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发表于 2012-12-16 16:13:18 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 Julian99 于 2013-4-6 12:31 编辑

尽管还搞不大来，但是先开个贴

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发表于 2012-12-16 16:21:00 |显示全部楼层

为什么一看到楼主的头像，我就想到少年派...
忽略我...楼主加油

双非DIY美硕申请总结

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发表于 2012-12-16 16:57:19 |显示全部楼层

12.16作业
Do you agree: Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.
Nowadays, countless entertainers and athletes have occurred. Those celebrities have to cope with all kinds of reporters and consensus. It is safe to say that they are enduring more pressure and facing more difficulties than the ordinary, and thus many of those believe they deserve more privacy. Do we have to give them the privacy? I cling that they do deserve these privacy.
The first reason is the consensus will distract them from their career. When an entertainer or an athlete spends most of their time handling reporters, how can they focus on films or games. So head-racking those reporters are that the celebrities barely have time to enhance their skills or play more roles. Why would people desire to know the gossip about those celebrities? I hold that one of the reason is they enjoy seeing those notables on the screen or the court. If they are collapsed on account of getting rid of reporters, they would never should on the screen or court any more.
Moreover, everybody want to spend his leisure time with their families or lovers. The more pressure they endure while working, the more time they are supposed to spend in relaxing. Not only can it help you to absorb in the events you enjoy, but it also help you change your mind. What if they people have to spend time being on guard against other people who will destroy the relaxing plans? The relaxing will not work. Nowhere is the significance of relaxing without distraction more evident than in my own experience. In general, I hang out with couple of friend together with me at weekends. If I am aware of that a classmate I do not care for is near me, I will hardly absorb in what I am doing. Therefore, it is easy to say during the process of relaxing, rarely anything is more essential than doing this without distraction.
Crucial though privacy is for the celebrities, there do are some advantages of discussing the gossip those notables. Entertainment is one of the reason we care for those celebrities. Gossiping is among the way to entertain ourselves as well, and thus for the ordinary of us, it seems acceptable not giving privacy to the famous.

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okqishi 发表于 2012-12-16 16:21
为什么一看到楼主的头像，我就想到少年派...
忽略我...楼主加油

其实我也是看了少年派才知道meerkat这种生物的

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Do you agree: Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.
Nowadays, countless entertainers and athletes have occurred. Those celebrities have to cope with all kinds of reporters and consensus. It is safe to say that they are enduring more pressure and facing more difficulties than the ordinary, and thus many of those believe they deserve more privacy. Do we have to give them the privacy? I cling that they do deserve these privacy.
The first reason is the consensus will distract them from their career. When an entertainer or an athlete spends most of their time handling reporters, how can they focus on films or games. So head-racking those reporters are that the celebrities barely have time to enhance their skills or play more roles. Why would people desire to know the gossip about those celebrities? I hold that one of the reason is they enjoy seeing those notables on the screen or the court. If they are collapsed on account of getting rid of reporters, they would never should on the screen or court any more.
Moreover, everybody want to spend his leisure time with their families or lovers. The more pressure they endure while working, the more time they are supposed to spend in relaxing. Not only can it help you to absorb in the events you enjoy, but it also help you change your mind. What if they people have to spend time being on guard against other people who will destroy the relaxing plans? The relaxing will not work. Nowhere is the significance of relaxing without distraction more evident than in my own experience. In general, I hang out with couple of friend together with me at weekends. If I am aware of that a classmate I do not care for is near me, I will hardly absorb in what I am doing. Therefore, it is easy to say during the process of relaxing, rarely anything is more essential than doing this without distraction.
Crucial though privacy is for the celebrities, there do are some advantages of discussing the gossip those notables. Entertainment is one of the reason we care for those celebrities. Gossiping is among the way to entertain ourselves as well, and thus for the ordinary of us, it seems acceptable not giving privacy to the famous.

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