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题目：在家工作好，还是去公司工作好？（机经）
作文内容：
    With the advance of modern technology, a great many people may choose to telecommute. From the perspective of the employee, indeed, this gives them more freedom and offers a flexible arrangement. On the other side, from the perspective of most employer, it is not advisable to loose the workers entirely, which to great extent will cause severe problems.
      First of all, since there is not a strict schedule every day and employees are easy to affect by other personal affairs, the whole company will operate less efficiently. Some women might do chores like babysitting during the work time, or some young men might get up late to start work. Consequently, a task that actually could be accomplished in one day will be put off for a couple of days.
     Another adverse effect is that employees lose frequent contact with each other. As we all know, there are some difficult projects that need to be completed by a group of people. If these people all work at home, it seems less possible for collaboration. Although some people counter that employees could discuss the issue through the Internet, yet it requires more time to explain clearly one’s own idea and reach a final agreement.
     Except that employees lost contact with their coworkers, they also lose opportunities to meet clients from all walks of life. Because they may not receive the feedback from the clients especially some potential one, it makes more difficult for them to correct their mistakes. Additionally, among these clients, most of them may be a manager in a big company. If the worker’s capability is seen in their own eyes, getting promoted or taking a job hop is not a big story.
     In conclusion, given the efficiency, the opportunity for collaboration and promotion, going to work in the company instead of at home, I believe, is a much better choice.

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先说声抱歉，之前没有留意规则，这篇是自己写的，不是规定的题目，也没有用word上传，和我一组的两位谅解一下~~~

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已改，加油

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3.7

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一起加油哦 3.7-enid rivised by stancy.doc (31.5 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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加油！

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补交昨天的

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今天的

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已改，学习了

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题目:Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.

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enid317 发表于 2013-3-12 12:05
今天的

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