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发表于 2013-2-16 10:04:11 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-2-16 12:26:05 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-2-16 23:03:16 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  
It is better to choose a university whose graduates have good job opportunities than a university who
has famous professors.  

Recently, there has been a controversial debated by a lot of people about whether students are supposed to choose college providing good job chances or those having renowned professors. I tend to think that a university offering job opportunities has positive effect on people’ s lives.

The primary cause is that choosing a university relating with job field is more practical. Although possessing of excellent teachers is the vital factor for university, a high percentage of unemployment can not be neglected. What is meant by this is that a number of students cannot find appropriate job after graduating owing to fierce competition in modern society. Therefore, those school having good job opportunities seem to be more attractive and prevailing. A case in point is that students now, in particular in America, are more willing to select those college offering internship which provide students with job position after graduation rather than those only focusing on academic research.

Another reason should be emphasized is that choosing a university providing good job chances could enrich our job experience. It is certainly true that why so many graduated students don’t find a suitable job since they lack of working experience. As we all know, having at least three years working experience is the prerequisite in most of workplaces. Therefore, those students having enrich experience are very popular. So, choosing those college offering some activities relating with your major is of importance for the people’s life in the future. A case example is the ZhongShan university, the most famous university in the south China, providing students with part-time job relating to their major during studying is their outstanding feature and almost all the students are able to get a job after graduation.

In conclusion, choosing a university providing job opportunities will be a trend for people.

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发表于 2013-2-16 23:04:36 |显示全部楼层
Tasha007 发表于 2013-2-16 23:03
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  
It is better to choose a university whose  ...

2.16+独立+https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496826-1-1.html

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发表于 2013-2-17 16:38:43 |显示全部楼层
Tasha007 发表于 2013-2-16 23:03
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  
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文章已修改~~ 2.16c.doc (22 KB, 下载次数: 9)

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发表于 2013-2-17 18:07:04 |显示全部楼层
melo8412 发表于 2013-2-17 16:38
文章已修改~~

谢谢你的修改,语法一直是我的弱项,你的作文我找不到

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发表于 2013-2-17 19:48:09 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-2-17 20:06:29 |显示全部楼层
谢谢你的批改,很久没写作文,结构上的细节很多没注意到,所以我很仔细的看了你说的关于结构上的问题,包括说理,很受教,一会写独立的时候我会注意的。再次感谢

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发表于 2013-2-18 06:01:14 |显示全部楼层
Tasha007 发表于 2013-2-17 18:07
谢谢你的修改,语法一直是我的弱项,你的作文我找不到

我的作文找不到吗?还是我改的你的作文找不到呢?

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发表于 2013-2-18 10:34:31 |显示全部楼层
melo8412 发表于 2013-2-18 06:01
我的作文找不到吗?还是我改的你的作文找不到呢?

已经修改了,嘿嘿

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发表于 2013-2-18 10:35:28 |显示全部楼层
-A猫 发表于 2013-2-17 20:06
谢谢你的批改,很久没写作文,结构上的细节很多没注意到,所以我很仔细的看了你说的关于结构上的问题,包括 ...

不用谢,互相勉励:lol:victory:

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发表于 2013-3-2 13:23:09 |显示全部楼层
3月1号作业补上

people take place (6).doc

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发表于 2013-3-2 15:21:38 |显示全部楼层
Tasha007 发表于 2013-3-2 13:23
3月1号作业补上

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发表于 2013-3-2 16:34:12 |显示全部楼层
谢谢你,我再好好想想观点

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发表于 2013-3-2 16:35:33 |显示全部楼层
frozensmile 发表于 2013-3-2 15:21

谢谢你,我再好好理解一下题目观点

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