Never mind!(Someone suggests me get out of Chinese the last day before taking the exame though I feel it is strange and zhuangX= =..)
" Prefer" can be used as "prefer do sth rather than doing/do sth", but I wrote in wrong way, anyway..
"Weight" should be "Weigh" and I think it means the object is regarded valueble; "consequence" can convey the meaning of "importance". You can also find synonyms in the website of Merriam-Webster http://www.merriam-webster.com/thesaurus/consequence under the item of "Thesaurus".
- - When I read all the comments, I find that is tender enough
Well, "tide" is a wrong word, I meant to write something like "connection".. "Advance" is wrong as well.
I totally agree with the comment on "former/later", it is confusing, indeed!
"special term professors"--learn from Youdao= =, I wrote "honorned professors" in original version.
I think this essay lacks specific examples.. I should work on that.
Thank you, man!!!!