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It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend?


In this hustle and bustle society, people are generally easier to get frustrated or stressed. A help hand or several encouraging words from one’s friend can relieve the sorrow and inspire the energy in one’s heart. Thus, friends are essential to everyone and choosing friends is critical to every person. From my perspective, honest is the most important quality. So I definitely think that it is possible to be completely honest with your friend.

As I said, honest is the foundation of a true friendship. If your friend always lies to you and do not sincere to you, he is not a true friend. Take myself as an example, when I was in middle school, my best friend was a girl who was very popular with high grades in every subjects. Everybody wanted to be her friend cause of her excellent grades. And I felt really special because she let me sit next to her at lunch. But whenever I tried to ask her a question about our homework, she always said that she do not know or she have not finished it. After a while I realized that she really liked telling lies to me and she never wanted to become my good friend. This really made me feel sad. As I got older, I realized that kind of friendship is poisonous and therefore I began choosing my friends more carefully.

In addition, if you are honest to your friend, you may help him or her overcome hardships but not escape. For example, my best friend Lily once had a boyfriend who is a complete double-dealer. He said quantities of sweet nothings to Lily and meanwhile to another girl. But poor Lily never found that. In consequence, I was in a dilemma. I knew that Lily loved him a lot and if I told her she maybe brokenhearted. But finally, I chose to tell her the truth cause I think that ignoring or escaping the fact is useless. Lily at last saw the reality and said that if I do not tell her she may be destroyed by her boyfriend’s lies. Anyway, be honest to your friend definitely is a better choice to help him or her accept the facts and use a right way to solve it.

Admittedly, everyone needs a space in one’s heart and do not want to tell everything to friends even the best friend. Therefore it is no big deal if you do not want to say some secrets. But most of the time, being honest to your friend has more benefits.

All in all, as I argued above, being honest is a basic requirement and can only be good if you really want to possess a true friendship.

mpromanusUID: 2565872

It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.

In this hustle and bustle (This phrase is used as a noun, not an adjective. So you can say 'the hustle and bustle (of the society)' but not 'hustle and bustle society'.) society, people are generally easier (Things are 'easy' for people to do, but you don’t describe people as being 'easy', which means they are easy to sleep with. So, 'it is easier for people to get..', but not 'people are easier to get..') to get frustrated or stressed. A helping hand or several encouraging words from one’s friend can relieve the sorrow and inspire the energy in one’s heart. Thus, friends are essential to everyone and choosing friends is critical to every person. (The question is not about the importance of friends or the importance of choosing friends. So all your long-winded introduction, except for the last sentence, is not relevant to the question.) From my perspective, honesty is the most important quality. So I definitely think that it is possible to be completely honest with your friend.(I don't see how you come to this conclusion from 'honesty is the most important quality (in choosing a friend)'. It's like saying because understanding is important you should then be able to completely understand your friend.)

As I said, honesty is the foundation of a true friendship. If your friend always lies to you and is not sincere to you, he is not a true friend. Take myself as an example: when I was in middle school, my best friend was a girl who was very popular with high grades in every subjects. Everybody wanted to be her friend because ('cause is an informal shorthand for 'because', so don't use it to replace 'because'.) of her excellent grades. And I felt really special because she let me sit next to her at lunch. But whenever I tried to ask her a question about our homework, she always said that she does not know or she has not finished it. After a while I realized that she really liked telling lies to me and she never wanted to become my good friend. This really made me feel sad. As I got older, I realized that kind of friendship is poisonous and therefore I began choosing my friends more carefully.(Yeah but you're supposed to discuss whether it is possible to be completely honest with your friend. If you read the first and last sentences of this paragraph, you'll realize what you wrote in this paragraph is completely irrelevant.)

In addition, if you are honest to your friend, you may help him or her overcome hardships but not (I think you mean 'instead of'.) escape. For example, my best friend Lily once had a boyfriend who is a complete double-dealer. He said quantities of sweet nothings to Lily and meanwhile to another girl. But poor Lily never found that out. In consequence, I was in a dilemma. I knew that Lily loved him a lot and if I told her she maybe brokenhearted ('heartbroken', not 'brokenhearted'.). But finally, I chose to tell her the truth because I think that ignoring or escaping the fact is useless. Lily at last saw the reality and said that if I do not tell her she may be destroyed by her boyfriend’s lies. Anyway, being honest to your friend definitely is a better choice to help him or her accept the facts and use a right way to solve it.(Again, if you read the first and the last sentences of this paragraph, you'll probably realize you've written a paragraph that deals with 'the benefits of being honest to your friend'..but the question is about the possibility of being completely honest to your friend. You're basically only writing about the words 'honest' and 'friend' in the question, and ignoring everything else.)

Admittedly, everyone needs a space in one’s heart and does not want to tell everything to friends even the best friend. Therefore it is no big deal if you do not want to say some secrets. But most of the time, being honest to your friend has more benefits.(This last sentence quite obviously shows you're thinking of 'benefits' of honesty in friendship, rather than what the question actually asks for.)

All in all, as I argued above, being honest is a basic requirement and can only be good if you really want to possess a true friendship.

总结：

你不幸全篇跑题哦。。题目问的是人是否能对朋友完全诚实的问题，而不是诚实的好处。。

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mpromanus 发表于 2012-11-14 04:16
It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.

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啊。。你说的太对了。。我自己根本就没意识到。。。谢谢批改啊！我反省去了！！！