【独立写作】我爱吃芒果作业贴

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Giant shopping malls with nearly all kinds of daily necessaries,considerate and well-equipped social
services,comfortable and white collar work with  high salaries.Decorated with all these standard symbols of modern
life,cities seems to be an ideal place to live in.However,I think,just as recently surveyed,people residing in
under-developed regions--small villages feel more content.Ironically,isn't it?Further explanation is discussed
below.
       Created by nature,human tends to live under a clean and natural environment.Cities,however,just violates
such natural characters.Obviously,urban areas tended to stuck in the problem of over population.To satisfy the
basic needs of so many people is not an easy thing.People need  enough food to survive;people need enough
energy,say,oil to keep their routine life going well.All these human activities bring about enormous stress on the
environment and it is unavoidably to be polluted.No urban citizens can enjoy the beauty of pure nature.Contrast to
that,people in small villages never cared about the potential harms accompanied by pollution.Fewer people means
less stress on the environment.The air remains as fresh as it has always been.People do not have to drink water
purified by chemical methods. How compelling it is to live in such pleasant place!
        Regardless of the pollution troubles,urbanites never run out of a reason to be nervous.Choosing urban life
style means that you need to lead a fast-paced and tense life.People have to strive for a promotion.Forced by the
arranged assignment by their boss,white-collars have to work without stop.What's more,scarcity of enough space
equally tight our nerves.City dweller have to bear the sufferings from excessively crowded spaces,surrounded by
monster-like modern buildings made out of cements and glaring glasses.A glance at the public subway will make it
quite clear.While,village-life consist of a spacious house and the freedom to work as your pleases.No wonder people
living in small villages are more satisfied.
        In fact,it is the care of human's freedom and inner-being small villages provide that makes people feel
better,even it is less developed in the aspect of modernization.

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三月二十by我爱吃芒果.doc (16.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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3.17的哦

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加油~

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一起加油哈 17 改.doc (29.5 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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stancy_zhang 发表于 2013-3-18 19:54
一起加油哈

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谢谢芒果同学的修改，天知道我为什么用了那么多个safety。。。我也不知道啊啊啊啊。。。。内容的话其实很多没有展开，因为这几次是看时间写的，所以都有些来不及，就不展开了，继续练习吧。
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加油

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stancy_zhang 发表于 2013-3-19 19:44
谢谢芒果同学的修改，天知道我为什么用了那么多个safety。。。我也不知道啊啊啊啊。。。。内容的话其实很多 ...

展开写确实很费时间啊

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一起努力！ 三月十九号by我爱吃芒果 revised by 永远的乌托邦.doc (20 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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搞定~ 3.19 revised by Houjiang.doc (27 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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改好了。。 三月二十by我爱吃芒果.doc (28 KB, 下载次数: 0)

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改好啦~ 三月二十by我爱吃芒果改.doc (27 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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buyadeid 发表于 2013-3-21 22:17
改好了。。

看了几个例句albeit可能后面不接句子吧，都是名词 定语 形容词 神马的

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buyadeid 发表于 2013-3-21 22:59
看了几个例句albeit可能后面不接句子吧，都是名词 定语 形容词 神马的

我不知道啊，没用过这个单词啊翻词典的时候没看例句。。。