Of Things Untold-------My Own story

poohUID: 146994

Of Things  Untold

Evaporate  with you
Are the things untold.
Of things untold,
They seem slide into memories,
Trickling ,as gentle as whispers .

You still remember that night?
We were heros of romantic story,
Albeit never know how to act
You and me did perfect in our own play.
My whisper caressed you ,
Telling the things untold  any more...
Not a word you have to tell
I've already read from your shining eyes.

Until the last time we met,
I still know the words untold by you.
And It is the words that
Soften me to lean on you
Drowning myself into your arms
With tears flooding away
Though I  tried to hide them
You tenderly swept them away.
Gone were the misunstandings.
We both found our homes
Where we 've sure we belong.

A war broke through the line
Bring with a coma and
A sentence to death.
We've both left behind the things untold .
Where have they gone?
They are diving deep down my soul.
So the same with you?
Even though, I 've known
Those in you will not awaken up any more
What I can do then
Is to intoxicate myself into numbness too...
From time to tme
I'll forget the things untold:
"I love you" though.

poohUID: 146994

最近看了很多poem所以有创作的冲动，不过写的很l,  看了的给个评价嘛，呵呵

LeapToDeathUID: 137355

挺好的。原谅我并不会用太多的词语表达。

poohUID: 146994

LeapToDeath真好，谢谢你的support. 我最近要考试比较忙，很久没去音乐版了，等我考完了再去灌吧，^o^
不知道大家能不能看得懂呢，单词都很简单，就是有点乱，还有很多错误，汗……