧海小鱼 发表于 2012-10-28 09:17
楼主 我对你的毅力甚是钦佩啊！

谢谢啊~
不过我这个人经常偷懒滴..
比如今天...嘿嘿嘿
木有啦 大家都很努力啊
一起加油啊~

charlottelyUID: 3284238

五。

早上起晚了，看来以后晚上得早点睡啊早点睡。
这几天都是快一点了才睡着。

今天写了一套题，比较放松的写的，之前对这套题研究的比较深，所以印象也很深。
听力和阅读都错了1个。
口语今天又木有练，不过跟着其他班上课去了，这个比较好，哈哈。
作文今天写了一篇，是昨天剩下来一半木有写的。
今天再重新看突然就发现貌似跑题了，然后因为快到考试了就不打草稿直接下笔了。
不知道今天的跑题了木有。

就打出来了今天的，那就先贴今天的吧。

0519 食品 agree/disagree类

题目：
The increase in food production owes much to fertilisers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

直接上文~
Over the last century, the increasing rate of the world’s total population is out of our wildest imagination. To meet the huge requirements for food, every nation started to find natural or artificial ways to increase their food productivity, including using fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people point out that heavily depending on fertilizers and machinery to produce food is of no good to human health and community.

On the one hand, using fertilizers and machinery to increase the grain yield is effective and necessary today. The lightening speed of population increase has put too much pressure on plow land throughout the world. As a result of it, researchers in different countries studied and tried various methods to try to make the speed of food production at the same rate with population explosion. However, it is, obviously, not enough to provide sufficient crops to people for their daily demand. Therefore, new ways of helping to get more production out of fields and fertilizer and machinery have been put into use. Since people always asking for better living condition, food quality cannot be left behind. So fertilizers and better machinery need and have to be used in today’s agriculture.

On the other hand, there are plenty of disadvantages if people overused these methods. Many food producing company added too much chemical factors to food they sold so that those productions would look more attractive. All of these actions were done in every step of grain’s growth, like using fertilizers containing materials shortening grains’ lifespan, dyeing food to get them look fresher and pouring stuffs to prevent them from rotting naturally. These are all difficult for costumers to find but they are actually hurting people’s rights and health. If this phenomenon cannot be stopped, many companies would imitate this method and that would turn out to be tremendous harm to not only human health but also community.

Overall, getting appropriate help from fertilizers and better machinery to meet people’s demand for food is reasonable, but there should be a more strict rule and it is necessary for governments to supervise so that human health and community peace can be guaranteed.

字数358，写着写着就超了，这两天也应该在答题纸上练习练习看看了。
貌似今天的语法错误比较多，好多词不会写...唉。
最后的四天，3ers大家要一起加油。

frankiepnUID: 197529

lz好认真啊。。。我也是113考   压力巨大啊   口语写作只求上6.。。好紧张

charlottelyUID: 3284238

frankiepn 发表于 2012-10-30 14:22
lz好认真啊。。。我也是113考   压力巨大啊   口语写作只求上6.。。好紧张

啊~要加油啊~一起努力~
还有最后几天~

charlottelyUID: 3284238

四。

今天做了一套题，听力阅读都错了四个。呜呜呜。
写作今天看见题就头疼，可是还是写了，第二篇的时候重新写了才写完，第一遍搁到那实在不知道写神马。
小作文昨天练了曲线图，今天练了一个饼状图。
这几天一天一个图形吧，到时候千万不要出地图题或者流程图啊，不然我会死翘翘的。

文章木有精读，听力木有再听。
早上准备背一篇小作文，但是时间不太够用木有背熟，又复习了一下之前背过的一篇大作文。

下面上今天刚出炉的新品~

0512 社会治安 agree&disagree类

题目：
Prisons are useless for crime problems and education is a better solution.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Prisons were considered as the best place to get criminals in for centuries. However, its authority is shaky today since people start to pay more attention to human rights. Jail, where a great amount of physical punishments take place, is being questioned by citizens of whether it is the best solution to address crimes.

There are certain reasons to emperors, chairmen and presidents' popularity of prisons. It is necessary to arrest criminals after they committed crimes so that they can be stopped from hurting people and public properties. From then on, offenders were taught with moral ideas and thoughts aiming to eliminate those negative thinking inside their minds. As a result of it, some criminals realizing their faults can decide to start a new life. In their lives afterwards, they can teach others with their own experience and encourage people to obey laws and regulations. This is effective to reduce the crime rate theoretically.

By contrast, the reality is not the way it is thought to be. After being sent to prisons, offenders feel lonely, abandoned and isolated because they can merely talk to people who also committed crimes or officers who would not treat them with respect instead of their family members. Besides, they have to do heavy physical works in their spare time and they have rather poor accommodation. Their negative feelings upon the society was strengthened and crimes would be committed soon after they go back home. Comparing with these side effects, education would be the better choice to revise criminals’ thoughts. It doesn’t relate to heavy physical burdens and punishments and prisoners can feel that they are being cared by governments and people even though they did something shameful. Therefore, it is faster and better for them to realize their faults and start again to work harder for compensation.

Overall, the power of thoughts cannot be underestimated and direct physical punishments can boost hate of individuals, so the method of educating should be put into use in the future to settle crime problems.

今天就先整成这样吧，该睡觉了，真不好意思，下次上了再润色。
随笔写的，不知道错误能有多少。

各位早点睡，晚安啦。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

三。

上次准备的时候还有liuyixi28同学陪着一起写备考日记，这次就我孤单单一个人在写耶。
准备雅思的童鞋们都可以加入哦。

今天做了一套听力，阅读木有做完。
下午做的阅读，上午做完听力之后又颓废了。
明天已经木有单独的做题时间了，因为课是从早上到晚，下午下课直接回家去了。
但是后天有一天可以回想，那就是考前最后一天了。

今天听力错了一个，因为木有听到。
发现了一个挺让我恼自己的问题，那些题目明明有很多都已经记下来了，而且整套书也都做了两三遍了，
可是为神马就只做了一次全对呢，其他的题怎么都要错！！
特别是听力，能全对没有全对的情况，除了那些木有听出来的，不是单复数就是拼写出错！！
小作文今天练了表格题，看过例文之后发现例文列的数据比较多，对比并不是特别多。
但是我是拿到题一般都晕了不知道肿么下手啊。

唉，希望考试那天能有好状态，能做好。
我不希望这次也考个6.5...T T
今天是复赛的第二天，希望我到时候可以拿出自己最好的状态来比赛。

好啦，上今天的作文。这个是几天前应该写的，但是当时根本就不知道该说什么，今天硬着头皮流水帐写完了。惭愧....

0609 媒体 agree&disagree类

题目：
Some people think news have no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

先上我自己写的。

The Central China Television has been broadcasting news programs for over 30 years every evening and these programs are always popular. Many people watch them on time to gain general ideas about China or other countries. However, it is pointed out that news have no connection to people’s lives and reading or watching them is wasting time.

News can be divided into several categories, respectively relating to politics, economy, technology and social life, etc. Normally, politics news would be broadcasted first because of its importance and the social structure in China. Since many people are not interested in politics, especially youngsters, therefore they think news are boring and stop watching them. When they encountered with those similar materials in newspapers, they would skip and look for other interesting reports. Actually, the news they do not want to watch is merely politics ones. They are still attracted by anecdotes happened anywhere throughout the world, like an Italian can hold his breath over 4 minutes and the Chinese writer Mo Yan got the Nobel Prize in literature. It is obvious that news are everywhere in our lives.

News are related to our daily lives closely. People can know the basic situation their countries are in and how do the interrelationship go, etc. Then they can arrange their travel or business schedules according to those reports. Besides, news concerning to economy is rather worth watching. The financial crisis happened in Wall Street can have the potential to influence the finance around the world which would lead to a period of tough time for every individual. In addition to this, high technology that can be used in people’s lives are briefly introduced by news and people can make good use of them to make their lives better. Last but not the least, things in news about people’s normal life, one of the most popular news categories, may happened on persons living around. So the notion of “no connection” is not the issue.

It is necessary for people living in this internationalized era to know some information about the world, the country and the community through news, and only in this way can they keep pace with the whole world.

今天确实是流水帐，而且字数也超了特别多。
这两天尽量早点睡，所以现在要收拾收拾上床啦。
嘿嘿，明天继续早起。
期待明天回家~
各位晚安。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

呜啦啦我终于回来啦。
考试完正数1天~吼吼~~

考试前2天及考试那天总结~
周四那天因为要跟别的班上课，所以一天满课，木有做题。
周五那天只做了一套题，然后根据周四晚上在回家路上是和lynn聊的，把写作的几种类型给总结了一下。
其他的就木有干了，小作文这次练的超级少，话说上次练的也不多。
这次考试超级平静，比上次淡定多了。
也有可能是因为上次考试穿的太薄了老师还开着制冷冻死了。
这次穿着妈妈让我穿的羽绒服一点都不冷，下午见考官我都感觉我俩生活在两个世界。
听力感觉挺难，阅读没写完，写作没检查，口语说的乱七八糟的。
这次就等死啦。

今天放松了一天，除了上午毕业生信息采集，看了半个上午加一个小屋莫言的白狗秋千架。
有的故事还是很喜欢的。
比如丑兵，黑沙滩，民间音乐和三匹马。刚刚看了没多少。
毕竟是要放松一天的嘛，那就过的丰富多彩一点。
所以提前回来准备看电影，哇咔咔。

从明天开始要忙着写PS，CV和推荐信啦。
大家要继续加油啊。

frankiepnUID: 197529

听力我写错好几个单词   self-defense双写了f    seventy six脑子短路写706
阅读第二篇做的很烂
写作也是完全没时间检查   大作文看到题目直犯愁。。。。
口语p3还pardon了两次。。。求人品爆发。。

charlottelyUID: 3284238

frankiepn 发表于 2012-11-5 00:54
听力我写错好几个单词   self-defense双写了f    seventy six脑子短路写706
阅读第二篇做的很烂
写作也是 ...

0 0 想问一下 defense和defence都对吧？我当时在这个问题上纠结了好久啊

charlottelyUID: 3284238

frankiepn 发表于 2012-11-5 00:54
听力我写错好几个单词   self-defense双写了f    seventy six脑子短路写706
阅读第二篇做的很烂
写作也是 ...

阅读第一篇我用了十几分钟 后面两篇难死我了
我估计比你做的还差
写作我各种简单词汇 小作文也没有检查
口语我这次都不抱什么希望了...

frankiepnUID: 197529

charlottely 发表于 2012-11-6 08:15
0 0 想问一下 defense和defence都对吧？我当时在这个问题上纠结了好久啊

这两个应该都对的  恭喜你。。。